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Go beyond the literal – make a story dance

My dance instructor is an editor in her more sensible hours, like me. She deals with precision, facts, boiling ideas down to their exactness. How things work and what they are. The world of the literal.

But when she wriggles inside a piece of music to choreograph a routine, she speaks a different language. One of moods, emotions and universal connection. Her style is jazz, a discipline that gathers moves from just about anywhere. Not just the formal steps of ballet, salsa, contemporary or hip-hop. It might be a woman in high heels walking across a room, a covetous glance with the head tilted just so. Simple moves, but when put with the music, they reveal more about it than you ever dreamed was there.

Writers have to do both these things. We construct the literal – who does what and when. What that leads to. Whether everything is logical and how many Tuesdays are in a month. We set up surprises.

Important as that is, the charm of a story lies beyond this.

It comes in two ways:

how well we snare the reader in the experience – the moment-by-moment writing
why it feels so much more important than 'just a story'

For the first point, so much comes down to how we use our prose. The break of every paragraph, the glint of every verb, the run of every sentence, the open eyes of a word's vowels or the quirky wink of a letter clash. Like the jazz choreographer, you don't have to be fancy or formal – walking across a room is just as effective as a formal metaphor, often more so. You can charm the reader with every mark on the page.

Of course every genre has different expectations of its prose, and every individual writer has different sensitivities too. But all stories have a degree of performance and need to put on the right kind of show. When you're doing a final polish, look beyond the steps and make the story dance.

Which leads me to the second way a story charms a reader. When they finish, the best stories somehow make sense as a metaphor in retrospect – for life, love, the human condition, whatever.

And here the dance comparison is of no use whatsoever.

Thanks for the pic of Momix Giandomenico Ricci

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'I wanted the words to sound like music' – The Undercover Soundtrack, Jessica Bell

I am seriously envious of my Undercover Soundtrack guest this week. As she developed her characters and their world, she found it natural to write the songs of the story too – and then headed into the studio to record them. The result? Her novel has its very own original soundtrack on iTunes. She is Jessica Bell, a poet and songwriter as well as a wielder of the literary art, and her novel is String Bridge.  Join me at the red blog to hear more.

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Underwater music and understanding a character's passion – interview at Underground Book Reviews

How did I develop the underwater world of the Soothesayers for My Memories of a Future Life? What experience did I draw on to create the musician narrator Carol? Did I start my blog to plug my writing book (a timely question considering this week's post)? What's this Life Form 3 novel I mention from time to time?

My Memories of a Future Life was reviewed yesterday at Underground Book Reviews, and today they're in interview mode, digging for answers… including how do I prove I ghostwrote those bestsellers? And will my career as a movie extra ever amount to anything? Come and delve…

If you have tackled any of the questions I was asked about – including creating worlds or understanding a character's passion, share in the comments!

Should you publish your novel to build your platform?

Here's a phrase I'm hearing alarmingly often: 'I'm going to self-publish my novel and use it to build my platform'.

Sorry, but that's the wrong way round.

Except in a very few cases, it doesn't work.

Non-fiction

You can build a platform with a non-fiction book. If you're offering expertise, it's easy to find the people who need it. If you write about a life experience, you can connect with readers who seek similar support. And there are far fewer of you – and more room to be heard.

But novels?

Before you use your novel to launch your platform, go and look at Facebook. Goodreads. Twitter. Everyone is waving a novel.

The number of people you will reach by starting this way is negligible.

Successful self-publishers

There are many examples, of course, of successful self-published fiction authors. Everyone has their favourites to brandish. I'm going to talk about Joanna Penn. She didn't start with a novel. She started with a blog – The Creative Penn  – and built a loyal following while she taught herself about the writing and publishing world. By the time she launched her first novel, Pentecost, she had a great relationship with a lot of people.

Relationships rock

Relationships are what sell books, both fiction and non-fiction. That's what a platform is.

So to build your platform, get out there and blog, tweet, Facebook or whatever. Be natural, be yourself and build relationships. It's also much less of a strain if you're not trying to sell something.

And since you're not using your novel to build your platform, what are you going to do with it?

You might as well, um, query with it.

Yes, query

Stop grinding your teeth at the back there. We're agreed that relationships sell books? Agents have relationships with publishers. Publishers have relationships with distributors, the press, the places you cannot get reviewed if you do it all yourself. Yes, agents and publishers take their cut, but that's because they have a much bigger reach than one little writer on their own.

