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Ruled by Intellect or Emotion? Tips on Word Choice #14

[image error] Distribution of Wealth in Europe in the Year 2000 (Photo credit: Wikipedia)Some words/phrases can induce fairly specific responses in readers. As writers, we all know this, but do we use the power of emotion in our work?
For these few weeks, I’m looking at something subjective: how to choose between emotional and intellectual words for effect. You won’t always agree with me, of course; you’re writers. But, hopefully, my suggestions will get the thought processes going.
In this series I’m looking at the difference between words that seem intellectual as opposed to those that evoke a more emotional response. How you use them is obviously up to you. The point is that the alternatives have the same, or very similar, meanings, but their effect upon the reader can be markedly different. I’ve made some suggestions here, but I’m sure you can think of others.
Intellectual: ConstructEmotional: Build
‘It is our intention to construct the largest and most all-encompassing complex for retail business that we are able to, without having to employ too much in political bribes.’
‘We’re going to build more and more houses on brown field sites, mostly as starter homes.’
Intellectual: DiminutiveEmotional: Small
‘I fear that Lucy is too diminutive to be taken seriously by those who really matter in terms of power.’
‘Lucy’s so small and charming, she’s bound to win their hearts.’
Intellectual: PerhapsEmotional: Maybe
‘Decreasing the wealth gap is, perhaps, beneficial to society as a whole, but it would render the rich less powerful and must therefore be avoided.’

‘Maybe the best way to bring a bit more equality to society is to look at what would happen if certain jobs weren’t done.’

Writing and Running for ME/CFS #11

[image error] Image of a modern fountain pen writing in cursive script. (Photo credit: Wikipedia)Running: The training programme was for a 10 minute run on Monday and Thursday and a 15 minute run on Saturday. Monday was fine. Thursday, I was far from home, visiting my brother prior to his admission to hospital, which has come up rather sooner than we all expected. But Saturday saw me legging it along the local roads for the required 15 minutes. So, still on track. Mind you, it was pretty cold out there. No longer just the shorts and t-shirt, but the track suit for this one.

Writing: Still curating the diary entries. But I am making progress on this. It's just taking longer than i expected. Much of the stuff in the diaries will be useful only for reference when I start to write the chapters, but some will be able to be incorporated in the book. Before I can decide, however, I need to reduce the sheer amount of text, and that's what I'm engaged on at present. No matter, we'll get there. If I've learned one thing from 10 years of ME/CFS it's the value of patience!

Write. Publish. Repeat, by Sean Platt and Johnny B. Truant, Reviewed.

I downloaded this book as part of a package of 3, offered for a very silly price, by which I mean, cheap, very cheap!
It’s the best few pence I’ve ever spent. I’d have happily paid a hundred times more. This is the first book in the package and it speaks to me. Oh, how it speaks to me. All the way through, as I read, I was saying (sometimes aloud, to the annoyance of my patient and wonderful wife) ‘Yes! Of course!’.
These two guys are on my wavelength. They understand what it’s like to be a pantster who refuses to be bound by genre. But they also understand that writers need to be disciplined and to have a business head to deal with writing in the modern world. I have long struggled with the concept and act of marketing and promotion. It is foreign to my nature. I am suspicious of salesmen and marketers, considering them a bunch of exploitation merchants with morals that would make a sewer rat look like a saint. What these authors do in this book is to debunk our preconceived ideas of marketing and promotion. They explain, in a friendly, chatty and frank style, the reality of writing and getting your words before the reading public.
They understand that the story choses the genre; a phrase I’ve used for years. They get that writers who see themselves as artists are okay to do that. But they also understand that we, the writers, the creators of stories, need to earn some income in order to continue with our craft. Starving in the garret is not necessary. Hiding your light under a bush is not helpful to your readers.
What these guys do, in an entertaining, informed, educational and inspiring way, is enable you, as an artist, to separate your creative self from your business self and start to actually sell you books, and to do so without compromising your ethics or your idea of yourself as a writer.
I do have a complaint about the book. It is this. It should have been written twenty years ago, when I first started writing seriously. It’s no good trying to excuse the lack or delay by complaining that self-publishing was all but non-existent then, or that digital publishing was no more than a scifi dream. If this book had been around then, I’d be a wealthy writer by now, with a string of bestsellers to my name. Give me time, and, armed with the advice in this book, I’ll become that writer.

So, I have to just say, ‘Thank You’ to Sean Platt and Johnny B. Truant for their insight, their openness, their extraordinary candour and their simple ability to express these vital lessons in words that sing to me. If you’re a writer who has struggled to get your name and work noticed, this is the book for you. If you have ever self-published and thought maybe your books could do better, this book is for you. If you’ve ever thought maybe you could write a book and publish it yourself, this book is for you. Buy it. You’ve missed out on the initial insanely cheap introductory offer, but if I were you, I’d pay ten times the current price. Read it. Follow the advice. I certainly will. I heartily recommend it to all struggling writers.

