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January 26, 2025
Take Her On Review
Take Her is another slice-of-life, considerate, sweet by Emily Wright. Also, steamy. Very, very steamy some creative ways. Like her other works, Wright crafts a relatable story with down-to-earth, lovable characters you feel known your whole life. Maya and Jamie have some difficulty growing as they face the inevitable changes that come with age. The way the author built the tension between them, from field rivals to cheesy duet singers, was fabulous. With insulting banter that made cackle and “awwww” throughout the whole, Maya and Jamie come a long way together. Learning to embrace change (and each other) isn all that bad.
January 24, 2025
Auctioned To The Vampire
Nemera faces a tough life after her husband leaves her with debt. She finds room and works in a brothel called the "House Obscurities," where she discovers that not is as it seems, and she earns extra money by offering her blood to a vampire Rowan, a new vampire, is set to be auctioned. His captor is confident he will fetch a good price because he a V with glow-the-dark skin and a unique bite.
"She was decadent. She, the star, engulfed him in light. She was warmth."
I loved this story and really had to be on the edge. I read this with a deeper meaning, not just the fantasy aspect; it was intended due to the slavery aspect.
Nemera is such a character. Despite a challenging past, she does not stop fighting for what she believes is right. But what will it cost her?
I would have finished this in one sitting if it hadn't been for my adult responsibilities. It's fast-paced, with good development, an engaging plot, passionate action, and frustration.
Well done on a great book.
" Auctioned to the Vampire" is a prologue novella to "Kissed by a Demon." I loved that Arabella part of this story.
"She was decadent. She, the star, engulfed him in light. She was warmth."
I loved this story and really had to be on the edge. I read this with a deeper meaning, not just the fantasy aspect; it was intended due to the slavery aspect.
Nemera is such a character. Despite a challenging past, she does not stop fighting for what she believes is right. But what will it cost her?
I would have finished this in one sitting if it hadn't been for my adult responsibilities. It's fast-paced, with good development, an engaging plot, passionate action, and frustration.
Well done on a great book.
" Auctioned to the Vampire" is a prologue novella to "Kissed by a Demon." I loved that Arabella part of this story.
Billy Summers by Stephen King
Many readers who approached this book with broad-minded expectations have been quite disappointed.
While it is readable, the split into parts does not help; the story within the story, which could have been a brilliant ploy, has not fully succeeded.
The beginning suggests a multiplication of the protagonist's personality, but this is soon abandoned. The secondary characters are kept too far from the background, and some sections are very "American" and even respectable.
The second part of the novel is more, but the event dynamics are weak, hasty, and poorly executed despite the length of the pages.
While it is readable, the split into parts does not help; the story within the story, which could have been a brilliant ploy, has not fully succeeded.
The beginning suggests a multiplication of the protagonist's personality, but this is soon abandoned. The secondary characters are kept too far from the background, and some sections are very "American" and even respectable.
The second part of the novel is more, but the event dynamics are weak, hasty, and poorly executed despite the length of the pages.
January 19, 2025
Her Spell That Binds Me
I thoroughly enjoyed reading the story of Ariadne and Iona. The sex scenes were hot, and the plot was engaging, keeping me hooked throughout. I'm not someone who usually notices punctuation or grammar unless it's really bad, and I didn't have any issues here. The world-building was fantastic, and I'm curious to learn more about some of the side characters. I got the sense that this could be a series, but it wraps up nicely as a standalone, so I'm not left hanging if it isn't. The little displays of jealousy within the relationship added tension to the ultimate buildup. The character and setting descriptions were spot on; I felt like I could "see" everything clearly. I'm sure I'll be rere this, and if you like, lesbians, sex, secrets, with a bit of rivalry thrown in, you'll enjoy it too.
January 18, 2025
Batman Resurrection
Tim Burton's Batman fans undoubtedly recognize Batman (1989) and its sequel Batman Returns as perhaps the greatest superhero renditions of all time.
With a stellar cast including Keaton, Basinger, and of course, Nicholson, the characters were brought to life magnificently. John Jackson Miller took on the unenvied task of writing a follow-up novel set between the two films. Many writers would shy away from such a challenge, but Miller has successfully captured the essence of Burton, the characteristics of Keaton, and every nuance that made these films and this universe so successful.
Without giving away any spoilers, Batman fans will recognize the names Basil Karlo and Selina Kyle. Both characters, along with other familiar faces, make appearances in the novel.
This is, without a doubt, the best novel featuring Batman you will ever read. The dust jacket is beautiful, and the story is convincing, compelling, and oh-so Tim Burton!
With a stellar cast including Keaton, Basinger, and of course, Nicholson, the characters were brought to life magnificently. John Jackson Miller took on the unenvied task of writing a follow-up novel set between the two films. Many writers would shy away from such a challenge, but Miller has successfully captured the essence of Burton, the characteristics of Keaton, and every nuance that made these films and this universe so successful.
Without giving away any spoilers, Batman fans will recognize the names Basil Karlo and Selina Kyle. Both characters, along with other familiar faces, make appearances in the novel.
This is, without a doubt, the best novel featuring Batman you will ever read. The dust jacket is beautiful, and the story is convincing, compelling, and oh-so Tim Burton!
About Last Night
This is an incredibly "one night stand to forever?" romance featuring Audrey and Toni, two very attractively written main. They first after Audrey very publicly breaks up with her cheating, manipulative, and emotionally long-term girlfriend.
The description of their first time together is a wonderfully written of chapters early on in book. Kudos to the author for creating such a realistic and super sexy scene—one of the best intimate scenes of sapp romantic fiction I've ever read.
The rest of the story mainly revolves around the pair reconnecting in a workplace environment, which means they have to try and keep their distance maintain a professional attitude toward each other, all the while desperately longing to in the bedroom rather than the boardroom.
There is a communication breakdown resulting in a frustrating disconnection between the main characters for a while, and an unresolved situation between characters Willa and Greta, each a sister to the main characters that needs to be explored further—hopefully in a sequel? Those minor quibbles aside, a grand gesture ending means we do get to see the main characters back in each other's arms, although whether it's forever remains somewhat unclear. Definitely need a sequel.
The description of their first time together is a wonderfully written of chapters early on in book. Kudos to the author for creating such a realistic and super sexy scene—one of the best intimate scenes of sapp romantic fiction I've ever read.
The rest of the story mainly revolves around the pair reconnecting in a workplace environment, which means they have to try and keep their distance maintain a professional attitude toward each other, all the while desperately longing to in the bedroom rather than the boardroom.
There is a communication breakdown resulting in a frustrating disconnection between the main characters for a while, and an unresolved situation between characters Willa and Greta, each a sister to the main characters that needs to be explored further—hopefully in a sequel? Those minor quibbles aside, a grand gesture ending means we do get to see the main characters back in each other's arms, although whether it's forever remains somewhat unclear. Definitely need a sequel.
January 17, 2025
Needful Things Review
Stephen King is a very good author of horror fiction; perhaps the best horror writer of all time, depending on your of view., he have annoying quirk of having fantastically thought-out plots, imaginative settings, engaging characters, then ruining them with limp endings that don't live to the readers' expectations.
premise offul Things is remarkably simple and a new take on the "making deal with the devil" scenario. Leland Gaunt, a seemingly demonic being, is the charming charismatic proprietor of the new store, Needful Things, which has everybody talking. The store seems to sell something for everyone in town, and at a very affordable price too,... there's a catch; if you the item, your Needful, badly enough, you have to make an additional of a little prank Gaunt seems to know and exploit the various townspeople'sices one another, and before you know it, tensions have reached a boiling point.
