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May 31, 2024
REVIEW: The Devising by Jacob Sannox
Last Updated on June 2, 2024
A new age rises with the world standing against Dark Oak. In this age, the ascended spirits of the world share mankind’s war. A war in which no one will remain unscathed. The cycle of nature, the rebirthing of souls, is broken. The conclusion of The Dark Oak Chronicles brings forth an epic finale, a war of ultimate death. All are in peril in Jacob Sannox’s The Devising.
Dark Oak’s quest to protect the forest leads him to Halwende, the former home of the Dark Lord Awgren. He will use whatever force necessary to ensure humanity never recovers their strength but they no longer stand alone. The spirits of the forest, water, and air, the ascended are coming to end his reign. Dark Oak must unravel the Dark Lord’s secrets and harness the knowledge hidden there. If he is to fight immortal beings, he must surpass the Dark Lord’s power.
Jacob Sannox saves the most astonishing battles for his final book in The Dark Oak Chronicles. Dark Oak’s war of souls is fought with true dark magic. His use of the Devising births horrors. In these diabolic scenes, a little more time could have been spent from the victim’s perspective. The Devising is hellish imagination unleashed.
The world is churning in Jacob Sannox’s The Devising. While Dark Oak cultivates his Devised magic, others are executing their own schemes. His own alliance with the Weavers and dependency on their Devised powers are at odds. The Weavers have been studying Devising long before Dark Oak and the Dark Lord Awgren came to Halwende for their knowledge. Their cause is greater in scale than any war lord’s. Meanwhile, fractured as they are, humanity begins to rebuild.
The numerous perspectives in The Devising fanfare its finale. Ailsa is now leader of Queen Cathryn’s people. Instead of becoming regent, she looks for new ways to govern. The dishonored and defeated Feran, once Queen Cathryn’s knight, tries to find his path. His perspective on loss has a strong impact across all chapters. Rowan continues as one of the most memorable characters throughout the series.
The Dark Oak Chronicles is faithful to classic epic fantasy series. Grand scale events drive its narrative, but the intimate battles endured by characters such as Rowan form the heart of Jacob Sannox’s story. Her fight for her family makes the final ending in The Devising bittersweet and memorable.
Everything leads to this final battle in The Devising. A conclusion eras in the making, compiling all the schemes from dead rulers, humanity’s survivors, and dark lords. The fate of all souls is sealed in Jacob Sannox’s third and final book of The Dark Oak Chronicles.
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REVIEW: Running Close to the Wind by Alexandra Rowland
Alexandra Rowland delivers chaotic queer pirates with insanely high sex-drives, mystifying turtle astronomy, dangerous sea serpents in breeding season, loveable glowing dogs, and an absurd cake competition in Running Close to the Wind, an unapologetically unhinged seafaring fantasy with a fun-factor that is simply off the charts!
A horny as hell former Arasti spy with inexplicable good luck, a grumpy non-binary captain fed up with everyone’s bullshit, and an ungodly hot monk with an unfortunate vow of celibacy are stuck together at sea while they try to escape the law and change the tide for the crew; no, it’s not the beginning of a bad joke, but the insanely ridiculous set-up for Running Close to the Wind.
Though set in the same queer-normative world as Rowland’s slow-burn political fantasy A Taste of Gold and Iron, this feel-good and chaotic fantasy romcom is a completely different beast and stands totally on its own. It’s raunchy yet low-spice, hysterical yet poignant, and overall just batshit crazy on every single level, but I was personally eating up the hijinx and mayhem. I mean, Rowland clearly had a strong vision, and they damn well ran with it!
Never before have I read a book with such an exceptionally infuriating, insufferable, and pathetic protagonist, whom I constantly wanted to strangle, but also inexplicably loved to pieces (for which I then wanted to strangle myself). See, our little gremlin Avra is a self-proclaimed flibbertigibbet and whiny little slut with zero impulse-control and a personality more annoying than that of a mewling, clingy wet cat, yet somehow he just burrowed his way into my heart. Don’t get me wrong, I probably would’ve yeeted him straight over the railing of the ship within seconds of meeting him myself, yet I am admittedly also exceptionally glad that the characters in Running Close to the Wind had (slightly) more patience with him than I would have had.
And speaking of other characters, it is truly beyond me how Rowland managed to write such a loud and energy-sucking protagonist without having the rest of the crew pale in comparison. The broody, witty, and suave Captain Teveri (a.k.a. the on-again, off-again ex lover whom Avra simply worships) is a really refreshing counterbalance to Avra’s chaos, and I absolutely loved their tragically entertaining captain logs at the end of most chapters. Much to their deep dismay, they just can’t seem to stop themself from being drawn in by Avra’s irresistible charm, and the amount of exasperation-fueled banter between the two amused me to no end.
But that level of queer messiness clearly wasn’t enough, so enter Brother Julian (my personal favourite). Truly, I can’t blame Avra and Teveri for low-key starting a bet on who could get him to break his vow of celibacy first, as I would have joined that competition without a second thought. However, Julian quickly proves that he is not just sinfully sexy, and his actions actually end up bringing some of the most powerful themes and social commentary into the narrative.