5 Star Review for Partings.

Partings is now available in print form. We’re still waiting for Amazon to connect the digital and print versions, but you can still buy it either from your local Amazon store by clicking here. Or direct from Fantastic BooksPublishing by clicking here.
And, after a long wait, I’ve finally got a review of the book. Here it is. For those who’ve read either of the books so far published, I’d really appreciate your review, regardless of what you have to say. All reviews help both the author and other readers. Thank you.
Love it, an enjoyable story with interesting characters., 29 Sep 2014By  MR David TW Hughes  - See all my reviewsVerified Purchase(What is this?)This review is from: Partings (A Seared Sky Book 2) (Kindle Edition)
The second installment of this fascinating series carries on where "Joinings" left off but introduces a lot of new characters for the second part of the journey. All the characters are interesting and are continuing to develop. Unlike many fantasy novels, where the focus is on the journey and the lore, "A Seared Sky" isn't afraid to let the character drive the story and undergo significant change along the way.

Highly recommended for adults everywhere, but don't leave it somewhere the kids can find it - unless you don't mind questions like "daddy, what does 'prodding a fern" mean? ;-)
Author's note on the above - 'fern' is a local euphemism for a part of the female anatomy; local to the characters in the series, that is.

Ruled by Intellect or Emotion? Tips on Word Choice #13

[image error] English: Foreign secretary William Hague and Chancellor George Osborne look on as U.S. President Barack Obama addresses Parliament on 25 May 2011. (Photo credit: Wikipedia)Some words/phrases can induce fairly specific responses in readers. As writers, we all know this, but do we use the power of emotion in our work?
For these few weeks, I’m looking at something subjective: how to choose between emotional and intellectual words for effect. You won’t always agree with me, of course; you’re writers. But, hopefully, my suggestions will get the thought processes going.
In this series I’m looking at the difference between words that seem intellectual as opposed to those that evoke a more emotional response. How you use them is obviously up to you. The point is that the alternatives have the same, or very similar, meanings, but their effect upon the reader can be markedly different. I’ve made some suggestions here, but I’m sure you can think of others.
Intellectual: CompletedEmotional: Finished
The project was completed within three weeks, to the complete satisfaction of the client.
‘I tell you, John; I’m finished with you: completely finished!’
Intellectual: FacilitateEmotional: Ease
‘As independent marketers, we facilitate the promotion and sales of your products, but only for a huge share of your profits.’
‘I can ease you into the right position,’ he said, lowering her to the bed.
Intellectual: Humorous, AmusingEmotional: Funny
‘Your report on the economy was highly amusing, George. But the only responses you’ll receive will be either stark disbelief or downright condemnation.’

‘That, George, was bloody funny. Had me laughing, all the way to the bank.’Related articles [image error] Ruled by Intellect or Emotion? Tips on Word Choice #10

Writing and Running for ME/CFS #10

[image error] 26 miles never looked so fun Image is cropped and modified. (Photo credit: Wikipedia)Running:
Disaster! I injured my back a couple of weeks ago; probably to do with preparing to move house and lifting something awkwardly. Anyway, the pain had subsided and I decided to carry on with the running last week. This week, however, the pain returned with a vengeance, so I was unable to run at all. Did manage a few short walks and, today, managed a 3 mile walk with my lovely wife. So, next week, I should be fine again.

Writing:
The preparation of the book continues. I'm still sorting through the many diary entries. Got through a good number so far and I'm working forward through the recorded years. It's a slow process, filtering out the irrelevant from the text. It also brings old memories back to the surface, some of which I had completely forgotten. But it's an essential part of the preparation if I'm to tell as true a tale as possible.  So, bear with me, I'll get there eventually.

The house move has been a real eater of time and energy and I'll be so glad when we're finally settled in our new home and life can return to something approaching normal. Or as normal as it ever gets for us!

A Couple of Nonfiction Pieces in Print.

Generally, I write fiction: it satisfies my imagination. But, currently, I’m preparing a nonfiction book to describe my experiences of ME/CFS in order to help sufferers and their helpers. Along the way, I’ve ventured into some short nonfiction pieces for publications. And, I suppose, most of my blog posts here and the stuff I’ve placed on ReadWave is nonfiction. I’m a writer, and I let the piece choose the genre.
It’s always satisfying to have work published, no matter how brief and transitory it may be. This week, I had a short piece of personal memoir published in a local daily newspaper, The Yorkshire Post. It was an observation on regional stereotypes presented in humorous form. And it’s a piece for which I’ll be paid, which is a nice bonus. Also this week I’ve had a short article published in the major UK  Writing Magazine, a monthly publication, that has a section for subscribers to tell the world their news. I wrote a piece on my great experience at Fantasticon 2014 and it’s now appeared in the current issue (January 2015).
Both of these short features have put my name, and in the case of the writing mag, my website address, in front of a wider readership. There’s the possibility that readers of the journals may investigate further and I may, as result, gain new readers for my fiction.

