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May 1, 2013

To Flashback or Not to Flashback: Ask 5 Questions

Flashbacks are tricky to write, and some authors recommend avoiding them altogether. Readers sometimes skip flashbacks because they look like mere interruptions. Here are some questions to ask yourself to ensure your flashback is a welcome addition to your work.

1. Does this flashback shed light on the character(s) and the present story in a significant way?
2. Is it a scene with dialogue and action, preferably showing characters in conflict?
3. Does the story slip into and out of the flashback as quickly as possible?
4. Is the first sentence of the flashback compelling?
5. Is it written in simple past tense rather than past perfect (example: “walked” vs. “had walked”)?

If you’ve polished your flashback to perfection but it still feels like an interruption, cut it out and shed light on your character(s) and plot through the present scene instead.

Happy revising!
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Published on May 01, 2013 11:54

April 3, 2013

Pick up the Pace

Are you having a hard time identifying why your book lags in certain spots or feels a little slow moving throughout? If so, here are a few areas to consider tightening up.

Dialogue can be a major culprit. If you’re not sure where to start trimming, ask yourself the following questions: Is the dialogue repetitive? Does it over explain? Is it too wordy? Does it move the story forward? Is it dull?

If your book contains too many lengthy descriptions of characters, objects, or places, readers might skip paragraphs or even entire pages. So cut back, keeping the most relevant passages.

Avoid redundancies. Give readers new thoughts, explanations, and descriptions instead of repeating the same ones.

Using too many long sections of narrative might slow down your story. Try breaking them up with dialogue or an action scene.

Good luck!
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Published on April 03, 2013 09:26 Tags: authors, books, helen-a-rosburg, helen-rosburg, novels, publisher, romance, wrigley

March 1, 2013

Pick up the Pace

Are you having a hard time identifying why your book lags in certain spots or feels a little slow moving throughout? If so, here are a few areas to consider tightening up.

Dialogue can be a major culprit. If you’re not sure where to start trimming, ask yourself the following questions: Is the dialogue repetitive? Does it overexplain? Is it too wordy? Does it move the story forward? Is it dull?

If your book contains too many lengthy descriptions of characters, objects, or places, readers might skip paragraphs or even entire pages. So cut back, keeping the most relevant passages.

Avoid redundancies. Give readers new thoughts, explanations, and descriptions instead of repeating the same ones.

Using too many long sections of narrative might slow down your story. Try breaking them up with dialogue or an action scene.

Good luck!
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Published on March 01, 2013 15:39 Tags: authors, books, helen-a-rosburg, helen-rosburg, novels, publisher, romance, wrigley

February 8, 2013

Make Your Art

Book reviewers have an important job: to share their opinions of works they’re assigned to read. Their perspectives are subjective. One reviewer’s idea of what makes a book unsatisfying may be the same thing that makes it great for another reader.

Each of us brings experiences and expectations to the books we read. One of us, for example, may enjoy a raw account of a story while another may enjoy a more literary delivery. A reviewer’s preference may appear in a review.

Being an author and putting your work out there for the world to see is a courageous endeavor. When the first review comes in, it can numb your typing fingers, dismantle your creative synapses.

When you’re able, face that review. Take what you can from it that’s helpful. But do not stop writing.

Your art, your voice, your perspective—these are things that only you can bring to the world. Keep learning. Keep writing. Keep making your art. Because every writer who’s worth reading has faced the fear of failing head-on and won.

For all of us.

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Published on February 08, 2013 08:28 Tags: helen-a-rosburg, helen-rosburg, medallion-press, novels, romance, wrigley

January 2, 2013

Read Our Minds: What Makes Us Love or Leave a Book?

To kick off the New Year, we hope to help you kick-start your novel plans with a little extra inside information. Ever wish you could get inside readers’ minds and find out what compels them to read—or not read? Well, we’ve polled a small sample of readers: our publishing team! (Full disclosure: some weren’t able to participate, but we have a nice little selection for you, if we do say so ourselves.)

Here’s the question we asked our team:
Let’s say you’re at a bookstore browsing your favorite section. You pick up a few books and read a page or two each. Judging the text itself, what one thing makes you want to keep reading and what one thing makes you want to put the book down?

Feel free to read our minds:



1. What makes you want to keep reading?

Emily: A unique (particularly, witty) voice.

Adam: If I’m thrust right into the middle of the tension, especially if it’s left unresolved for later.

Lorie: A refreshing premise.