For me, the ending far too abrupt, limited to a few pages for one of the best of the modern age, frankly. However, having read It, I've noticed this seems to be a regular for King - interest reaches fever pitch you end up underwhelmed. Having said that, though, I really felt spooked by the ending of Pet Sematary.
premise offul Things is remarkably simple and a new take on the "making deal with the devil" scenario. Leland Gaunt, a seemingly demonic being, is the charming charismatic proprietor of the new store, Needful Things, which has everybody talking. The store seems to sell something for everyone in town, and at a very affordable price too,... there's a catch; if you the item, your Needful, badly enough, you have to make an additional of a little prank Gaunt seems to know and exploit the various townspeople'sices one another, and before you know it, tensions have reached a boiling point.
For me, the ending far too abrupt, limited to a few pages for one of the best of the modern age, frankly. However, having read It, I've noticed this seems to be a regular for King - interest reaches fever pitch you end up underwhelmed. Having said that, though, I really felt spooked by the ending of Pet Sematary.
The Saint In London Review
This is the 13th installment in the Saint series, and like the previous books, this is a compilation of three novellas that originally appeared in magazines. These stories date to the early 1930, which readers need to keep in mind to understand some of the references to the then-current events.
In the first story, Simon once again encounters the arch-villain Rayt Marius, perhaps for the final time. Marius has been told he has only a short time left to live and has decided to take Simon with him. He sends his memoirs to Simon, detailing his exploits and naming names. He has also his former cohorts mentioned in the book that Templar has evidence against them, leaving Simon with the challenge of living long enough to finish the book.
The second story involves Simon infiltrating the enemy's camp in disguise to a damsel in distress, needing to fight not a dragon but panther to the day, and incidentally once infuriating Inspector Teal.
The final story involves Simon suffering from his own fame. A copycat has begun leaving behind Simon's apparently well-known calling card, leading the police to assume that Simon has been quite busy.
Readers need to keep in that these stories are about 80 years old to understand the 'current event' references the technology of the thirties, and the attitudes of that time. When these stories were written, the character of Hoppy, Simon's sidekick, was seen as a harmless stooge meant to provide some needed muscle and comic relief. In today's more politically correct times, readers might see Simon's relationship with Hoppy not as evidence of Simon's good-natured tolerance but as cold-hearted exploitation of a mentally handicapped man with a drinking problem.
If the reader can get past these holdovers from the past and simply enjoy the story for what it is - a great adventure where there is never any real question as to whether or not our hero will not prevail.
In the first story, Simon once again encounters the arch-villain Rayt Marius, perhaps for the final time. Marius has been told he has only a short time left to live and has decided to take Simon with him. He sends his memoirs to Simon, detailing his exploits and naming names. He has also his former cohorts mentioned in the book that Templar has evidence against them, leaving Simon with the challenge of living long enough to finish the book.
The second story involves Simon infiltrating the enemy's camp in disguise to a damsel in distress, needing to fight not a dragon but panther to the day, and incidentally once infuriating Inspector Teal.
The final story involves Simon suffering from his own fame. A copycat has begun leaving behind Simon's apparently well-known calling card, leading the police to assume that Simon has been quite busy.
Readers need to keep in that these stories are about 80 years old to understand the 'current event' references the technology of the thirties, and the attitudes of that time. When these stories were written, the character of Hoppy, Simon's sidekick, was seen as a harmless stooge meant to provide some needed muscle and comic relief. In today's more politically correct times, readers might see Simon's relationship with Hoppy not as evidence of Simon's good-natured tolerance but as cold-hearted exploitation of a mentally handicapped man with a drinking problem.
If the reader can get past these holdovers from the past and simply enjoy the story for what it is - a great adventure where there is never any real question as to whether or not our hero will not prevail.
Skinny Dipping
The iron gates of St. Augustine’s Academy loomed high above Tracy Shaw, their black bars gleaming in the late afternoon sun. She clutched the strap of her worn backpack, her stomach tightening as the gates creaked open. A tall, angular woman in a crisp navy skirt suit stood waiting just beyond them. Her sharp heels clicked against the cobblestones as she approached, her pale blue eyes raking over Tracy with a look of barely concealed distaste.
“You must be Miss Shaw,” the woman said, her voice clipped and precise. She extended a thin hand, which Tracy shook hesitantly. The woman’s grip was ice cold. “I’m Miss Beatrix Everly, the dorm mistress. I’ll be overseeing your stay here at St. Augustine’s.”
“Nice to meet you, ma’am,” Tracy murmured, her voice barely above a whisper.
Miss Everly gave a tight smile, though it didn’t reach her eyes. “Your parents informed me of your... circumstances.” She drew out the last word, letting it linger like a bad smell. “It’s good they’ve taken steps to address the... situation.”
Tracy stiffened, her cheeks flushing. She didn’t have to ask what “situation” Miss Everly was referring to.
“Come along,” Miss Everly said briskly, spinning on her heel. “I’ll show you to your dormitory. Do try to keep up, Miss Shaw.”
Tracy scrambled to follow as Miss Everly led her across the manicured grounds, her heels tapping out a staccato rhythm on the stone path. The grandeur of the campus was suffocating—towering ivy-covered buildings, statues of saints gazing down with solemn expressions, and perfectly trimmed hedges that seemed too neat to be real.
“It’s a privilege to be admitted to St. Augustine’s,” Miss Everly continued, suggesting she didn’t believe Tracy belonged here. “Our academy has a long-standing tradition of excellence, both academically and morally. We pride ourselves on shaping young ladies into respectable members of society.”
Tracy kept her head down, her sneakers scuffing against the path. She wanted to disappear, to melt into the cracks in the stone.
“I trust you’ll adhere to our strict code of conduct,” Miss Everly went on. “This is not the sort of place where... inappropriate behavior is tolerated.”
Tracy risked a glance at her. “Inappropriate behavior?”
Miss Everly stopped abruptly, turning to face her. Tracy nearly bumped into her but managed to stop just in time.
“Yes, Miss Shaw.” Miss Everly’s lips pressed into a thin line, her eyes narrowing. “Your parents were quite forthcoming about your... tendencies.” Her voice dropped into a hushed, almost scandalized whisper. “They said you’re... a lesbian.”
The word came out like it was something vile, something unmentionable. It hung in the air between them, heavy and sharp.
Tracy’s chest tightened. She swallowed hard, trying to push down the lump rising in her throat. “I—”
“Let me make one thing clear,” Miss Everly interrupted, her tone turning colder. “While you are here, you will conduct yourself with decorum. St. Augustine’s does not cater to... distractions of that nature.”
The way she spat the words made Tracy’s stomach churn. She felt exposed, like every part of her had been stripped bare under Miss Everly’s judgmental gaze.
“Yes, ma’am,” Tracy mumbled, her voice barely audible.
Miss Everly gave a curt nod, satisfied. “Good. Now, let’s move along.”