Because yes, while this is absolutely a fun and almost cosy fantasy romcom at its heart, there is a deep undercurrent of righteous anger woven into Running Close to the Wind that Sir Terry Pratchett himself would have been proud of. Themes of capitalism, religion, and the injustice of all-powerful institutions are delivered in a cleverly funny way, and one particularly impassioned speech by Julian had me pumping my fists in the air and screaming “FUCK YES” out loud; sometimes messages deserve to be heard loud and clear, no subtlety needed.
Now, I do have to admit that the pacing felt a bit rocky at times, but if there was ever a book which I can forgive for a slightly messy and unfocused plot, then it’s Running Close to the Wind. Between Avra’s ridiculous antics, all the crazy pirate adventures, the queer messiness, and the deliciously intense interpersonal drama, there simply wasn’t a single dull moment in this story, and I am not ashamed to admit that I devoured nearly 300 pages of it in one day.
It’s hard to give this book a glowing universal recommendation considering how subjective humour is, but if you liked the vibes of Gideon the Ninth or like the idea of an even more unhinged version of Pratchett-esque absurdity, then this should be smooth sailing for you! I personally think Rowland nailed the execution of their vision for this story, and I would honestly praise this book into the heavens. If you think you are ready to meet Avra and crew to go on one of the most hysterical and delightfully queer fantasy adventures you will ever have the pleasure of experiencing, then I can’t recommend Running Close to the Wind highly enough.
Thank you to Tordotcom for providing me with an eARC in exchange for an honest review. All opinions are my own. Running Close to the Wind is scheduled for release on June 11th, 2024.
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May 30, 2024
An Interview with Markus Heitz
Markus Heitz is one of the most well-known and popular German fantasy authors. He published The Dwarves in 2003 (its English translation was released in 2009) and has been a professional author since. His work spans from dark epic fantasy to horror and thrillers, and even to games writing and children’s books. In The Return of the Dwarves, we return to the beloved world for new adventures. Heitz is one of my foundational authors, kindling a love for fantasy back in my school days, so it’s particularly exciting to be able to speak to him about his new book, returning to familiar worlds and international editions.
[GdM] Can you introduce The Return of the Dwarves to our audience in a sentence or two?
[MH] Well… the dwarves are returning. I always endeavour to ensure that the title and content are congruent. I don’t want to spoil anything about the content. For dramaturgical reasons. 
But I can reveal that there will be a few surprises on this return. As far as I’m concerned, I’ll reveal that it could be about a very famous hero dwarf, for one thing. But I swear, there are plenty of new things to discover.
[GdM] The Dwarves was your first big success – books I personally grew up with and devoured. What has driven you to return to this world, to build so directly on your legacy?
[MH] It was about seven years before I decided to add new dwarvish stories to the previous ones. I thought about it for a long time: to tie in or not, to rebuild the country, what changes do I want? Little by little the decisions were made, and when they were finalised, the ideas for new novels exploded. For dwarves and Aelfar.
[GdM] Can you talk a bit about the challenges of returning to a familiar world, to write a – compelling – new story within its constraints?
[MH] In this case, there was no real challenge because I knew exactly how I was going to approach it: a mixture of the familiar and lots of new things, memories of the old Girdlegard for the fans of the first hour, completely new circumstances with maximum possibilities for the new readers, who don’t need to have any prior knowledge. The mix was incredible fun. Lots of echoes of the past and much more things to come.
[GdM] I love how The Return of the Dwarves uses the book-within-a-book hook. What drew you to this premise?
[MH] I like the nesting, and it also gives me the opportunity to give readers hints, insights and allusions to the adventures that have happened over the hero’s many hundreds of years.
[GdM] Heroes and legends are core to your work. What do you think makes a hero interesting, what makes a compelling character?
[MH] Heroes who claim to be heroes are usually not this. Or they’re really bad show-offs. Heroes who don’t want to be heroes in the first place, who stumble into their task, with weaknesses and making mistakes – that’s what I find exciting. In the end,
the character fights for the good. Well, okay, “good” from his point of view.
[GdM] After having been in the publishing business for two decades, what do you wish you had known starting out?
[MH] That you NEVER send your entire book to a publisher as a beginner, in 10-point font, without a synopsis. Well. That’s exactly what I did. Like a non-professional, which I wasn’t back then. But a kind God held his hand over me, and two publishers wanted ULLDART, my first work. That was the beginning of my career.
[GdM] Have you noticed big differences in terms of how your audiences react to your
work in Germany versus internationally?
[MH] I don’t get that much from abroad, to be honest. Sometimes via FB and X, and to my delight they usually ask for the next translation. So it seems that there are people outside Germany who also read my books – and want more. Huzzah!
[GdM] My favourite books of yours have always been your takes on myths, weaving together legend and history with SFF. However, as far as I am aware, these were never translated into English. Can you talk a bit more about translations, reception and the choices that go into international deals from an author perspective? (Note to the reader: If you can read German I recommend you take a peek at Kinder des Judas or Ritus).