So, if you generally confine your activity to fiction only, perhaps you might consider the occasional foray into journalism. These publications certainly cheered up an otherwise stressful week for me. Have a go. What have you to lose?

This Time Forever, by Linda Swift, Reviewed.

This American Civil War romance does much that genre readers will expect of it. I was introduced to it by a friend of a writing friend who knows of my interest in the romance genre. It is clearly written with a female readership in mind, and I have no argument with that.

The central romance runs the course of hope, challenge, new hope, further challenge, etc. But it does it well, with some fairly detailed history of the times it presents. I suspect US readers will find it more familiar, since it’s a part of their history. For me, as a Brit, there were odd references that were obscure, and some geographical aspects that had little meaning. But these didn’t detract from the story and didn’t interrupt the flow. Pacing is good, as is the use of language.
The characters, always a vital aspect of any story for me, are well drawn. They have their faults and their positive qualities, and none is a caricature or stereotype. The different attitudes of both sides in the war are well expressed, and, as should be expected in our more enlightened times, the evils of slavery are depicted in subtle but definite ways. Certainly, the right wing, greedy, and abusive way of life of those in the Confederacy are demonstrated, but these are not thrust down the reader’s throat.
The story moves well, slowing for the romance, speeding up for the action. There is a good deal of tension between both family members and the main protagonists. Evil and good are well represented as are loyalty and betrayal. Love, of course, is given a good ride and drives much of the action in the story, as it should. The author has managed to get inside the contemporary religious hang-ups of the age, describing the mistaken guilt and hypocritical judgment that would have been common at the time.

In spite of a slightly slow start, the story develops a good pace as the action progresses and conflicts rise to the surface. This is a good read and one of the better examples of the romance genre. I enjoyed it and found I was eager to reach the denouement and the satisfactory conclusion. Recommended.Related articles [image error] Watch The American Civil War As It Rages Across Four Agonizing Years

Ruled by Intellect or Emotion? Tips on Word Choice #12

[image error] English: So many words to keep track of!. (Photo credit: Wikipedia)Some words/phrases can induce fairly specific responses in readers. As writers, we all know this, but do we use the power of emotion in our work?
For these few weeks, I’m looking at something subjective: how to choose between emotional and intellectual words for effect. You won’t always agree with me, of course; you’re writers. But, hopefully, my suggestions will get the thought processes going.
In this series I’m looking at the difference between words that seem intellectual as opposed to those that evoke a more emotional response. How you use them is obviously up to you. The point is that the alternatives have the same, or very similar, meanings, but their effect upon the reader can be markedly different. I’ve made some suggestions here, but I’m sure you can think of others.
Intellectual: At An EndEmotional: Over
‘The tour of the museum is now at an end; we hope you have enjoyed your visit.’
‘It’s over. What else is there to say? We’re finished. Sorry.’
Intellectual: DemiseEmotional: Death
‘It is with great sorrow that I must announce the demise of our esteemed leader. He died in his sleep last night.’
‘God, that metaphor’s been done to death. Find a new one!’
Intellectual: I RegretEmotional: I’m Sorry
‘I regret to inform you that your luggage has been sent in error to Helsinki. We will endeavour to have it returned to your airport of arrival at Wellington as soon as we are able. Have a nice stay.’

‘I’m sorry, but there’s no more left. You’ve had the lot.’

Writing and Running for ME/CFS #9

[image error] P writing blue (Photo credit: Wikipedia)Is it really only 9 weeks since I started this?

Writing:
The book is progressing. I managed to preserve all the dates of the diary entries ( a long job, but necessary). And I have now started the selection process. This will be another longish job as I have over 200 pages of diary entries and each one has to be read to detect anything of relevance or value to the book. Still, we're getting there. Allowing my subconscious to work on possible covers at present, and toying with some title options. I'll put some of these out shortly, to see what you think of them.

Running:
In spite of the back injury (which is still niggling a little) I managed my programme of 3 runs this week. That's 2 at 10 minutes each and one at 20 minutes. To think it took me all my energy to walk 100 yards at the height of the ME/CFS, and here I am running again! It's fantastic, and I hope it gives some encouragement to all those who are still suffering with the condition. Hoping the back will allow me to do the 15 minute run I'm due tomorrow. See how I feel in the morning.

So, still on track, though the house move is definitely a bind. Be very glad when all is finalised and we're in the new home so I can concentrate on what really matters again.
Related articles [image error] Writing and Running for ME/CFS #7