The rest of the walk was silent, save for the rhythmic clack of Miss Everly’s heels and the distant chirping of birds. Tracy’s mind swirled with a mix of anger and humiliation. She’d known this school would be different—her parents had made that clear when they sent her here—but she hadn’t expected the hostility to hit so quickly, so sharply.
They reached a grand building with tall windows and an arched doorway. “This is your dormitory,” Miss Everly announced. “Your room is on the second floor, shared with one of our exemplary students, Miss Alice Pritchard.”
She paused, her expression softening just slightly. “Alice is the principal’s daughter. A model student. Perhaps she’ll be a good influence on you.”
Tracy nodded numbly, unsure what to say.
Miss Everly opened the heavy oak door, motioning for Tracy to enter. The inside was just as imposing as the exterior—gleaming floors, high ceilings, and rows of identical wooden doors lining the hallways.
“This way,” Miss Everly instructed, leading her up a winding staircase. They stopped in front of a door with the number 12 engraved on a brass plaque.
“This will be your room,” Miss Everly said, handing Tracy a small key. “Your belongings should have been delivered already. I suggest you settle in quickly. Dinner is at six sharp in the dining hall. And, Miss Shaw?”
Tracy hesitated, the key cold in her hand. “Yes?”
Miss Everly leaned in slightly, her voice low. “Consider this a fresh start. You’d do well to remember that.”
With that, she turned and strode down the hall, her heels clicking until they faded into silence.
Tracy stood there for a moment, the key heavy in her palm. A fresh start. She didn’t know if she wanted that.
Taking a deep breath, she unlocked the door and stepped inside.
The room was spacious but sterile, with two identical beds, two desks, and a single window overlooking the courtyard. One side of the room was meticulously organized, with a row of neatly arranged books and a perfectly made bed. The other side, Tracy guessed, was hers—empty, impersonal, waiting for her to fill it.
She set her backpack down and sat on the edge of the bed, staring at the plain white walls. The words “your tendencies” and “inappropriate behavior” echoed in her mind, cutting deeper than she wanted to admit.
Just as she was starting to unpack, the door swung open.
A girl stepped in, her blonde hair pulled into a high ponytail, her uniform spotless. She looked like she’d stepped out of a catalog—polished, perfect, and utterly unapproachable.
“Oh,” the girl said, her voice dripping with mock surprise. “You’re the new girl.”
Tracy stood, unsure how to respond. “Yeah. I’m Tracy.”
The girl’s eyes scanned her, taking in her short hair and plain clothes. She smirked. “I’m Alice Pritchard. Welcome to St. Augustine’s. Let me guess—you’re here because Mommy and Daddy think you’re broken.”
Tracy’s stomach sank. “I... I don’t—”
“Don’t bother denying it,” Alice interrupted, her smirk widening. “Everyone knows. Word travels fast around here.”
Tracy clenched her fists, her cheeks burning. “I just want to be left alone.”
Alice laughed, a cold, cruel sound. “Oh, sweetie. That’s not how things work here.”
She grabbed her books from her desk and headed for the door. “See you around, roomie,” she said with a wink before disappearing down the hall.
Tracy sank back onto the bed, her head in her hands. Her fresh start was already starting to feel like a dead end.
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The dining hall buzzed with chatter as Tracy slipped inside, her shoulders hunched. Rows of long wooden tables stretched across the room, students seated in perfect lines, their uniforms impeccable. She clutched her tray, trying to stay invisible.
But as she made her way to an empty seat near the back, she heard a familiar voice ring out, sharp and mocking.
“Nice haircut, Shaw,” Alice called from the center of the room, her clique erupting into laughter. “What happened? Did your barber forget how to cut for girls?”
Tracy froze, heat rising to her cheeks. She ducked her head, gripping the edge of her tray so tightly her knuckles turned white.
“Hey, I’m talking to you,” Alice continued, her voice dripping with fake sweetness. “Don’t be rude, new girl.”
Tracy didn’t respond, keeping her head down as she slid into a seat at the far end of the table.
Alice wasn’t finished. “You know, I heard why you’re here.” She leaned forward, her voice louder now, ensuring the surrounding tables could hear. “Apparently, St. Augustine’s is a last resort for troubled girls. What’s the matter, Shaw? Couldn’t keep your hands to yourself?”
Laughter rippled through the room, cruel and cutting. Tracy’s face burned. She stared at her plate, suddenly losing her appetite.
When the meal ended, she bolted from the dining hall before Alice could follow her. Back in the dorm, she shut the door behind her and sank onto her bed, tears stinging her eyes. The humiliation clung to her like a second skin, suffocating and heavy.
The next morning wasn’t much better. As Tracy walked down the hallway to her first class, Alice and her clique appeared, their matching loafers clicking against the polished floor.
“Shaw!” Alice called, her grin predatory.
Tracy quickened her pace, but Alice was faster. She stepped in front of her, blocking her path.
“Where are you rushing off to?” Alice asked, feigning innocence. “You don’t have any friends waiting for you.”
“Just leave me alone,” Tracy mumbled, trying to sidestep her.
Alice’s smile turned venomous. “Or what? You’ll cry again? Go ahead, Shaw. It’s pathetic, but it’s entertaining.”
The other girls laughed, and Tracy’s stomach churned. She ducked her head, pushing past them and into the classroom.
As she slid into her seat, she heard a voice behind her, low and sarcastic.
“Wow, Alice, do you ever stop talking?”
Tracy glanced up. A girl with fiery red hair sat in the back corner, leaning back in her chair with a lazy smirk. Her uniform was slightly disheveled, her tie undone, and her blazer missing entirely.
Alice turned, her expression faltering. “What did you say, Scolari?”
Nina Scolari shrugged, twirling a pen between her fingers. “Just wondering if your mouth ever gets tired. You’ve been running it nonstop since the first day of term.”
A few students snickered, and Alice’s face darkened. “Mind your own business.”
Nina’s grin widened. “Oh, but this is my business. I’ve got to listen to your screeching every morning. It’s kind of hard to ignore.”
Tracy couldn’t help it—a small smile tugged at her lips.
Alice glared at Nina but didn’t reply. With a frustrated huff, she turned back to her friends, muttering under her breath.
After class, Nina caught up with Tracy in the hallway.
“Hey, you’re Shaw, right?”
Tracy hesitated, glancing over her shoulder to ensure Alice wasn’t following. “Yeah. That’s me.”
Nina stuffed her hands into her pockets, walking alongside her. “Tough morning, huh?”
Tracy gave a dry laugh. “You could say that.”
“Don’t let Alice get to you,” Nina said. “She’s just a spoiled brat with too much free time.”
“That’s easy for you to say,” Tracy muttered. “She doesn’t go after you.”
“Oh, she’s tried,” Nina said, smirking. “I just don’t let her win. The key is to hit her where it hurts—in front of an audience. She hates looking stupid.”
Tracy looked at her curiously. “Why’d you defend me?”
Nina shrugged. “Because someone should. And because I can’t stand her.”
For the first time in days, Tracy felt a flicker of warmth.
“Listen,” Nina said, leaning against a locker. “This place sucks, but you don’t have to go through it alone. Stick with me, and we’ll make it bearable.”
Tracy hesitated, studying Nina. Nina's easy confidence was both intimidating and magnetic. “Why do you care?”
Nina grinned. “Let’s just say I’ve got a soft spot for the misfits.”
That night, as Tracy was getting ready for bed, there was a knock at her dorm door. She opened it to find Nina leaning casually against the frame.