[MH] How decisions are made as to which book could or could not be translated is no different from the publishers in Germany. They look at which book has sold best. So, the idea is to assume that it could also be a success in the respective country. The
aspect of timing should not be neglected. Sometimes you have to be in the right place at the right time. That’s better than
expensive marketing. Unfortunately, there is no real rule for the best timing. Let’s call it … chance. One of the most crucial factors in the creative field. You have to know that.
Romance fantasy aka Romantasy is currently extremely strong, while classic fantasy is currently struggling a bit in Germany. But everything comes and goes in waves. That’s why there will definitely be a trend towards classic fantasy again at some
point. It could just take a while. But dwarves live long.
[GdM] Do you see major differences in how the different markets you are published in approach SFF? What do you think works particularly well in German that is perhaps underappreciated here in the UK?
[MH] I don’t follow the market very closely. I know, it’s a bit ignorant – but I always concentrate on writing and the next book idea. I don’t intend to write according to market trends myself, unless there happens to be an intersection between my idea
and the demand. Oh yes, there it was again, coincidence.
[GdM] Can you talk a bit about how your background as a historian has influenced your work as an author?
[MH] … History as such is full of ideas! A quarry from which an infinite number of works of art can be mined. Hence many works that relate to history, such as The Devil’s Playbook. While enjoying the novel, readers can do their own research and understand what really happened and what I invented about it. Specialist knowledge is also used in fantasy, such as my knowledge of conquest techniques, battle formations, fencing techniques or siege tactics. Sure, it’s fantasy, but I know pretty well how to crack a castle when you don’t have a magician on hand. And of course that is brought into the novel.
[GdM] I’d love to know more about your experience being known for one very specific series/setting and how you have handled these expectations while writing a very broad range of SFF?
[MH] Hahaha, well, it’s a bit like a restaurant that has a very extensive, varied and surprising menu. And yet most guests prefer to order ONE dish. And it’s the same with dwarves. As a chef or author, you can now despair that despite the large selection, many people only want one thing. But I have long since accepted this and am happy about every reader who also enjoys reading other books and discovering new worlds. The important thing for me is to have the freedom to really follow every idea. For me, writing only about dwarves would be like having to eat the same dish every day. Let’s say pizza. It would be okay for the first few days, but at some point you don’t want to anymore. Variety is extremely important to me, and I accept it if there are fewer readers looking forward to the new dish… book. So far, nothing has got past the dwarves. The Aelfar are hot on their heels, but the little ones are still the biggest success. And for that I am very, very grateful to the fans. That’s why I will always have a mixed menu. And the dwarves will always be part of it, sometimes with a new flavor.
[GdM] How similar (or different, as the case may be) is your writing process for adult novels across genres and in comparison to your work for children/games/music?
[MH] There is not really much difference. It’s always storytelling, regardless of the medium. If you keep in mind what the requirements are in the respective medium, it’s easy. And don’t forget: writing is also a craft in which you get better (at best) and
learn.
[GdM] Can you tell us anything about what’s next for you?
[MH] I’m currently writing a sequel, which I can’t say much about – for dramaturgical reasons – in case a few German fans also read this article. But there are vampires in it (real vampires don’t glitter in the sunlight, folklore doesn’t know anything like that, I swear!) and it has a historical background.
After that, I’m off to write the second new volume of Aelfar. In Germany, the first Aelfar volume will be published in summer 2024. The Black Eyes are just too much fun, and if the dwarves got two new novels, well… My writing schedule stretches into 2026, and yes, ideas are not my problem. They never are. It’s the time to implement everything. That’s a bit tricky.
[GdM] I’m aware you’re into pen & paper RPGs, so a two-pronged question: first, what have you been playing recently, and second, what would a D&D character based on yourself look like?
[MH] A sniper cat in a fantasy world called “Twaing” (that’s the sound the crossbow makes when triggered). I don’t want to talk about it, please… Yes, of course, it was very funny! A live P&P round on stage. And the audience almost laughed their heads off. Sniper, heads off… pun alert! Who would have thought that the hobby that accompanied me in the 80s and 90s would experience such a renaissance? I think it’s great! Let the dice roll!
Hahaha, really?! Based on me? Here we go: a Shakespearean-dressed Goth in black, always standing around in the background, taking notes, commenting and smelling good. In case of a fight, using puns, sharp knifes and poison, that looks like ink. And a
raven, who always quotes Nevermore. As mascot.
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May 29, 2024
REVIEW: Bonded by Thorns by Elizabeth Helen
Bonded by Thorns is the debut fantasy romance novel by sister writing duo, Elizabeth Helen. Directly inspired by Beauty and the Beast, this retelling blends traditional fairy tale with a spicy reverse harem/why choose love story, and the main character, Rosalina, has four, yes four*, hot princes in the mix (*number of princes perhaps subject to change, I hope). Though the story leans heavily on the source material to start, it increasingly develops its own individual, and frankly far more interesting threads, becoming steadily darker in aspect and exploring what it really means to be cursed.
