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This is a Good Book Thursday, July 20, 2023

This week I am reading legal papers and maps. But next week, boy, I am going to go to town on my Kindle app.

So tell me some good books I should read then.

Working Wednesday, July 19, 2023

Today, I am still packing a POD in NJ. Several snags have snagged. Unforeseen events have now been seen. I’m never getting out of New Jersey. I’ve been working on this move forever. And Bob has promised that when I get to PA, he will give me back the master of Rocky Start so I will have work there, so I really need to work to get there.

Distract me. What are you working on this week?

Exploiting You Again: Titles

So we need titles for the Rocky Start books. Bob and I kicked some ideas around–“kicked” being the operative word here, some of the right out of the conversation–and we came up with some, but . . . eh, we’re not there yet.

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The books are set in a town that’s about 1/3 retired agents. The heroine, Rose, had been hiding out there for nineteen years from the cops on an arrest her ex-lover framed her for. The hero, Max, is just passing through to pick up the boots his ex-boss sent there for him. So we were thinking some play on undercover work, romance, but quirky, off the wall. Because it’s us.

The Spy Who Liked Me is what I’m looking at for the first title, because the book only covers a week, so no time to fall in commitment love. But Bob says they’re not exactly spies.

Then there’s a treasure hunt for gold in the second one, so I suggested The Spy Who Came In With the Gold, but Bob said no.

He does like Dead Drop Gorgeous (thank you, Office Wench Cherry) for the one about three retired female assassins who are out to get each other.

NONE of these are set in stone. So what we need is

Three titles
that are quirky, offbeat
and relate to each other
and imply light hearted romance and some violence
while possibly riffing on the idea of retired or otherwise undercover agents and assassins.

We’re not going to use colors again, but some similarity in the titles is important.
And if there’s something visual there that the cover artist can start with, that would be great.

It’s that charming mixture of romance and violence, aka Crusie and Mayer, that we’re going for.

Have at it. I’m going to go move.

Happiness is a Writing Partner Who Is More Obsessive Than I Am

Okay, I will be the first to admit that I can be nuts. But it’s so nice to have Bob beside me being absolutely batshit insane about some things. It makes me feel so . . . normal. He’s obsessing about reviews now. What reviews? The ones for the book that’s out in ten days. Why is he obsessing about them? Because there aren’t any. Why aren’t there any? Because the book isn’t out for ten days yet.

And then this happened (and thank you, Jean, whoever you are, we love you):

I’m telling you, get yourself a paranoid writing partner. They make you look GOOD.

What made you look and feel good this week?

Argh Author: Jilly Woods The Seeds of Destiny

. Our own Jilly Wood has a new book out this week, The Seeds of Destiny.

Some secrets are too dangerous to share.

Annis Benkith sacrificed her future as a healer to prevent her tribe’s ruthless leaders from exploiting her powers. But when an energy-sick nobleman visits the Kith’s trading camp, she covertly reads his lifeshadow and barters her help for a new life in the lowlands.

The fascinating blueblood is Daire, crown prince of Caldermor. At his side Annis can be valued, even happy—provided she can keep him alive. She uses her own life to save his, unaware that her desperate act will leave Daire unable to fulfill his duties under a vital, age-old pact. If Daire’s stewardship fails, Caldermor will fall.

Daire is offered a reprieve if he banishes Annis. Instead, he vows to keep her close and save the Legacy. But as time runs out, Annis must choose whether to leave the life—and the man—she has grown to love…or risk everything on her last, most fiercely guarded, secret.

The Seeds of Destiny wraps up the Elan Intrigues fantasy romance series. If you like brave heroines, bighearted heroes, hard choices, and powerful magic, you’ll enjoy this dramatic historical fantasy by award-winning author Jilly Wood.

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Quick Question

Did any of you get a mass e-mail from Amazon or anyone else saying Lavender was available on Amazon?
Nothing’s wrong, we’re just trying to solve a mystery here.

ETA: Mollie got a mass e-mail, so that’s what happened. Mystery solved. Evidently you had to be signed up to get news about my books, which nobody here has to do because I bombard you with that info relentlessly.

This is a Good Book Thursday, July 13, 2023

This week, I read the label on my bottle of Wellbutrin. The stuff gives me hallucinations, but it does keep me from vibrating with tension. Next week, I’ll be reading books again. So much better.

What did you read this week?

Working Wednesday, July 12, 2023

I’m moving to another state in five days. Guess what I’m working on.

Ignore me, I’m going to be mostly gone here for awhile. What are you working on?

Questionable: How Do You Use Doppelgängers?

Kat wrote:
“Have you used a doppelgänger before? . . . I’d love to hear more about the specific pairings in your books.”

First, let’s define some terms. A doppelgänger is a double, a character who is the duplicate of another character, often an evil twin or a supernatural entity that tries to take over its twin’s life. The term is from the German, meaning “double walker,” and it’s often creepy, but it can also be use used as a story-telling device: here are two characters who are essentially the same; watch one of them change while the other one stays the same and acts as a foil or point of comparison to its twin. I’m not a big writer of evil, so I use it to show character, not as an actual plot point; that is, Liz never thinks, “My god, I have a doppelgänger,” but people do point out some of the similarities to her.

As an example of the doppelgänger in characterization, in Macbeth (my favorite Shakespeare), in the beginning, Macbeth and Banquo are honest, loyal, blood-covered warriors celebrating a victory when they meet the witches. The witches prophesy that Macbeth will be given the title of thane, that Macbeth will be king, and that Banquo’s sons will be kings after Macbeth. Banquo rejects the prophecies, as far as he’d concerned, they already have a king and he’s loyal. But then messengers show up with the news that the king has made Macbeth a thane, and Macbeth says, “Well, wait a minute . . .” and his fall begins.

Although Macbeth’s actions are monstrous throughout the play, it’s the comparison to Banquo that really shows how far he’s fallen. After Macbeth murders the king and takes the throne, two of the prophecies fulfilled, he cannot stop obsessing over that third one, and gives orders to kill Banquo, his best friend and loyal subject, and Banquo’s son Fleance. But you don’t mess with witches: Banquo dies but Fleance escapes to engender the future kings.

So you begin with two noble, loyal knights, and end with one ravening maniac of a murderer and one knight who is loyal to the end. That’s a great use of a foil and doppelgänger. Also a helluva a story that has so much more going on, including the gender politics of Lady Macbeth. If I’d had any courage at all, I’d have become an actress, and the role I’d have gone after first is the good wife, Lady Macbeth. She fascinates me.

Where was I? Right, doppelgängers.

So mild spoilers for Lavender’s Blue ahead.

****SKIP THIS SPACE FOR MILD SPOILERS, LIKE IF YOU DON’T KNOW WHO THE MURDER VICTIM IS*******

Liz Danger is a tall, rebellious dirty blonde who left Burney fifteen years before the story starts.
Lavender Blue is a tall, conservative platinum blonde, who left Burney but has stayed involved, working in nearby Cincinnati but spending a lot of time politically and socially in the small town.

Liz Danger had an on again/off again relationship with Cash Porter, Burney’s golden boy, mostly off again because he was a cheater and kept dumping her, but she stuck because she loved him.
Lavender Blue, as the story opens, is engaged to Cash Porter, still the town’s golden boy, permanently in a relationship with him because he’s going to be running for state senator, and she’s looking ahead to a life of power and influence; Cash is still cheating, but she doesn’t love him, so she’s indifferent to it.

Liz Danger comes home and her presence immediately causes waves in town since Cash is marrying Lavender and his family much prefers Liz.
Lavender Blue smooths the waves, invites Liz into her wedding.

One of the plot points revolves around their superficial resemblance, which includes not only “tall and blonde,” but also “cold and efficient.” Liz has sealed herself off from caring about people, Lavender was born into a cold family and has never known another way to act..

Okay, why all this messing about with doppelgängers?

Because it’s dangerous for Liz to go home. Somebody there really hates her, wants her dead (thus the tagline “Would it kill you to go home and see your mother?”). But I can’t kill my protagonist, this is not a ghost story. What I can do is kill her by proxy, offing the character who is her double walker, the woman who is walking in the steps of her life, engaged to her first love, reversing Liz’s ways of dealing with it all. Liz likes Lavender in spite of her flaws, knowing she has a lot of flaws herself. There’s a connection there, so Liz suffers a psychic death when Lavender dies.

But Liz has also been affected by things that Lavender doesn’t connect to, so the contrast of Lavender as a foil is at work as Liz changes and Lavender doesn’t. Lavender knows Vince and thinks of him as beneath her, just a local cop. Liz meets Vince and is attracted to him, flirts with him, sees his worth, and begins to connect with him on a deeper level. Lavender has a niece who needs help, but Lavender is busy. Liz pays attention to the kid, setting up a strong relationship in the next book, Rest in Pink. Lavender is passionately interested in what Cash can do for her (and he’s the same for what she can do for him), Liz is passionately interested in never being involved with Cash again (and he’s the opposite). Lavender and her mother have an awful strained relationship; Liz and her mother have a strained relationship they’re trying to navigate because Liz can’t walk away from her, she loves her mother. The more trauma that happens, the colder Lavender grows (in more ways than one); the more trauma that happens, the warmer Liz grows, trying to save people, connecting to them in spite of herself because she cares about them.

**** End of Lavender Spoilers *****

In short, I really needed Lavender to be Liz’s doppelgänger/foil so I could make it plain how, even though Liz is a cold fish in the beginning, her character arc to warmth is there in the contrast.

Kat asked what other doppelgängers I’d used, but first let’s do another one of my favorites: Indiana Jones.

Raiders of the Lost Ark opens with two archeologist/thieves battling over a religious artifact of an ancient tribe. Jones and Belloq are the same guy. We root for Jones because he’s the first character we attach to and because he’s Harrison Ford, but look at these guys: they’re both racist assholes stealing powerful objects they cannot understand because they think everything is up for grabs. Then the events of the story unfold, Jones gets slapped upside the head both literally and emotionally, symbolically goes to hell in a snake pit and is reborn in some pretty blatant birth imagery (I love this damn movie, it works those tropes like a pro), and finally comes face to face with The Religious Artifact To Rule Them All, the Ark of the Covenant. Belloq gets dressed up, ready to open the Ark and take its power, and Jones says to Marion, “Don’t look” because he’s learned there are things beyond his ken, things he is not meant to see or have. He closes his eyes, Belloq opens the arc . . . and well, you know how that goes. (Come on, that movie’s forty years old, if you haven’t seen it by now, get on that.). Raiders is one of the most blatant uses of the doppelgänger that I’ve ever seen; both men even throw Marion away, Jones when he dumps her as a teenager and Belloq when he throws her in the snake pit. Spielberg wasn’t even trying to be subtle. I love it.

So working backward in my own stuff:

Andie and May in Maybe This Time: both wanting North, both wanting second chances, both angry about their pasts, both dealing with Alice as surrogate mothers, both failing Carter as surrogate mothers. Obvious foil moment: at the end when May tries to convince North she’s Andie in order to take her place, and he knows immediately she’s not.

Agnes and Brenda in Agnes and the Hitman: Agnes is trying to become Brenda, buying her house, cooking, getting engaged to a local, etc. Brenda is trying to take over Agnes’s life: scamming to get her home back and marrying Agnes’s fiancé. Brenda works as a foil when Agnes tells Shane she’ll leave Two Rivers, it’s just a house, and Brenda kills somebody to get the house back. Their final battle in the kitchen is no accident: It’s where they both draw power from, the heart of the house.

Min and Cynthie in Bet Me: Both blonde, both rational and logical, both decent people, both in love with Cal. Foils because Cynthie is traditionally attractive and Min is not, and Cynthie uses traditional seduction to achieve her ends and Min uses confrontation and honesty. If they weren’t so similar, their differences wouldn’t resonate.

Those first two are protagonist/antagonist doppelgängers, which I particularly love because it’s such a good way of showing why the protagonist (in those stories) win and the antagonist fails: The protagonist learns through the story how to be a better, stronger person and the antagonist doesn’t. Jones learns that stealing religion from people is bad, Belloq doesn’t. Andie learns to understand Alice, Carter, North, and accepts who they are; May just takes what she wants without understanding the people she’s taking from, assuming they’ll change for her. Min changes and becomes more open, taking chances; Cynthie holds onto her preconceptions about herself and Cal, trying to get back her old life even though it’s dead. Jones, Andie, and Min change; Belloq, May, and Cynthie don’t. (The flip side is at work in MacBeth: Banquo doesn’t change and keeps his nobility and his place in heaven; Macbeth changes and falls and spends eternity in Hell wishing he’d ignored the witches.)

I’m sure I’ve done other doppelgängers because it’s a trope I really like and it’s a workhorse of a characterization tool, but that’s enough about me. Liz and Lavender are probably the most overt use I’ve made of that trope, and I’m really pleased with how that worked out.

So how I use doppelgängers?

1. Set up parallels that you can draw from the story: appearance, place/setting, goals, flaws, relationships, etc.
2. Show how the two characters are alike especially in their flaws, the things that need to change.
3. Arc one character’s story to make her change while the other character ignores or resists the pressure to grow.
4. Pay off the difference in those arc with basing the climax/outcome on the differences in those changes.

I should also point out that I don’t plan doppelgängers too far ahead of time. I get a chunk of the story down and then look at it to see what it’s about and if I can use it. In the story we’re working on now, my protagonist is a woman with no career who dresses in frumpy aprons and doesn’t wear make-up and gets by on charm and manipulation. Her best friend is an elegant lawyer who used logic and reason to navigate the world. They’re both middle-aged, they’re both single mothers of daughters in high school, they both live in a strange little town, they’re both hiding out from/refusing contact with their exes. I don’t know if they’re doppelgängers yet because the book isn’t finished, but even beyond that, I don’t see how I could use that. On the other hand, the antagonist is also a single mother, but she doesn’t share anything else with Rose, so I don’t see how I could use it there, either. Maybe when the book is done something will become clear, but right now, those are just characters who have some similarities. No reason to make them doppelgängers.

And I want to repeat: this is not a technique anybody has to use or should use. Many roads to Oz.

[Anybody else got a Questionable? I’m moving next Monday, so after that I’ll be able to play again since the worst will be over.]

Happiness is Something Exciting Ahead

I like quiet. Peace. Silence. So I’d forgotten what it was like to be looking at a major life change, happy to be going toward it. By this time next week, I should be in a new place, trying to peel a freaked-out Veronica off the ceiling, explain to Emily William that yes, that is her cactus cat tower and her food dish is inside it as usual, full. That makes me happy, along with the new office I’m going to set up, and the new kitchen I’ll have, and two bathrooms so when Krissie comes to stay, she’ll finally have some privacy. And lunches with Pat Gaffney and heated swimming pools and lot of restaurants and a whole new town to discover. I should have done this YEARS ago. And more books to write and read and new recipes to try and . . .

This week I am very happy about next week.

What made you happy this week?