“What are you doing here?” Tracy asked, glancing nervously over her shoulder.
“Relax,” Nina said. “Alice and her goons are busy sucking up to the principal at some student council thing. We’ve got the night to ourselves.”
“For what?”
Nina’s grin widened. “For fun. Come on, Shaw. You look like you could use some.”
Before Tracy could protest, Nina grabbed her hand and pulled her into the hallway. They crept through the darkened corridors, avoiding the occasional patrolling staff member, until they slipped through a side door.
The cool night air hit Tracy’s face, and she shivered. “Where are we going?”
“You’ll see,” Nina said, leading her down a winding path through the woods.
After a few minutes, they emerged at the edge of a shimmering lake. The moonlight danced on the water, and the surrounding trees cast long, shifting shadows.
Nina turned to her with a mischievous glint in her eye. “You know what time it is, right?”
Tracy frowned. “No?”
“It’s skinny dipping time.”
Tracy’s eyes widened. “What? No way.”
Nina laughed. “Oh, come on. It’s tradition. Everyone who doesn’t fit in here sneaks out to this lake at least once. It’s a rite of passage.”
Tracy hesitated, looking at the water. “I don’t know...”
“Don’t be such a chicken,” Nina teased, kicking off her shoes. “It’s just water.”
Before Tracy could reply, Nina stripped off her shirt and pants, leaving her in her underwear. She waded into the lake, the water rippling around her.
“See? Not so bad,” Nina called over her shoulder.
Tracy bit her lip, debating. Then, with a resigned sigh, she kicked off her sneakers and pulled off her sweater.
The cool water of the lake lapped against Tracy’s legs as she waded further into the moonlit expanse, her heart racing. Nina was already halfway across, her form barely visible except for the pale glow of her skin under the moon’s gentle light.
“You know,” Nina’s voice floated back to her, “this place may be hell, but the lake is something else.”
Tracy nodded, dipping her head beneath the surface to wash away the day's weight. When she resurfaced, Nina waited, her hands resting on her hips as she surveyed Tracy’s cautious movements.
“You really are a slowpoke,” Nina teased, grinning.
Tracy smiled sheepishly. “I’m just trying to keep up.”
They floated in silence for a few moments, the only sound the gentle ripple of the water. Tracy’s thoughts drifted back to the way Alice had humiliated her earlier, how she’d made her feel so small, so out of place. It was easy to lose herself in the isolation of the school, in the deep, suffocating feeling of not belonging anywhere.
Nina seemed to sense it, her tone shifting from playful to something softer.
“You know,” she said, her voice low, “I’m not so different from you.”
Tracy furrowed her brow, her gaze drifting to Nina. “What do you mean?”
Nina hesitated momentarily, her gaze slipping down to the water before she met Tracy’s eyes again. “My parents sent me here, too. They thought this place would fix me. Thought I was... broken. Just like they think you are.”
Tracy’s breath caught in her throat, the vulnerability in Nina’s words surprising her. “They—”
“They don’t get it,” Nina interrupted, her voice steady. “They don’t understand that I’m not some mistake. I’m just... me. I won’t change just because they don’t like who I am.”
Tracy was quiet for a moment, absorbing Nina’s words. She hadn’t realized that Nina’s rebellious attitude stemmed from something deeper: a place of rejection and frustration with her family. It made her feel a little less alone.
“I think I’m just... afraid,” Tracy admitted softly. “Afraid that if I let anyone get too close, they’ll see what I really am. And they won’t like it. I won’t fit in.”
Nina swam closer; her movements are smooth and graceful in the water. She tilted her head slightly, considering Tracy’s words before speaking. “You don’t need anyone’s approval, Shaw. You need to be yourself. The right people will see you for who you are, and that’s the only approval you’ll ever need.”
Tracy’s heart beat a little faster at Nina’s reassurance, her voice a soothing balm for her raw insecurities. But before she could say anything, Nina grinned mischievously, splashing her lightly with water. “Come on, though—don’t let me have all the fun.”
Tracy laughed, splashing Nina back. The tension between them melted as they playfully circled each other in the water. Their movements grew slower, more deliberate, as the flirting took on a different edge, an unspoken tension simmering beneath the surface.
“You’re way too confident,” Tracy teased, her breath catching when Nina flashed her that wicked smile.
Nina’s expression softened, her voice quiet as she closed the distance between them. “I’ve had to be.”
The air around them shifted as their playful splashing became more intimate. Tracy’s heart beat in her chest like a drum, and she couldn’t look away from Nina’s intense gaze. For a moment, everything else disappeared—the school, the bullying, her fear—and it was just the two of them, suspended in time.
Nina reached out, brushing her fingers gently across Tracy’s cheek. Tracy shivered at the touch, her pulse quickening.
“You know,” Nina said, her voice a little breathless, “I’ve been thinking about this all night.”
“About what?” Tracy whispered, her breath hitching as Nina’s face drew closer.
Nina’s lips were mere inches from hers now, and Tracy’s heart skipped a beat. “About how you make me feel... like maybe this place doesn’t matter so much anymore.”
Tracy’s lips parted, her mind racing. She wanted to kiss her, wanted to feel that connection more than anything, but she was still uncertain. “Are you sure this is a good idea?”
“I’m sure,” Nina replied, her voice low and confident. She didn’t wait for Tracy to respond before she closed the distance, her lips brushing gently against Tracy’s.
The kiss was tentative at first, a soft exploration of unspoken feelings, of shared moments and quiet understanding. But it quickly deepened, the urgency of their emotions catching fire. Tracy’s hands found their way to Nina’s shoulders, pulling her closer, her body trembling with the warmth of the connection between them.
Nina’s hands slid into Tracy’s wet hair, tilting her head slightly to deepen the kiss. The water lapped against their skin, the coolness in stark contrast to the heat building between them.
“Tracy,” Nina whispered, pulling back just enough to meet her eyes. “You’re perfect just as you are.”
Tracy’s heart swelled at her words, and she couldn’t help but smile, her fingers tracing the line of Nina’s jaw. “I’ve never felt this way before.”
Nina leaned in again, pressing her lips softly against Tracy’s once more, but this time it was different—more deliberate, more hungry. Tracy could feel every inch of her body responding, every part of her waking up to the possibilities between them.
The kiss became more intense, more passionate, as they both surrendered to the moment. Slowly, almost instinctively, they moved from the water, stepping onto the soft sand of the lake’s shore.
They didn’t speak as they sank into the cool sand, the night air wrapping around them like a blanket. Tracy’s hands roamed to Nina’s waist, feeling the smooth skin beneath her fingers as their kiss deepened once more. The world outside of them ceased to exist. It was just the two of them, their connection raw and beautiful, unfolding with every touch.
In the quiet of the night, surrounded by the lake and the distant hum of the forest, Tracy and Nina shared something neither of them had expected—but something they both needed. Something that made them feel more alive than they ever had before.
Here’s a continuation of the story with the elements you provided, focusing on emotional intensity, the fallout from Alice’s actions, and Tracy’s journey toward reclaiming her power:
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The next morning, Tracy walked into the dining hall with Nina by her side, her spirits lifted for the first time since arriving at St. Augustine's. The previous night’s swim had felt like a turning point—a moment of connection and joy she never thought she’d find here.