The story follows Rosalina O’Connell, a bookworm trapped in small town Orca Cove while her somewhat eccentric father explores the world in his wild search for the lands of the fae. Convinced his wife was taken there against her will, his crazed determination leaves Rosalina caged at home, wreathed in poverty and loneliness. When a local discovers her father’s bloodied jacket in the depths of the woods, a desperate hunt for him leads her into a much deadlier forest, one infested with thorns and goblins, and in one moment everything changes, her life will never be the same again…
This is a novel that dares to be slow, the authors feeding us information alongside Rosalina, letting the tension build as we wait impatiently for the characters to make the connections we’re already certain we know (and want). It leaves us restless, feeling trapped, just like Rosalina, who has gone from one cage to another. Her character development in the novel is, at times, frustrating. Isolated, mocked, and in what is very clearly an abusive ‘relationship’, it’s no wonder that Rosalina flourishes in the fae lands, a place where nothing is as it seems and she’s free of the weight of human expectations – and of her father’s obsession. Yet she also makes some stunningly poor decisions, often for the sake of the plot, and while the fun of yelling at the pages of a book never dies, it’s not enough to excuse the inconsistency between her as brilliant one moment and outright stupid the next. No matter, I like her anyway – and it’s not just jealousy of her living situation. Her snark can be genuinely funny and she reads like one of us, which only helps with the wish fulfilment aspect of the novel.
And all this is before we get into the spicy stuff. The reader will have to manage with little more than a bit of touching and some hot MM material here, but with the number of people involved, this reader is more than a little intrigued about the dynamics of future action. I already have favourites (*cough* Prince of Thorns) and I can’t wait to see how it all plays out. In terms of the worldbuilding, we only get to see tiny snippets here in Bonded by Thorns, but each moment leaves no doubt that the authors have created a comprehensive and fully realised wider world – one I have no doubt we will travel in the next books. I, of course, will be moving straight onto those. I have questions that need to be answered due to that cliffhanger ending. Damn you, Elizabeth Helen!
Bonded by Thorns was a TikTok sensation and one that well deserves its popularity. Now it’s being traditionally published by Magpie in a beautiful hardback version, complete with colour endpaper maps in the front and back and chapter illustrations. Best of all, Bonded by Thorns and the two following books, Woven in Gold and Forged in Malice, will all be published on the same day (18th July) in their own stunning editions. Then you only need to wait until 10th September for Book 4, Broken by Daylight. Not only is this a series that is going to hook your imagination and stir your heart, it’s also going to look incredible on your bookshelf. This is an unmissable series and my sincere thanks to Magpie for the review copy.
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May 28, 2024
REVIEW: The Dark Feather by Anna Stephens
The Dark Feather by Anna Stephens is the epic third and final book in her The Songs of the Drowned trilogy. Fans of Stephens are also likely to know her writing from the Godblind trilogy. The earlier two novels in The Songs of the Drowned, The Stone Knife and The Jaguar Path, are essential pre-reading before you commence The Dark Feather. I suggest rereading them, as the events in The Dark Feather are not summarised before the novel begins. Stephens jumps into the action, with the plot picking up a few weeks after the finale of The Jaguar Path. If you are a reader awaiting the release of The Dark Feather, you will find it to be a complex, compelling, and entirely satisfying conclusion to the series.
The long-planned slave rebellion has finally come to the Empire of Songs. Bitterly clinging on for control from the Great Pyramid in the Singing City, Tayan, the Shadow Singer, is pitted against his former friends and family. As well as defending against the battle raging outside the pyramid’s walls, Tayan must decide where his loyalties lie and whether he will side with his home or the seduction powers within the Song. Out on the streets of the Singing City, Xessa, Lilla, and Ekon are critical players in a guerilla campaign. At first, united in the cause of trying to silence the Song, their rebellion becomes more desperate over time, and divisions appear. It might cost them more than their lives to carry on. The final main character, Illandeh, a former spy, far to the north and out from under the Song’s power, has a decision to make – her freedom or returning to the Singer’s regime.
Stephens’ The Dark Feather continues the same engaging and intricate style I enjoyed in the previous novels in the trilogy. Moving between perspectives inside the Great Pyramid, out in the rebellion, and away in the north, the reader can see the impact of the events in The Dark Feather from many points of view and follow the shifting loyalties. The chapters are long and detailed, so this read requires concentration; it should not be considered a light or easy read in that respect. As a relatively slow reader and often unable to read every day, I found it challenging to settle into the story and become as immersed as I wanted. In hindsight, I
should have started The Dark Feather when I had more time to dedicate to it rather than attempting to dip in and out over a few weeks of smaller reading sessions. With the interconnected politics, faiths, and magic, Stephens’ detailed world deserved more attention than I could sometimes give.
The Dark Feather is also enjoyably unpredictable, and even after two novels of forming character relationships and worldbuilding, I was continually surprised by the events and character responses. Stephens’ writing is intense and emotional – I was dismayed by some of the events and jubilant at others; I mourned the losses and cheered the victories. The battles in The Dark Feather particularly stand out as well-written and engaging. At the same time, amid the actions and the ongoing consequences that Stephens later refers to (for example, a character continuing to limp after a leg wound, rather than it seems like they have never been injured mere pages on).
