Despite how much I write, I tend to be terrible at giving writing advice so to say. I have always been terrible unless I am reading the book you have written right in front of me.
So if someone gives me a chapter or their world building notes then I cant really do a lot with it. Since I can only judge a work from a mostly completed state.
This means that someone would have to completely finish a draft of a story before I can really say how I feel about it.
I used to have a lot of problems with that back in my old writing group. Which caused me to not really have a lot to say from chapter to chapter, which is kind of bothersome.
Speaking of writing groups, I may do another blog on one of my old writing groups if I get the chance.