But as they entered, the hall went quiet. Tracy felt eyes on her, whispers carrying across the room like a low hum. She froze, her stomach dropping.
“What’s going on?” she whispered to Nina, her voice tight.
Nina scanned the room, her carefree expression hardening as she noticed students snickering and pointing.
“Something’s up,” Nina muttered.
Tracy’s eyes caught movement near the bulletin board at the far side of the hall. A group of students clustered around it, laughing and exchanging looks.
“Let’s go check it out,” Nina said, her voice steady but laced with tension.
Reluctantly, Tracy followed. Her heart sank as they pushed through the crowd. Taped to the board were grainy photos of them at the lake—kissing, holding each other, utterly exposed.
Tracy’s breath caught in her throat. “Oh my God...”
A loud laugh erupted behind them. “Looks like St. Augustine’s has a couple of lake lovers,” someone sneered.
Tracy turned, her face burning. It was Alice, flanked by her clique, her arms crossed and a smug smile plastered on her face.
“You,” Nina growled, stepping forward.
Alice raised her hands mockingly. “What? I’m just appreciating some fine photography.”
Tracy felt the walls closing in, the stares of her classmates like daggers. Her chest tightened, panic clawing at her throat.
“Nina, I can’t... I need to get out of here,” she whispered, her voice trembling.
Nina grabbed her hand. “Come on.”
They left the hall quickly, but the whispers followed them like a shadow.
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Back in the dorm room, Tracy sat on her bed, her hands shaking as she stared at the floor.
“I can’t believe this is happening,” she said, her voice barely above a whisper. “Everyone saw those pictures. My parents... if they find out—”
“They won’t,” Nina interrupted, pacing the room like a caged animal. “I’m not going to let Alice get away with this.”
Tracy looked up at her, tears brimming in her eyes. “What can we even do? She’s already won.”
Nina stopped pacing and crouched in front of her, her hands on Tracy’s knees. “No, she hasn’t. Alice is a coward who hides behind her daddy’s power and her little clique. Trust me, I know how to handle people like her.”
Tracy shook her head. “You don’t understand. I’m not like you. I can’t just... fight back. I’m not strong enough.”
“Yes, you are,” Nina said firmly. “You’re stronger than you think, Tracy. And you’re not alone in this.”
Tracy wiped at her eyes, taking a shaky breath. “What are you going to do?”
Nina stood, her jaw set. “I’m going to pay Alice a little visit.”
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Nina found Alice in the common room, laughing with her friends as if she hadn’t just ruined someone’s life.
“Well, well,” Nina said, leaning against the doorway. “If it isn’t the queen of petty vengeance.”
Alice glanced up, her smile widening. “Nina. To what do I owe the pleasure?”
Nina strode into the room, her presence commanding. “Cut the crap, Alice. We both know what you did, and I’m here to tell you it stops now.”
Alice leaned back in her chair, feigning innocence. “I don’t know what you’re talking about.”
“Don’t play dumb,” Nina snapped. “You think you’re untouchable because your dad runs this place, but guess what? You’ve got skeletons in your closet too.”
Alice’s smile faltered for a split second, but she recovered quickly. “Is that a threat?”
“Call it a warning,” Nina said, her voice cold. “Keep messing with Tracy, and I’ll make sure everyone knows about your little side hustle.”
Alice’s eyes narrowed. “You wouldn’t dare.”
Nina leaned in, her voice dropping to a whisper. “Try me.”
For a moment, they stared each other down, the tension in the room palpable. Then Alice smirked. “You’re wasting your time, Nina. People like Tracy don’t belong here, and nothing you do is going to change that.”
“We’ll see about that,” Nina said, turning on her heel and leaving without another word.
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The next day, Tracy’s nightmare reached a new level when Alice orchestrated a humiliating scene during the school assembly.
“Before we begin,” Alice said, stepping up to the microphone, “I think it’s important to address something that’s been on everyone’s mind.”
Tracy froze in her seat, dread pooling in her stomach.
“We’ve all seen the photos,” Alice continued, her voice dripping with mock concern. “And I think we should all ask ourselves—is this the kind of behavior we want at St. Augustine’s?”
Murmurs rippled through the crowd, and Tracy felt every pair of eyes on her. Her chest tightened, her hands clenching into fists.
“That’s enough!” Nina’s voice cut through the room like a whip.
All heads turned as Nina stood, her expression thunderous.
“You’ve got a lot of nerve, Alice,” she said, her voice ringing out. “Standing up there pretending to be some moral authority when you’re the biggest hypocrite in this school.”
Alice’s smile wavered. “I don’t know what you’re talking about.”
“Oh, I think you do,” Nina said, taking a step forward. “You’re so obsessed with controlling everyone around you because deep down, you’re terrified that if people knew the real you, they’d see you for what you are—a bully, a fraud, and a coward.”
The room erupted into whispers, students glancing at Alice with newfound curiosity.
Tracy, emboldened by Nina’s courage, stood as well. “She’s right. You pick on people like me because it’s easier than facing your own insecurities. But guess what, Alice? I’m done letting you make me feel small.”
Alice’s face turned red, her composure cracking under the weight of their words.
“I’m reporting this to the principal,” Tracy said, her voice steady. “And I’m not stopping until they do something about you.”
The assembly fell silent as Tracy and Nina walked out together, their heads held high.
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The fallout was swift. With Tracy’s report and mounting student pressure, the administration had no choice but to suspend Alice. The school also announced plans to review its policies on bullying and discrimination, a small but significant victory.
In the days that followed, Tracy found herself gaining allies among her classmates, students who admired her bravery and began to question the school's toxic culture.
Through it all, Nina was by her side, her unwavering support a constant reminder that Tracy didn’t have to face anything alone.
Tracy felt like she belonged for the first time—not because she fit in, but because she’d found the strength to stand out.
“You must be Miss Shaw,” the woman said, her voice clipped and precise. She extended a thin hand, which Tracy shook hesitantly. The woman’s grip was ice cold. “I’m Miss Beatrix Everly, the dorm mistress. I’ll be overseeing your stay here at St. Augustine’s.”
“Nice to meet you, ma’am,” Tracy murmured, her voice barely above a whisper.
Miss Everly gave a tight smile, though it didn’t reach her eyes. “Your parents informed me of your... circumstances.” She drew out the last word, letting it linger like a bad smell. “It’s good they’ve taken steps to address the... situation.”
Tracy stiffened, her cheeks flushing. She didn’t have to ask what “situation” Miss Everly was referring to.
“Come along,” Miss Everly said briskly, spinning on her heel. “I’ll show you to your dormitory. Do try to keep up, Miss Shaw.”
Tracy scrambled to follow as Miss Everly led her across the manicured grounds, her heels tapping out a staccato rhythm on the stone path. The grandeur of the campus was suffocating—towering ivy-covered buildings, statues of saints gazing down with solemn expressions, and perfectly trimmed hedges that seemed too neat to be real.
“It’s a privilege to be admitted to St. Augustine’s,” Miss Everly continued, suggesting she didn’t believe Tracy belonged here. “Our academy has a long-standing tradition of excellence, both academically and morally. We pride ourselves on shaping young ladies into respectable members of society.”
Tracy kept her head down, her sneakers scuffing against the path. She wanted to disappear, to melt into the cracks in the stone.
“I trust you’ll adhere to our strict code of conduct,” Miss Everly went on. “This is not the sort of place where... inappropriate behavior is tolerated.”
Tracy risked a glance at her. “Inappropriate behavior?”
Miss Everly stopped abruptly, turning to face her. Tracy nearly bumped into her but managed to stop just in time.
“Yes, Miss Shaw.” Miss Everly’s lips pressed into a thin line, her eyes narrowing. “Your parents were quite forthcoming about your... tendencies.” Her voice dropped into a hushed, almost scandalized whisper. “They said you’re... a lesbian.”
The word came out like it was something vile, something unmentionable. It hung in the air between them, heavy and sharp.
Tracy’s chest tightened. She swallowed hard, trying to push down the lump rising in her throat. “I—”
“Let me make one thing clear,” Miss Everly interrupted, her tone turning colder. “While you are here, you will conduct yourself with decorum. St. Augustine’s does not cater to... distractions of that nature.”
The way she spat the words made Tracy’s stomach churn. She felt exposed, like every part of her had been stripped bare under Miss Everly’s judgmental gaze.
“Yes, ma’am,” Tracy mumbled, her voice barely audible.
Miss Everly gave a curt nod, satisfied. “Good. Now, let’s move along.”
The rest of the walk was silent, save for the rhythmic clack of Miss Everly’s heels and the distant chirping of birds. Tracy’s mind swirled with a mix of anger and humiliation. She’d known this school would be different—her parents had made that clear when they sent her here—but she hadn’t expected the hostility to hit so quickly, so sharply.
They reached a grand building with tall windows and an arched doorway. “This is your dormitory,” Miss Everly announced. “Your room is on the second floor, shared with one of our exemplary students, Miss Alice Pritchard.”
She paused, her expression softening just slightly. “Alice is the principal’s daughter. A model student. Perhaps she’ll be a good influence on you.”
Tracy nodded numbly, unsure what to say.
Miss Everly opened the heavy oak door, motioning for Tracy to enter. The inside was just as imposing as the exterior—gleaming floors, high ceilings, and rows of identical wooden doors lining the hallways.
“This way,” Miss Everly instructed, leading her up a winding staircase. They stopped in front of a door with the number 12 engraved on a brass plaque.
“This will be your room,” Miss Everly said, handing Tracy a small key. “Your belongings should have been delivered already. I suggest you settle in quickly. Dinner is at six sharp in the dining hall. And, Miss Shaw?”
Tracy hesitated, the key cold in her hand. “Yes?”
Miss Everly leaned in slightly, her voice low. “Consider this a fresh start. You’d do well to remember that.”
With that, she turned and strode down the hall, her heels clicking until they faded into silence.
Tracy stood there for a moment, the key heavy in her palm. A fresh start. She didn’t know if she wanted that.
Taking a deep breath, she unlocked the door and stepped inside.
The room was spacious but sterile, with two identical beds, two desks, and a single window overlooking the courtyard. One side of the room was meticulously organized, with a row of neatly arranged books and a perfectly made bed. The other side, Tracy guessed, was hers—empty, impersonal, waiting for her to fill it.
She set her backpack down and sat on the edge of the bed, staring at the plain white walls. The words “your tendencies” and “inappropriate behavior” echoed in her mind, cutting deeper than she wanted to admit.
Just as she was starting to unpack, the door swung open.
A girl stepped in, her blonde hair pulled into a high ponytail, her uniform spotless. She looked like she’d stepped out of a catalog—polished, perfect, and utterly unapproachable.
“Oh,” the girl said, her voice dripping with mock surprise. “You’re the new girl.”
Tracy stood, unsure how to respond. “Yeah. I’m Tracy.”
The girl’s eyes scanned her, taking in her short hair and plain clothes. She smirked. “I’m Alice Pritchard. Welcome to St. Augustine’s. Let me guess—you’re here because Mommy and Daddy think you’re broken.”
Tracy’s stomach sank. “I... I don’t—”
“Don’t bother denying it,” Alice interrupted, her smirk widening. “Everyone knows. Word travels fast around here.”
Tracy clenched her fists, her cheeks burning. “I just want to be left alone.”
Alice laughed, a cold, cruel sound. “Oh, sweetie. That’s not how things work here.”
She grabbed her books from her desk and headed for the door. “See you around, roomie,” she said with a wink before disappearing down the hall.
Tracy sank back onto the bed, her head in her hands. Her fresh start was already starting to feel like a dead end.
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The dining hall buzzed with chatter as Tracy slipped inside, her shoulders hunched. Rows of long wooden tables stretched across the room, students seated in perfect lines, their uniforms impeccable. She clutched her tray, trying to stay invisible.
But as she made her way to an empty seat near the back, she heard a familiar voice ring out, sharp and mocking.
“Nice haircut, Shaw,” Alice called from the center of the room, her clique erupting into laughter. “What happened? Did your barber forget how to cut for girls?”
Tracy froze, heat rising to her cheeks. She ducked her head, gripping the edge of her tray so tightly her knuckles turned white.
“Hey, I’m talking to you,” Alice continued, her voice dripping with fake sweetness. “Don’t be rude, new girl.”
Tracy didn’t respond, keeping her head down as she slid into a seat at the far end of the table.
Alice wasn’t finished. “You know, I heard why you’re here.” She leaned forward, her voice louder now, ensuring the surrounding tables could hear. “Apparently, St. Augustine’s is a last resort for troubled girls. What’s the matter, Shaw? Couldn’t keep your hands to yourself?”
Laughter rippled through the room, cruel and cutting. Tracy’s face burned. She stared at her plate, suddenly losing her appetite.
When the meal ended, she bolted from the dining hall before Alice could follow her. Back in the dorm, she shut the door behind her and sank onto her bed, tears stinging her eyes. The humiliation clung to her like a second skin, suffocating and heavy.
The next morning wasn’t much better. As Tracy walked down the hallway to her first class, Alice and her clique appeared, their matching loafers clicking against the polished floor.
“Shaw!” Alice called, her grin predatory.
Tracy quickened her pace, but Alice was faster. She stepped in front of her, blocking her path.
“Where are you rushing off to?” Alice asked, feigning innocence. “You don’t have any friends waiting for you.”
“Just leave me alone,” Tracy mumbled, trying to sidestep her.
Alice’s smile turned venomous. “Or what? You’ll cry again? Go ahead, Shaw. It’s pathetic, but it’s entertaining.”
The other girls laughed, and Tracy’s stomach churned. She ducked her head, pushing past them and into the classroom.
As she slid into her seat, she heard a voice behind her, low and sarcastic.
“Wow, Alice, do you ever stop talking?”
Tracy glanced up. A girl with fiery red hair sat in the back corner, leaning back in her chair with a lazy smirk. Her uniform was slightly disheveled, her tie undone, and her blazer missing entirely.
Alice turned, her expression faltering. “What did you say, Scolari?”
Nina Scolari shrugged, twirling a pen between her fingers. “Just wondering if your mouth ever gets tired. You’ve been running it nonstop since the first day of term.”
A few students snickered, and Alice’s face darkened. “Mind your own business.”
Nina’s grin widened. “Oh, but this is my business. I’ve got to listen to your screeching every morning. It’s kind of hard to ignore.”
Tracy couldn’t help it—a small smile tugged at her lips.
Alice glared at Nina but didn’t reply. With a frustrated huff, she turned back to her friends, muttering under her breath.
After class, Nina caught up with Tracy in the hallway.
“Hey, you’re Shaw, right?”
Tracy hesitated, glancing over her shoulder to ensure Alice wasn’t following. “Yeah. That’s me.”
Nina stuffed her hands into her pockets, walking alongside her. “Tough morning, huh?”
Tracy gave a dry laugh. “You could say that.”
“Don’t let Alice get to you,” Nina said. “She’s just a spoiled brat with too much free time.”
“That’s easy for you to say,” Tracy muttered. “She doesn’t go after you.”
“Oh, she’s tried,” Nina said, smirking. “I just don’t let her win. The key is to hit her where it hurts—in front of an audience. She hates looking stupid.”
Tracy looked at her curiously. “Why’d you defend me?”
Nina shrugged. “Because someone should. And because I can’t stand her.”
For the first time in days, Tracy felt a flicker of warmth.
“Listen,” Nina said, leaning against a locker. “This place sucks, but you don’t have to go through it alone. Stick with me, and we’ll make it bearable.”
Tracy hesitated, studying Nina. Nina's easy confidence was both intimidating and magnetic. “Why do you care?”
Nina grinned. “Let’s just say I’ve got a soft spot for the misfits.”
That night, as Tracy was getting ready for bed, there was a knock at her dorm door. She opened it to find Nina leaning casually against the frame.
“What are you doing here?” Tracy asked, glancing nervously over her shoulder.
“Relax,” Nina said. “Alice and her goons are busy sucking up to the principal at some student council thing. We’ve got the night to ourselves.”
“For what?”
Nina’s grin widened. “For fun. Come on, Shaw. You look like you could use some.”
Before Tracy could protest, Nina grabbed her hand and pulled her into the hallway. They crept through the darkened corridors, avoiding the occasional patrolling staff member, until they slipped through a side door.
The cool night air hit Tracy’s face, and she shivered. “Where are we going?”
“You’ll see,” Nina said, leading her down a winding path through the woods.
After a few minutes, they emerged at the edge of a shimmering lake. The moonlight danced on the water, and the surrounding trees cast long, shifting shadows.
Nina turned to her with a mischievous glint in her eye. “You know what time it is, right?”
Tracy frowned. “No?”
“It’s skinny dipping time.”
Tracy’s eyes widened. “What? No way.”
Nina laughed. “Oh, come on. It’s tradition. Everyone who doesn’t fit in here sneaks out to this lake at least once. It’s a rite of passage.”
Tracy hesitated, looking at the water. “I don’t know...”
“Don’t be such a chicken,” Nina teased, kicking off her shoes. “It’s just water.”
Before Tracy could reply, Nina stripped off her shirt and pants, leaving her in her underwear. She waded into the lake, the water rippling around her.
“See? Not so bad,” Nina called over her shoulder.
Tracy bit her lip, debating. Then, with a resigned sigh, she kicked off her sneakers and pulled off her sweater.
The cool water of the lake lapped against Tracy’s legs as she waded further into the moonlit expanse, her heart racing. Nina was already halfway across, her form barely visible except for the pale glow of her skin under the moon’s gentle light.
“You know,” Nina’s voice floated back to her, “this place may be hell, but the lake is something else.”
Tracy nodded, dipping her head beneath the surface to wash away the day's weight. When she resurfaced, Nina waited, her hands resting on her hips as she surveyed Tracy’s cautious movements.
“You really are a slowpoke,” Nina teased, grinning.
Tracy smiled sheepishly. “I’m just trying to keep up.”
They floated in silence for a few moments, the only sound the gentle ripple of the water. Tracy’s thoughts drifted back to the way Alice had humiliated her earlier, how she’d made her feel so small, so out of place. It was easy to lose herself in the isolation of the school, in the deep, suffocating feeling of not belonging anywhere.
Nina seemed to sense it, her tone shifting from playful to something softer.
“You know,” she said, her voice low, “I’m not so different from you.”
Tracy furrowed her brow, her gaze drifting to Nina. “What do you mean?”
Nina hesitated momentarily, her gaze slipping down to the water before she met Tracy’s eyes again. “My parents sent me here, too. They thought this place would fix me. Thought I was... broken. Just like they think you are.”
Tracy’s breath caught in her throat, the vulnerability in Nina’s words surprising her. “They—”
“They don’t get it,” Nina interrupted, her voice steady. “They don’t understand that I’m not some mistake. I’m just... me. I won’t change just because they don’t like who I am.”
Tracy was quiet for a moment, absorbing Nina’s words. She hadn’t realized that Nina’s rebellious attitude stemmed from something deeper: a place of rejection and frustration with her family. It made her feel a little less alone.
“I think I’m just... afraid,” Tracy admitted softly. “Afraid that if I let anyone get too close, they’ll see what I really am. And they won’t like it. I won’t fit in.”
Nina swam closer; her movements are smooth and graceful in the water. She tilted her head slightly, considering Tracy’s words before speaking. “You don’t need anyone’s approval, Shaw. You need to be yourself. The right people will see you for who you are, and that’s the only approval you’ll ever need.”
Tracy’s heart beat a little faster at Nina’s reassurance, her voice a soothing balm for her raw insecurities. But before she could say anything, Nina grinned mischievously, splashing her lightly with water. “Come on, though—don’t let me have all the fun.”
Tracy laughed, splashing Nina back. The tension between them melted as they playfully circled each other in the water. Their movements grew slower, more deliberate, as the flirting took on a different edge, an unspoken tension simmering beneath the surface.
“You’re way too confident,” Tracy teased, her breath catching when Nina flashed her that wicked smile.
Nina’s expression softened, her voice quiet as she closed the distance between them. “I’ve had to be.”
The air around them shifted as their playful splashing became more intimate. Tracy’s heart beat in her chest like a drum, and she couldn’t look away from Nina’s intense gaze. For a moment, everything else disappeared—the school, the bullying, her fear—and it was just the two of them, suspended in time.
Nina reached out, brushing her fingers gently across Tracy’s cheek. Tracy shivered at the touch, her pulse quickening.
“You know,” Nina said, her voice a little breathless, “I’ve been thinking about this all night.”
“About what?” Tracy whispered, her breath hitching as Nina’s face drew closer.
Nina’s lips were mere inches from hers now, and Tracy’s heart skipped a beat. “About how you make me feel... like maybe this place doesn’t matter so much anymore.”
Tracy’s lips parted, her mind racing. She wanted to kiss her, wanted to feel that connection more than anything, but she was still uncertain. “Are you sure this is a good idea?”
“I’m sure,” Nina replied, her voice low and confident. She didn’t wait for Tracy to respond before she closed the distance, her lips brushing gently against Tracy’s.
The kiss was tentative at first, a soft exploration of unspoken feelings, of shared moments and quiet understanding. But it quickly deepened, the urgency of their emotions catching fire. Tracy’s hands found their way to Nina’s shoulders, pulling her closer, her body trembling with the warmth of the connection between them.
Nina’s hands slid into Tracy’s wet hair, tilting her head slightly to deepen the kiss. The water lapped against their skin, the coolness in stark contrast to the heat building between them.
“Tracy,” Nina whispered, pulling back just enough to meet her eyes. “You’re perfect just as you are.”
Tracy’s heart swelled at her words, and she couldn’t help but smile, her fingers tracing the line of Nina’s jaw. “I’ve never felt this way before.”
Nina leaned in again, pressing her lips softly against Tracy’s once more, but this time it was different—more deliberate, more hungry. Tracy could feel every inch of her body responding, every part of her waking up to the possibilities between them.
The kiss became more intense, more passionate, as they both surrendered to the moment. Slowly, almost instinctively, they moved from the water, stepping onto the soft sand of the lake’s shore.
They didn’t speak as they sank into the cool sand, the night air wrapping around them like a blanket. Tracy’s hands roamed to Nina’s waist, feeling the smooth skin beneath her fingers as their kiss deepened once more. The world outside of them ceased to exist. It was just the two of them, their connection raw and beautiful, unfolding with every touch.
In the quiet of the night, surrounded by the lake and the distant hum of the forest, Tracy and Nina shared something neither of them had expected—but something they both needed. Something that made them feel more alive than they ever had before.
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The next morning, Tracy walked into the dining hall with Nina by her side, her spirits lifted for the first time since arriving at St. Augustine's. The previous night’s swim had felt like a turning point—a moment of connection and joy she never thought she’d find here.
But as they entered, the hall went quiet. Tracy felt eyes on her, whispers carrying across the room like a low hum. She froze, her stomach dropping.
“What’s going on?” she whispered to Nina, her voice tight.
Nina scanned the room, her carefree expression hardening as she noticed students snickering and pointing.
“Something’s up,” Nina muttered.
Tracy’s eyes caught movement near the bulletin board at the far side of the hall. A group of students clustered around it, laughing and exchanging looks.
“Let’s go check it out,” Nina said, her voice steady but laced with tension.
Reluctantly, Tracy followed. Her heart sank as they pushed through the crowd. Taped to the board were grainy photos of them at the lake—kissing, holding each other, utterly exposed.
Tracy’s breath caught in her throat. “Oh my God...”
A loud laugh erupted behind them. “Looks like St. Augustine’s has a couple of lake lovers,” someone sneered.
Tracy turned, her face burning. It was Alice, flanked by her clique, her arms crossed and a smug smile plastered on her face.
“You,” Nina growled, stepping forward.
Alice raised her hands mockingly. “What? I’m just appreciating some fine photography.”
Tracy felt the walls closing in, the stares of her classmates like daggers. Her chest tightened, panic clawing at her throat.
“Nina, I can’t... I need to get out of here,” she whispered, her voice trembling.
Nina grabbed her hand. “Come on.”
They left the hall quickly, but the whispers followed them like a shadow.
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Back in the dorm room, Tracy sat on her bed, her hands shaking as she stared at the floor.
“I can’t believe this is happening,” she said, her voice barely above a whisper. “Everyone saw those pictures. My parents... if they find out—”
“They won’t,” Nina interrupted, pacing the room like a caged animal. “I’m not going to let Alice get away with this.”
Tracy looked up at her, tears brimming in her eyes. “What can we even do? She’s already won.”
Nina stopped pacing and crouched in front of her, her hands on Tracy’s knees. “No, she hasn’t. Alice is a coward who hides behind her daddy’s power and her little clique. Trust me, I know how to handle people like her.”
Tracy shook her head. “You don’t understand. I’m not like you. I can’t just... fight back. I’m not strong enough.”
“Yes, you are,” Nina said firmly. “You’re stronger than you think, Tracy. And you’re not alone in this.”
Tracy wiped at her eyes, taking a shaky breath. “What are you going to do?”
Nina stood, her jaw set. “I’m going to pay Alice a little visit.”
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Nina found Alice in the common room, laughing with her friends as if she hadn’t just ruined someone’s life.
“Well, well,” Nina said, leaning against the doorway. “If it isn’t the queen of petty vengeance.”
Alice glanced up, her smile widening. “Nina. To what do I owe the pleasure?”
Nina strode into the room, her presence commanding. “Cut the crap, Alice. We both know what you did, and I’m here to tell you it stops now.”
Alice leaned back in her chair, feigning innocence. “I don’t know what you’re talking about.”
“Don’t play dumb,” Nina snapped. “You think you’re untouchable because your dad runs this place, but guess what? You’ve got skeletons in your closet too.”
Alice’s smile faltered for a split second, but she recovered quickly. “Is that a threat?”
“Call it a warning,” Nina said, her voice cold. “Keep messing with Tracy, and I’ll make sure everyone knows about your little side hustle.”
Alice’s eyes narrowed. “You wouldn’t dare.”
Nina leaned in, her voice dropping to a whisper. “Try me.”
For a moment, they stared each other down, the tension in the room palpable. Then Alice smirked. “You’re wasting your time, Nina. People like Tracy don’t belong here, and nothing you do is going to change that.”
“We’ll see about that,” Nina said, turning on her heel and leaving without another word.
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The next day, Tracy’s nightmare reached a new level when Alice orchestrated a humiliating scene during the school assembly.
“Before we begin,” Alice said, stepping up to the microphone, “I think it’s important to address something that’s been on everyone’s mind.”
Tracy froze in her seat, dread pooling in her stomach.
“We’ve all seen the photos,” Alice continued, her voice dripping with mock concern. “And I think we should all ask ourselves—is this the kind of behavior we want at St. Augustine’s?”
Murmurs rippled through the crowd, and Tracy felt every pair of eyes on her. Her chest tightened, her hands clenching into fists.
“That’s enough!” Nina’s voice cut through the room like a whip.
All heads turned as Nina stood, her expression thunderous.
“You’ve got a lot of nerve, Alice,” she said, her voice ringing out. “Standing up there pretending to be some moral authority when you’re the biggest hypocrite in this school.”
Alice’s smile wavered. “I don’t know what you’re talking about.”
“Oh, I think you do,” Nina said, taking a step forward. “You’re so obsessed with controlling everyone around you because deep down, you’re terrified that if people knew the real you, they’d see you for what you are—a bully, a fraud, and a coward.”
The room erupted into whispers, students glancing at Alice with newfound curiosity.
Tracy, emboldened by Nina’s courage, stood as well. “She’s right. You pick on people like me because it’s easier than facing your own insecurities. But guess what, Alice? I’m done letting you make me feel small.”
Alice’s face turned red, her composure cracking under the weight of their words.
“I’m reporting this to the principal,” Tracy said, her voice steady. “And I’m not stopping until they do something about you.”
The assembly fell silent as Tracy and Nina walked out together, their heads held high.
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The fallout was swift. With Tracy’s report and mounting student pressure, the administration had no choice but to suspend Alice. The school also announced plans to review its policies on bullying and discrimination, a small but significant victory.
In the days that followed, Tracy found herself gaining allies among her classmates, students who admired her bravery and began to question the school's toxic culture.
Through it all, Nina was by her side, her unwavering support a constant reminder that Tracy didn’t have to face anything alone.
Tracy felt like she belonged for the first time—not because she fit in, but because she’d found the strength to stand out.
January 16, 2025
Cry Vampire
I discovered this book during my final year of school. The author, Terrance Dicks, was a former script editor for Doctor Who. I am proud to say that this was the first book I read on my own initiative, and it did not disappoint. Since then, I have developed a passion for both reading and writing, particularly in the vampire and gothic horror genres. This book is an excellent story for readers of all ages.