The reader also gets to follow the characters’ developments across the trilogy, and Stephens’ characters are detailed and nuanced. They make this novel, and the others, such a good read. In The Dark Feather, it is not as simple as the goodies vs the badies. Stephens manages to create sympathy for characters even while they commit atrocities and show moments of joy and love even when they are surrounded by death and destruction. It is a delicate balance in dark fantasy to craft a novel with just the right amount of light, along with the brutalities of war. Stephens has managed this superbly.
The Dark Feather is out now from Harper Voyager, and I am very grateful to Anna Stephens and the team at Harper Voyager for sending me a copy to review.
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May 27, 2024
An Interview with Moses Ose Utomi
Please give a warm Grimdark Magazine welcome to Moses Ose Utomi, who’s here today to chat to us about his novella The Truth of the Aleke – which is out now from Tordotcom (reviewed here). The sequel to 2023’s phenomenal The Lies of the Ajungo (reviewed here), this second novella peels back another layer of the Forever Desert trilogy, and if you read and loved the first book you’ll want to jump straight into this one. First though, read on to find out more about what to expect from this fascinating new story and its protagonist, its place in the Forever Desert, the merits of novellas, and lots more.
[GdM] To start things off, could you tell us a bit about The Truth of the Aleke and what readers can expect from it?
[MOU] The Truth of the Aleke is kind of an unconventional sequel. Instead of giving you more adventure with the same characters, it takes place 500 years after the events of The Lies of the Ajungo. Tutu, the cousins, Oba Ijefi, the Ajungo—all things of the past. Instead, we follow a boy named Osi who must undertake a journey across the Forever Desert to defeat the Aleke—a mysterious, brutal warlord—and free his city from oppression.
If you enjoyed the camaraderie, magic, and slow unfurling of the first book, be prepared for more of that. But also be prepared to for some surprising differences, including learning much more about how the magic system works.
[GdM] If we can take a step back from The Truth of the Aleke for a moment, I’d like to ask you about the Forever Desert trilogy as a whole. Could you talk about the spark behind this trilogy – what prompted you to write these books, telling this particular story?
[MOU] The Lies of the Ajungo came to me in this strange fever dream, almost fully formed from the beginning. I wrote it shortly after returning to the US after living in China for a year and a half, and I think it was my way of reckoning with the fact that the world I saw abroad was nothing like the world I’d been lead to believe existed. Then when I started thinking about where the story could go from there, all these different experiences from my formative years began filtering in—the Bush, Obama, and Trump presidencies, 9/11, social media’s growth, George Floyd, the Covid pandemic, my time traveling, stories from relatives who had visited from Nigeria, and a million other things. It was a lot, and I realized I wanted to make the reader feel what the experience felt like for me—and, hopefully, many other people of my generation—in trying to be a sane person in an insane world.
[GdM] Despite the short length of these books, the setting of the Forever Desert – from its cities and peoples to the magic that runs through it – feels incredibly rich and real. What sort of influences (whether literary or otherwise) did you draw upon while creating this world?
[MOU] The clearest influences are West and North Africa. The names, foods, architecture and more are most heavily drawn from different cultures and historical eras in those regions. Dune, Binti, and other desert fictions may be noticeable as well. Less obvious is the influence of my growing up in Las Vegas—a desert city, if perhaps an unconventional one. There’s also a heavy influence from the anime Attack on Titan, of which I am a deranged superfan, and a not insignificant dollop of Final Fantasy 7, of which I am also a deranged superfan. The tone of the writing is drawn mostly from the scripture and stories of my childhood—the Bible, my dad’s storytelling, etc.
[GdM] The Forever Desert is a trilogy of novellas, as opposed to the full-length novel format you went for with your YA novel Daughters of Oduma – could you talk a bit about how you settle on which format to use for a story, and how (or indeed whether) the choice of format affects how you write it?
[MOU] I’d intended to write Daughters of Oduma as a novella, but the story just didn’t feel finished, even though the novella version ended in pretty much the same place as the novel version. I ended up having to go in and fill in some blanks until it was novel length. That’s pretty common for me—projects tend to have their own desires that trump mine. I will say, though, that the books of the Forever Desert are the only projects I’ve ever written that are almost exactly the length I intended from the start. To me, a novella is the perfect middle ground between poetry and epics—it can deliver the devastating punch of a poem while having some of the space for meandering and adventure of an epic. That was exactly what I wanted each book of the Forever Desert to achieve, so it felt like the perfect length.
[GdM] Without spoiling The Lies of the Ajungo for anyone who hasn’t read it, it definitely makes sense that The Truth of the Aleke should be about different characters, but I was interested in just how long after the first book this takes place. What did that 500-year gap allow you to do with this story?
[MOU] I knew I wanted this series to look not just at societal changes, but systemic and even climatological changes. 500 years felt long enough that the people and events of the previous book will be in the distant past, but not so long—we often see events occurring millennia ago in fantasy, and I didn’t want that—that the time becomes an almost meaningless quantity. 500 years, for a pre-industrial society, is enough time for substantial societal change, but not so much that geological, technological, or even evolutionary change is a factor. It’s the same world, it’s just a bit different, and the events of the previous book are still relevant to the characters.
[GdM] Compared to Tutu [the main character of The Lies of the Ajungo], Osi has many more advantages: he isn’t plagued by thirst, his family is relatively speaking more fortunate than Tutu’s, he’s grown older before having to face his trials. Was that a conscious decision, to set the two protagonists apart?
[MOU] It was, yeah. Both are products of their environment. In the City of Lies, people spend their lives seeking water and typically die young, so Tutu lives minimally, both in resources and, to a degree, in self expression. Osi grew up in a state of desire, but not quite desperation. The Aleke’s siege is real and brutal, but it is not the sort of thing that impedes every day life. So Osi has aspirations in career and family and other things that would never really occur to Tutu. Osi doesn’t minimize himself—he takes up space unapologetically. Both a great representatives of their respective worlds, and neither could exist in the other’s. Without spoiling book 3, I think getting to see both of these types of people is essential to the overall story of the Forever Desert.
[GdM] To use a slightly hackneyed comparison, The Truth of the Aleke feels like a darker story than the first book – if The Lies of the Ajungo was A New Hope, this is The Empire Strikes Back, playing out the consequences of the first story. Was that always the intention, to make this the darker ‘middle’ part of the trilogy?
[MOU] It was indeed. Though I wasn’t necessarily setting out to make it “darker” as much as “closer,” if that makes sense. Tutu’s world is plenty dark. I could even argue that the ritualized mass tongue severance in Ajungo is darker than anything that happens in Aleke. But Ajungo is a bit further away from the darkness—you hear about the tongue cutting, but you don’t actually see it. Or, even moreso, feel it. Part of this goes back to what I was saying about the characters being products of their environments. Tutu, for all his lack, has his mama to protect him. Osi is much more exposed than Tutu is, and he doesn’t really have anyone as invested in protecting him. Since the reader experiences it through Osi’s eyes, that means less protection
for you too (sorrynotsorry!).
[GdM] Even more so than in The Lies of the Ajungo, it feels like Osi’s story really lives in the grey areas, with very little being black and white and the realities of the story developing over time. How did you find writing that, balancing how much to reveal and when?
[MOU] I found it extremely difficult, lol. I probably wrote more pages that got cut from Aleke than I wrote pages that ended up in the book. I tried scene after scene to see if I could find the right balance of revelation, and it was exceedingly difficult. In the end, I
had to trust my editors and the story itself and kind of let it unfold how it wanted.
[GdM] I really enjoyed the callbacks to the first book, and the way certain elements stand out differently in light of the sequel – like how Tutu almost never cries while Osi cries openly and often, or the way certain characters and events take on different meanings. Did you have a lot of that planned out in advance, or was it more a case of looking for opportunities during the writing of book two?
[MOU] I’m glad you noticed! A lot of that was in service of the story and to reward careful readers like yourself, but some of it was just fun for me, as a writer. There’s something very pleasurable, and sometimes even haunting, when such things line up between books. I’d planned in advance to do plenty of that, and I had a couple things in mind from the beginning (such as the crying), but a lot of it came out organically in the writing.
[GdM] Looking back now that two of the three volumes of the trilogy are published, are there any particular lessons you feel like you’ve learned from a writing craft perspective?
[MOU] Definitely. Maybe the biggest is knowing when to write in what I call poetic voice vs mythological voice. Poetic voice, as I define it, is for the deep and meaningful. The little insights into a world or character that belong uniquely to that book. Tutu’s first encounter with water is, to me, a poetic moment—it wouldn’t make sense to put in pretty much any other work. Mythological moments are simple and relatable and feel similar to things you’d see anywhere. Descriptions of the sun and sand and things like that. I’d classify the opening/prologue of each book as mythological, too. These books rely heavily on my ability to known when to use which voice, and I’m learning with each book how to better do that.
[GdM] To finish off, if you were a Seer is there a particular use that you’d want to put that power to?
[MOU] Sand manipulation. In a place like the Forever Desert, being able to control sand could be pretty powerful. Perhaps we’ll see more of that in book 3… 
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May 26, 2024
REVIEW: The Division: Compromised by Thomas Parrott
Compromised is the second of the Operation: Crossroads series for Tom Clancy’s The Division franchise by Ubisoft. The premise for that series is that the Dollar Flu AKA The Green Poison has spread through the world and wiped-out ninety percent of the planet. The survivors of humanity are fighting over the remainder of the world’s resources with most of them running out within a few months of the events. Humanity, or at least America’s, only hope is the brave soldiers of the Strategic Homeland Division that have been given extraordinary powers to “save what remains.”
Recruited
was a fun novel for fans of the series with the character of Maira Kanhai being recruited (hence the title) into the Division after the events of The Division 2. The book resolved some of the larger questions of famine and other issues that needed to be addressed in the semi-realistic world bearing the name of the late Tom Clancy. It also introduced some new factions as well told an interesting story regarding Rogue agents, revenge, and moral compromises. Basically, what fans of The Division like about the games.
Recruited takes place some months after the events of the original book with the characters still recovering from their injuries. Unfortunately, there is no rest for the righteous in the post-apocalypse world and Maira is activated to journey down to Texas in order to try to secure one of the few remaining oil refineries left in the world. It is under attack by eco-terrorists who believe that the Green Poison is the best time to start making a serious effort to start a sustainable lifestyle. This would be more sympathetic if there wasn’t millions of people depending on gas-powered trucks to deliver food.
Honestly, while I enjoyed this book, I feel it is inferior to Recruited. The Reborn and Molassi are interesting new factions but don’t feel as original as the Freighties and Roamers. Plus, eco-terrorists are a questionable villain to begin with before you have most of humanity dead and even the most Malthusian economist going, “Woah there.” It also doesn’t help the Reborn get treated more sympathetically than they probably should be given the atrocities that they carry out as well as the, well, frank stupidity of their arguments. Recruited also has not one but two dead characters show up as surprise reveals as well, including a long-lost brother.
I think the book would have been better if it had continued focusing on the role of fossil fuels as a resource necessary in the post-apocalypse world. The Road Warrior managed to tell a fantastic action movie with much the same plot and never lost sight of how oil was something simultaneously a curse as well as blessing to mankind. Instead, the entirety of the plot is cast aside fairly early for some more Rogue Agent nonsense that is usually entertaining but just doesn’t work here.
Still, I enjoyed this volume, and it is still something I recommend for fans of The Division games. Maira is a great character and seeing her slowly develop into an experienced agent able to negotiate as well as fight is a nice process to see. I like the new characters introduced to their squad as well, though I don’t think either of them is as enjoyable as Brenda or Leo.
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May 25, 2024
REVIEW: Devils Kill Devils by Johnny Compton
Devils Kill Devils is Johnny Compton’s sophomore horror novel, a southern Gothic brimming with vampirism and religious occultism. I thoroughly enjoyed Compton’s debut novel, The Spite House, and waited in eager anticipation to see what this talented new voice in horror would deliver next.
Devils Kill Devils opens on Sarita’s wedding night. She senses a third party in the room, a pale figure enshrouded in shadows, who brutally murders her new husband, Frank, no questions asked. The murderer? Sarita’s guardian angel, nicknamed Angelo:
“Angelo stood at the foot of the bed, dressed in black. Strands of his long, flaxen hair hung over his face. Through the thin curtain of hairs he met Frank’s gaze with an ash-hot stare.”
While the underlying reason for Frank’s murder is unclear, Angelo has saved Sarita’s life on at least four previous occasions. Devils Kill Devils alternates between the present-day narrative and flashbacks that provide the history of Sarita’s near-death encounters.
Sarita’s long history with Angelo began when she was nine years old and nearly drowned in the Gulf of Mexico while playing in the waves with her older brother. Sarita’s mother prayed to God for a miracle, and right on cue, Angelo appeared to drag her limp body from the water.
Sarita has little memory of this experience and is doubtful of Angelo’s existence, despite the strong devotion her mother places in him. Her skepticism, however, vanishes during subsequent encounters with her guardian angel, as recounted in the first part of Devils Kill Devils.
These opening chapters of Devils Kill Devils are absolutely brilliant in their setup and the restrained way that Johnny Compton builds up layers of intrigue and horror. However, the tone of the novel shifts drastically with the introduction of a new point-of-view character, Cela, known as the Godmaker. While the beginning of the novel focuses on Sarita in a very personal way, Cela’s entrance causes the scope of the novel to blow up in a convoluted disarray of plotlines involving vampires, religious occultism, and the Book of Tobit. The latter part of the novel often struggles to maintain coherence, making me wish for a return to the more restrained approach.
To conclude, I love the premise of Devils Kill Devils and had high hopes based on the excellent first part of the novel. Unfortunately, the story loses focus as it expands its scope to an unmanageable extent, which also compromises the emotional impact of the novel.
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May 24, 2024
REVIEW: Every Rising Sun by Jamila Ahmed
One Thousand and One Nights is the cornerstone of countless literary works, influencing writers from Leo Tolstoy to Salman Rushdie to Neil Gaiman. In Every Rising Sun, Jamila Ahmed’s novelisation of the classic tales, we follow Shaherazade in her quest to save her people. Similar to the original tale, Malik (King) Shahryar, is betrayed by his wife, and in turn decides to marry a new bride every night, only to execute her the following morning. Our protagonist, Shaherazade, the grand vizier’s daughter, has a penchant for storytelling. With the clutch of her narrative talents, she hatches a plan to stop the Malik in his murderous tirade, and offers herself up for marriage. She plans to tell him an unfinished tale on her wedding night, so to keep him wanting for more. Once married, Shaherazade’s path moves away from the original story, and she instead finds herself at the helm of a war, clutching on to all that is dear to her in fear that they are snatched away. Jamila Ahmed takes the classic framework from One Thousand and One Nights, and makes it entirely her own. Invoking themes of feminism, redemption, and the art of war, Ahmed gives space to her readers to indulge in Shaherazade’s own story, as well as the many that she weaves.
The elements of grimdark in this novel are subtle, but rife in the tension that exists throughout the story. Shaherazade is constantly dangling between the possibility of being spared another night or being executed the following morning. Whilst her plan to delay her execution, and in turn the execution of other eligible brides in the kingdom, is successful, she is still constantly teetering on the edge of her mortality. Whilst Ahmed’s adaptation does not centre the novel around the fables and stories that Shaherazade tells, they are still prominent elements to the book. Full of dark fantastical folklore, ranging from tales of djinns to romances to tragedies, elements of grimdark are found sprinkled throughout, both within the stories Shaherazade tells and the very one that she lives. The novel highlights the socio-political history of the Seljuks and Shaherazade’s position as Khatun (Queen) at the forefront. We witness the threat of the Oghuz Turks against the city of Bam, as well as the invading French Crusaders. The journey ahead is difficult, and paved with the possibility of defeat, but it is Shaherazade who uses her stories and voice as a tool for hope.
Ahmed’s prose is sublime. She writes like one would make tea; slowly steeped, and growing darker with every turn. It is a nod to the author, in that Shaherazade is able to subvert the roles of women in her era, in the same way Ahmed subverts the framework of One Thousand and One Nights in order to centre the feats of women. Ahmed’s protagonist adopts the same penchant for storytelling as the author herself, and Shaherazade goes as far as to use her stories as both a weapon and a shield in court affairs and political alliances. Her quick thinking and her way with words are ultimately what sway the men that hold the power in this war. She says:
Think of the other women, khatuns and queens and sultanas and wives, who have endless patience to rightly guide their men, to save them from themselves, and who do it unseen.
The reading experience is immersive; enfolding the reader into the warm embrace of medieval Iran, with its array of food, celebrations of Persian culture and the stunning architecture of the palaces and strongholds. One feels as if they’re walking the streets of Bam themselves. An aspect I truly enjoyed was the connections Shaherazade had with the people around her. What she lacked in her husbands love towards her, she found in her fruitful relations with others. Her sister, Dunyazade, was a prominent player in the Shaherazade’s game. She exists at Shaherazade’s side as a support system one would need as a Khatun, and was one my favourite characters because of it and much more. This does not take away, however, the emotional impact that Shaherazade’s marriage had on her. Whilst she chose to marry the Malik in hopes to stop the senseless murder of the women of the kingdom, she also did so to fulfil an almost romantic admiration she once had for Shahryar. I enjoyed seeing how Shaherazade’s emotions grew and faltered, both towards Shahryar and her position as Khatun.
Every Rising Sun is an ode to sisterhood, the love for one’s hometown, and the power a woman holds in her words. Jamila Ahmed did a captivating job at placing the narrator of such famed stories at the forefront of her own story, giving her the spotlight that every storyteller deserves. I look forward to reading anything and everything Ahmed plans to release!
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May 23, 2024
REVIEW: The Naming Song by Jedediah Berry
The Naming Song by Jedediah Berry is a richly imagined literary fantasy that serves as a meditation on the power of names and naming.
Naming has been an integral part of fantasy literature for decades. The foundation of Ursula K. Le Guin’s magic system in Earthsea is based on the knowledge of so-called true names, which capture the language of creation and the wisdom of the creator. Le Guin’s emphasis on true names had an enormous impact on subsequent fantasy literature, such as The Naming by Alison Croggon and The Name of the Wind by Patrick Rothfuss. More recently, the magical power of language is the raison d’être of R.F. Kuang’s Babel.
Reverence for language and the power of naming is as old as humanity itself, nearly ubiquitous across world religions and folklore. Creation is inexorably linked to language, as evident in the opening verse of the Gospel of John: “In the beginning was the Word, and the Word was with God, and the Word was God.” Moreover, early in the Book of Genesis, God endows Adam with the power of naming, allowing him to bestow names on each living creature.
With The Naming Song, Jedediah Berry constructs an entire world around this power of naming. Berry develops a complete mythology around naming, including diviners who discover or create new words and couriers who deliver those words to the populace. Diviners and couriers have a longstanding rivalry about who has the more important role. While the secretive diviners perform their work behind the locked doors of a train car, couriers must traverse all corners of the world to deliver these new words where they are most needed.
Mystery and danger in the world of The Naming Song come from the presence of unnamed things, since without words there is no meaning. Part of the problem is recognizing when something doesn’t yet have a name:
“How many times each day do we fail to see the unnamed things right in front of us? Or worse…the unnamed things lurking within. But you see them, somehow. You seek them out, take hold of them, bind them with words.”
Although The Naming Song overflows with imagination, the story never quite escapes the arbitrariness of its internal logic. The sense of danger always feels muted because the world is never truly real. Despite the undeniable beauty of Jedediah Berry’s prose, I found it difficult to form an emotional connection with the characters, who feel like actors playing a theatrical role instead of being fully realized individuals.
In summary, The Naming Song is a richly imagined world, and I applaud Jedediah Berry for his unbounded creativity. At the same time, I hoped to discover more emotional depth and complexity in the story’s dramatis personae.
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