Paul: Setup. Are the characters, location, story, and writing style setting up a potentially dynamic finish?

Michal: A character, scene, or action that seems unique.

Brian: I like an engaging preface/prologue/introduction that hooks me in.

Brigitte: A tense and suspenseful plot.

Jim: It needs to be engaging me from the start. I’m much like Adam and Brian here. That’s why I loved reading [Road Warrior] Animal’s story.

Ali: I’m with Emily. If it immediately shows me sharp wit, I’m in.

Helen: I keep reading a book if the main characters are so compelling I must get to know them better.

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2. What makes you want to put the book down?

Emily: Clunky, confusing sentences.

Adam: No sense of atmosphere. All focus on character descriptions with little sense of the environment they’re in.

Lorie: Too much telling instead of showing.

Paul: All of the above, plus no fun or cool character(s) with whom I want to take a journey.

Michal: Drawn-out exposition.

Brian: Lorie and Michal’s answers. I recently stopped reading a novel that fit this description. Also poor character buildup.

Brigitte: Too much character and atmosphere description along with repetitiveness.

Jim: Excessive repetition of story elements, overdone descriptions, and no immediate progression of the story.

Ali: If it’s too generic or predictable, I’ll definitely put it down.

Helen: I will put it down if the first chapter leads me toward a trite, done-too-many-times, formulaic plot.

Authors, as you plan, write, or edit your novel, we hope this sheds a little light on what at least some readers are looking for.

Now it’s your turn! What makes you want to keep reading a book or set it down for good?

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Published on January 02, 2013 08:59 Tags: author, helen-a-rosburg, helen-rosburg, novel, reader, romance, wrigley, writer

December 3, 2012

Novels and Research: An Oxymoron?

Writing a nonfiction book requires a tremendous amount of research, but what about novels? Surely you don’t need to do any research for those. You’re just making everything up as you go along, right?

Wrong.

Even though novels feature invented characters and situations, most contain characters with real jobs in real locations with real references to pop culture and geography and products and businesses. Details matter. It’s important to keep the reader immersed in the world you’ve created, but factual errors might yank the reader right out of the story. Worse, they might even make the reader set your book aside.

Below are a few examples of the kinds of details to keep in mind while constructing your fictional—yet realistic—world.



If your story takes place in a real town, it’s usually best to use the actual names of streets, restaurants, landmarks, and the like, but you can always make up names as long as they don’t exist in another city, which might be confusing or appear incorrect. Verify where stores and other businesses are located and mention them accordingly. For instance, your characters can’t stop at an In-N-Out in Vermont or an IKEA in Montana.

Sometimes aspects of your characters’ jobs play an important role in the story. If your protagonist is a cop, you probably need to find out certain procedures he must follow. It’s usually unnecessary to explain most details of his job, but you should portray a reasonably accurate picture of it.

If your characters drive across the country or even across town, make sure it takes a realistic amount of time and the roads they use are correct. It’s also necessary to keep track of time zones and other timing and location issues when they cross state lines or leave the country. Avoid errors like a character flying from Chicago to Dublin on an airline that doesn’t travel that route.

Be aware of happenings in pop culture and when products were introduced. A character can’t use an iPhone before it was invented or listen to a song that hasn’t been released yet. Even if your book is set in present day, you might still need to double-check these references in flashbacks or memories.

In historical novels pay extra attention to realistic dialogue, when things were invented, and historical accuracy. Let’s say you’re writing a book set in 1900. Your protagonist can’t reference the Golden Gate Bridge or offer her child an Oreo. That’s because construction of the bridge began in 1933 and Oreos debuted in 1912. And be sure to check the dictionary for when words and phrases were coined. You just might be surprised.

Of course, most of this research can easily be done online. So if you’re counting on a trip to Hawaii to research your novel, you’ll probably need to come up with another excuse. But, hey, when you start collecting all these unusual facts, at least you’ll be unbeatable at trivia games.
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Published on December 03, 2012 13:51 Tags: author, helen-a-rosburg, helen-rosburg, novels, romance, vampire, wrigley

