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Review: Shattered by Love Healed by Sex

Shattered By Love Healed By Sex by Karina Covey
My rating: 3 of 5 stars

RAW. That's the word that came to mind as I was reading. Raw all the way around.

The writing style is different. Choppy. Unpolished. Raw. But it worked for this story because the rawness of the writing matched the tone and the action of the story. The author's own pain permeates every sentence of the story and that choppy style makes it hurt more.

The story is short, but told with a good flow to leave the reader guessing. Hayes skillfully keeps Ava's secrets until the suspense hits its peak. Even with the choppy, rapid fire style, the storytelling is good.

Yes, there are errors, but I didn't find them terribly intrusive. I also didn't think this was erotica. Sure, there was sex it in, but sex was used to further develop the characters, not to titillate.

What struck me was the main character's emotional state. It drove me crazy how many times she walked away, but all of that delivered an emotional punch, punctuated by the writing style.

This may not be the best score I've ever given, but I'm giving it the "Recommended by PL" seal. So many writers pull from their heads. Viviana Hayes writes from her heart, and she lays it all out in front of us, bleeding and raw.

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Review: Just One Night

Just One Night by Pandora Spocks
My rating: 5 of 5 stars

This is a great summer read. Lots of Caribbean breezes and Margaritas to make you feel like you're on vacation. The plot is interesting and more surprising than I expected. The book is fast-paced and a lot of fun to read. As always, Spocks's characters are magnetic. Even the minor characters are so richly developed, I connected them to people in my real life.

Pandora Spocks has this delightful style which puts the reader right into the story. From swimming with the stingrays to kneeling in front of a partially naked stranger, you feel like you're along for the ride. (Of course, that's not always a good thing. When the main character has a bout of "teacher stress," I felt like I was staring down the barrel of the first day of school. NOT a good feeling in June. *wink*)

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Review: Queen of Swords

The Queen of Swords by Alana Melos
My rating: 5 of 5 stars

Alana Melos can write. The writing in this book was so slick, I forgot I was reading a superhero/villain story, which isn't really my thing. The sex was hot, the pace was fast, and the story was exciting. I had one thing bugging me though. I felt as though I didn't know what the story arc was throughout the story, and I'm not sure why. Maybe I expected that more of the action would involve another character or something. Maybe reading the other books would pull it together for me.

I was pleasantly surprised at how much I enjoyed the story. The characters were well developed, and the story moved right along. An overall very good read.

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(NSFW) Nerdy Nadine's Blog Part 2: Sultan Jafar F@#&s Princess Jasmine While the Parrot Coaches

In my last post, I shared a snippet from my newest book, Muffin Submits in the House of Flies.  Here's another excerpt from the protagonist's blog. In this one, Nadine is with Evan, the president of the fraternity, and Professor Nate Thompson is guiding their actions via text. The professor sneaked into the frat party and is lurking in the hallway outside of Evan's room, on the top floor of the "House of Flies."

Nadine came, screaming in ecstasy as her pussy spasmed and heat spread through her pelvis before Nate arrived in the hallway outside Evan’s room. Nate knew which room it was. It had been his, his brother’s, his father’s, his uncle’s, and his grandfather’s too. The Phi Lambda Upsilon presidency was a long-standing tradition in his family. Nate slipped to the dark corner of the hallway and parked himself there for a moment. He needed to excuse Evan, but he didn’t want to leave the poor kid with blue balls.Did you come yet, Muffin? he asked. Yes, Sir. I just came so hard. Twice. Trying to catch breath. OMG.Tell Evan to lie on his back. You kneel between his legs and suck him off. Tell him he has five minutes to come. If he doesn’t, he will leave unsatisfied. