Pro's & Con's!
I have written poems and short stories for as long as I can remember, but this is the
first book
I have ever written, and I am incredibly curious what everyone who reads it thinks of it.
Did it hook your attention?
Did I provide that "line of text" you were looking for to explain a situation?
Was the world immersive enough?That one is tricky. No one wants to wander through an empty world, but no one wants to spend half a chapter reading about glowing tree mushrooms either.
I'd love to hear y'all's thoughts on it!!