November 2, 2012

Five Ways to Get out of the Way

Your job as a writer is to send readers on an emotional journey. How do you do that? By getting out of the way. Here are five tips to help you do that:
Avoid clichés. Readers may not even realize why, but their interest level will plummet when they confront an exhausted cliché. Satisfy your readers with the fresh metaphors and similes they crave. ..
Show; don’t tell. Modern audiences don’t have the patience to sit through narrative summary the way readers used to. When we read narrative summary, we’re reading the story through a filter: the author. Instead of being a filter, you can allow us to enter the story for ourselves. How do you do that? Not by telling us about what happens or how a character feels but by showing us what’s happening and allowing the character to live through dialogue and action in the moment. Do you have a page in which nothing visual happens? Revise. .
Avoid melodrama. Readers want to feel real emotions when we dedicate our time to a book. Is there a scene or a phrase that’s too sticky-sweet, too affected? Are you trying to force feelings on readers, or are you providing a journey that resonates? If you want us to remain immersed in the story, avoid melodrama. .
Use all the senses. Allow readers to enter the story world you created by showing us what the POV character hears, feels, tastes, smells, and sees. (However, you don’t need to use these words to show us. See “Overused Words and Point of View” http://medallionmediagroup.com/overus....) Practice using your senses by limiting some of them in various environments. Sit outside with a blindfold on, ear plugs in, or both. What does the breeze feel like? What do you smell? Share those fresh perspectives as you write. .
Avoid coincidences. Maybe they do happen in life, but coincidences shouldn’t appear in your story, especially not in the climax. Deus ex machina robs readers of an authentic emotional journey. Coincidences turn characters into paper dolls. We don’t want to watch you playing with paper dolls, dear author. We’re looking for real people to identify with. To fix coincidences, build in reasons for events to occur. Events should be inevitable, even if surprising.

In the spirit of the season, we thank you for your dedication to the craft of writing. And we wish you the very best on your path to creating meaningful journeys for your readers.
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Published on November 02, 2012 08:40 Tags: helen-rosburg, romance, wrigley

October 8, 2012

Powerful Little Rules

What’s the point of learning grammar and punctuation rules these days? In books, work e-mails, and even tweets, we want to communicate clearly. We want to connect, understand, and be understood. Proper grammar and punctuation are powerful tools to help you do just that.

Particularly when you’re writing a manuscript, you want your ideas to translate clearly to the reader. You don’t want to give an acquiring editor or reader a reason to stumble over your sentences and set your work down.

Here are some little grammar and punctuation rules that will help you make your point.



Modifier placement

When a sentence includes a participle (adjective ending in –ing or -ed), the noun it describes should be placed next to it.



Example:

Walking through the dark hallway, the man was barely visible to her.

Who is walking through the hallway? The reader will initially assume “the man” is, but by the end of the sentence, the reader will know otherwise. The following is a clear, correct construction:

Walking through the dark hallway, she barely saw the man.



Its/it’s

“Its” is a possessive pronoun that functions in a sentence just like “his” or “her” does. (Notice that “his” and “her” are possessive but do not have apostrophes.)

The dog wagged its tail.

“It’s” is a contraction for “it is.”

It’s time to go to the party.

This rule is an important one. Every time it’s used correctly, an angel gets its wings.



Punctuating “however”

“However” can join two independent clauses (subject and verb combinations that make sense on their own). Here are two independent clauses:

She went to the show.
She didn’t pay attention.

Here’s how you join the two with “however”:
She went to the show. However, she didn’t pay attention.

Or:

She went to the show; however, she didn’t pay attention.

If you use a comma before “however” here, the reader will have to circle back to realize you’ve begun the second clause.

Alternatively, you can simply write this:

She went to the show, but she didn’t pay attention.

Most concise:

She went to the show but didn’t pay attention.

Notice that when the second part loses its subject (“she”), it is no longer an independent clause. No comma is needed to separate a compound verb (“went to the show” and “didn’t pay attention”).



Punctuating direct address

When you address someone directly in writing, you need to use a comma to set off the name.

Example:

Hello, Sam.

Now we want you to try something. Exchange “Hello” with “Let’s eat.”

Let’s eat, Sam.

What happens when we delete the required comma?

Let’s eat Sam.

That means something entirely different. Let’s hope it appears in a horror novel.



Lay/lie

“Lay” and “lie” are frequently confused. Here’s the difference.

“Lay” is a transitive verb, which means it must be paired with an object. Example:

He will lay the weapon on the ground.

“The weapon” is the object here.

Here’s what “lay” looks like in past tense and present tense:

Past: He laid the weapon on the ground.

Present: He lays the weapon on the ground.

“Lie” is an intransitive verb, which means no object follows. Example:

He will lie down to sleep.

Here’s what “lie” looks like in past tense and present tense:

Past: He lay down to sleep.

Present: He lies down to sleep.



These are just a few rules that will help you communicate clearly. Take it one rule at a time, and your writing will become progressively clearer.

Which grammar or punctuation rules trip you up? Tell us in the comments, and we’ll help you out. We promise it’s a judgment-free zone here.

Oh, look, an angel got its wings
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Published on October 08, 2012 14:57 Tags: author, helen-a-rosburg, helen-rosburg, novels, reading, romance, wrigely, wrigely-heiress, writing

September 5, 2012

Call for Submissions

Attention, authors and agents:

Medallion Press is currently working toward filling our 2014 list. We’re interested in compelling, memorable stories told in distinctive voices.

In fiction, we’re seeking thrillers, suspense, sci-fi, fantasy, romance, mystery, mainstream, literary, horror, historical, and YA. We also seek YA written by young adults. If you have a manuscript you’d like us to consider for publication, please use our submission form at http://medallionmediagroup.com/submis....

Our nonfiction publications include memoirs and coffee table books, and we want to expand the line. At this time, we consider agented nonfiction only. Are you representing a fascinating nonfiction project? Editorial Director Emily Steele would love to hear about it. Please e-mail a proposal to her at emily(at)medallionmediagroup.com. For completed nonfiction manuscripts, use our submission form at http://medallionmediagroup.com/submis....

We look forward to hearing from you!



Why Choose Medallion Press?

Author-Friendly

Medallion Press is an author-friendly publishing house. When you developed your manuscript, you did so with a freedom of expression in your unique voice. At many publishing houses, the author’s voice gets lost in the development process. But when you sign a contract with us, you don’t suddenly disappear from our contact list only to resurface when it’s time to market your book. You’ll be included in virtually every step of development. From jacket blurbs to cover art to marketing ideas, you’ll keep your freedom to express yourself and keep your original voice intact.

What Box?

At Medallion Press, we strive to create culture, not follow it. That’s why our approach to book publishing is innovative. We think neither in the box nor out of the box. We think, What box? This allows us to remain on the cutting edge of literature, art, marketing, and content delivery.

Distribution

Our distribution partners, Independent Publishers Group (IPG), are the best in the business. Through their expert distribution services for innovative publishers, IPG is a perfect fit for Medallion’s cutting-edge techniques. We collaborate with IPG throughout the entire development and marketing process to ensure that your book gets optimal consideration from industry buyers and maximum exposure to consumers. IPG handles print distribution and provides one of the industry’s best e-book distribution channels to maximize sales opportunities in the digital realm.

Foreign Sales

Not only do we pursue domestic sales, but we also have great representation in the foreign market. We present titles to foreign publishers twice a year at the London Book Fair and the Frankfurt Book Fair and have ongoing representation in over twenty-six countries, including Brazil, China, France, Greece, Italy, Japan, and many more!

Independent, Not Small

Make no mistake. We are an independent press, not a small press. From bookstores to libraries, independents to chains, foreign to film rights, local to worldwide promotion, nothing we do is small. Our covers are reputed among the best in the industry. Our editorial staff is second to none. Our marketing efforts are leading the industry into the new age of book promotion. Our independent spirit is strong, and our shoulders are big enough to carry the weight.

Publishing Is a Partnership

We can brag all we want, but in the end, publishing is a partnership. It’s never solely about what we do, what you write, or what our distributors do to put it on bookshelves. Publishing is about all of us working together to create an unforgettable experience for the end consumer. We want our readers to appreciate your work so much that they tell all their friends and family about the new book they must read. That’s our wish, our ultimate goal. We can’t do it without you.
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Published on September 05, 2012 14:20 Tags: authors, helen-a-rosburg, helen-rosburg, publishing, readers, romance, wrigley

August 21, 2012

Angelique has been nominated!

Great news!

My iPad app for the animated illustrated novella, Angelique, was just nominated for the 2012 Chicago Innovation awards!!! I couldn't be happier. Please be sure to visit my website for more news. I will also be having a huge contest for Angelique. I have decided to give away several iPads. I will be running several different contest in various places, Facebook, my website, Eye on Romance and more. I hope you visit soon and keep your fingers crossed that we come home a winner!

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Published on August 21, 2012 14:42 Tags: angelique, app, audiobook, ebook, helen-a-rosburg, helen-rosburg, illustrated, ipad, romance, vampire, wrigely-heiress