If you don't like the way a deal adds up, you can always refuse it. Or negotiate. But if you never try, you don't know what might have happened. If you want to have a publishing career (and why otherwise would you build a platform) it make sense to explore all the options.

'But every agent has different taste…'

Good writing is good writing. All agents are able to spot it. If you target enough agents who are a good fit for you, you will find out whether you are ready to go into print (or pixels) – or whether you should develop more. It is worth knowing that, isn't it?

'But it takes time…'

You're going to have to spend that time building your network anyway. And what's the hurry? You can't – or didn't – learn to write overnight.

'But everyone's publishing…'

I understand you're impatient to get out into the big publishing party. Really I do. When I first held a book that was filled with my words I felt the earth quiver.

But I'm now seeing a lot of people who have whizzed onto Kindle, are finding their novel doesn't sell, and are getting dispirited. That's a shame. That's the sound of dreams shattering.

Please don't mutter the name of Amanda, the lady my friend Porter Anderson dubbed Amanda Hocking [example of everything]. That's exactly what she is – an example of anything you like, including holy amounts of luck (and I wish her plenty more luck, BTW). But will the law of probabilities allow that to happen to you?

Build the relationship first

Relationships sell books. Build the relationship first, in whatever way you like, partnering with whoever seems right. That may be conventional industry routes; it may be creative collectives. Then you will have a platform, and you will have readers.

Thanks for the pic, Scottnj

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So, agree? Disagree? Sending the lynch mob…? I'm sure you'll have plenty to say in the comments

'A ballad of fairyland, but not sweet and innocent…' – The Undercover Soundtrack, Katherine Roberts

All novels need a dreaming stage, and my Undercover Soundtrack guest this week conjures hers in a rich aural tapestry of Celtic folk music and the lush whispers of Clannad. Indeed with a debut novel titled Song Quest, what would you expect? The first in her Pendragon Legacy series launches this week, and she'll be talking about the music that inspired both the story and the feisty heroine. Meet Katherine Roberts over at the Red Blog today

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Prologues: please use responsibly

If there's one word likely to make an editor bristle, it's prologue. Why? Because in many of the unready manuscripts I see, they're not necessary.

Writers often have trouble deciding where they're going to start their story. The first chapter takes multiple rewrites, mind-changes, tweaks and deletions. Chapter 1 frequently has more scar tissue than any other part of a novel.

There are so many decisions to make about what to squeeze in and what to leave out. Sometimes writers get carried away and I see novels with any or all of:

an introduction
a mission statement
an explanation of themes
a foreword (which as a tweeter has pointed out is technically written by someone other than the author)
a prologue
or sometimes two prologues.

Often these are little more than instructions for how to read what follows. But there are times when a prologue is welcome. Here's my guide to using prologues responsibly.

Not all bad

Readers relish prologues when:

they show us something important that is out of the main story's timeline, for instance something that would otherwise have to be shown in flashbacks or cumbersome exposition
they show action or characterisation that the reader needs to understand chapter 1, for instance the start of a war or a quest
they are vivid and entertaining in their own right

Even prologue enthusiasts do not like:

an info-dump for its own sake – or back story that should be worked into the main text in a more natural way or was simply not needed (writers are prone to include too much back story and resort to prologues to shoehorn it in)
when a prologue is really just the first chapter, given a fancy name – if you put prologue at the top, it had better be truly separate
when a prologue is a rehash of a dramatic moment from later in the story, shown out of order because the start of the book does not have enough of a hook.

However, as with everything arty, there's a fine balance to be struck. You can get away quite nicely with a prologue that comes from a scene near the end of the novel, to make us wonder how the characters got into such a mess.

Genre makes a difference

Some genres are more forgiving of prologues – fantasy and science fiction, for instance. These readers enjoy being plunged into unfamiliar worlds, and so the scene-setting aspect of a prologue is a helpful device.

But the closer the genre is to the everyday world of the reader, the less necessary a prologue is – because these readers want to be whirled in, immediately, to the people and the story they are going to follow, at the point that is most likely to hold their interest. They want you to unravel everything naturally and with your storytelling skill. However, they don't mind:

prologues that show a crisis from near the end of the novel – perhaps the main character on their deathbed or in some sort of showdown
an event from a point of view that we will never revisit.

If you're doing the latter, does it need to be a prologue? Many thrillers start with a startling event that happens to a character we will most likely never see again – quite often their gruesome demise. But these are usually called chapter 1. Why? Because they are the start of the story. Even though we're probably not going to hear a squeak from those unfortunate characters again. If your opening could quite happily be called chapter 1, you don't need to call it a prologue.

The first steps are the hardest

Novels are big. It's always hard to work out how to introduce an enormous work you know intimately to someone who knows nothing about it – and to do justice to it. You'll find this with the first chapter. You'll also find it with the pitch you'll write for an agent or editor, or the sales blurb, or if you try to answer that beastly question 'what's your novel about?'.

Sometimes prologues are useful and welcome. But make sure you really, really need one. And you probably don't need two.

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'These songs infused my writing with the freedom Vivian experienced on that vivid night' – The Undercover Soundtrack, Mary Vensel White

My Undercover Soundtrack guest this week has had a start many writers would envy. She posted her novel on the HarperCollins writer community Authonomy and this week it will be the first release under the new Authonomy imprint. That novel is The Qualities of Wood, the story of a couple who swap city life for the country, becoming enmeshed in a mystery that has far-reaching personal consequences. Join me on the red blog, where Mary talks about the music that went into her novel's making and informed her characters' journeys.

The empty world – is your novel eerily deserted?

This is me, passing before your eyes as an extra in Clint Eastwood's film Hereafter . (Here's my post about it, since you ask. Back now? On we go.) Blink and you'd miss me because your eye would quite rightly be on Matt Damon and the other characters who mean something to you.

And look at all the other folk in the scene. Extras, nameless, not even in the script. All of us, there to be ignored.

But if we weren't there you'd miss us even more.

Too quiet

Something I see so often in first novels is that scenes look unpopulated. The main characters and the setting may be well drawn, but there is no sense that there is anyone else in the world of the story. School gates are deserted; the shopping mall is empty; there is never another car on the road. It makes the reader feel something is wrong. Background people are a crucial detail for making us feel a scene is real.

I know why this happens. When you envisage a scene, it's hard enough to put in all the stuff that is relevant. But the background?

Directors on big movies have the same problem. They concentrate on the principals. The job of making a background come to life belongs to the assistant director and team. You almost have to do a similar thing yourself when writing – make one of your jobs populating the background.

Not too much

Of course, you don't want too much of it. It mustn't get in the way. When you're opening a scene and letting the reader know who's where and what they're doing, add a person or two – perhaps a woman with her chin snuggled in her yellow scarf, walking fast to her car. The postman in a fluorescent vest swinging his leg over his bicycle.

You can use details of movement or life to punctuate pauses in dialogue or to underline tensions. Perhaps one of your characters hears a clack of bricks being thrown from the scaffolded house into a skip. He thinks that throwing something was exactly what he felt like – and instead he's having a conversation that's going nowhere. Or someone sitting in a cafe sees someone at an adjacent table waving to a passing friend and it reinforces their sense of being alone.

Imagination wrung out like a rag?

Of course, we've all got enough to think about inventing our significant stuff. It used to frustrate me too until I discovered Flickr. Now I search for a street scene or a bar and grab one that has the right look and feel. Instant background people – and I can get back to the characters I know and what they're doing.

When you're setting your scene, don't forget the unimportant people.

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How did I dare self-publish… and should you? Interview at Welcome To Exeter…

How did I know my books were fit to publish? Did I work with editors on them? What kind of expert input do you need if you're self-publishing? Should you in fact, seek a traditional publisher first or go straight to KDP and hit 'send'? What were the biggest challenges and surprises once I did the deed? What bugs me about the indie 'scene', if you can call it that?

I'm at Jennie Coughlin's blog today, answering these questions and more. Jennie might be familiar to some of you as a recent guest on The Undercover Soundtrack over at the red blog, where she talked about writing Thrown Out: Stories from Exeter. She's also a journalist and has made it her mission this year to lobby for high standards in indie publishing. To this end, she is grilling those of us who've dared to publish our darlings. Come over and see how I did…

'The devastation left behind when someone dies' – The Undercover Soundtrack, Margot Kinberg

My guest today on The Undercover Soundtrack is mystery novelist Margot Kinberg. She says songs and the ideas she gets from them have always been woven into the stories she writes. Her novel B-Very Flat, which spins around the murder of a young music student, drew inspiration from JS Bach to Billy Joel to Andrew Lloyd Webber, influencing the way she developed her characters and understood their troubles. Join me now at the red blog for the full story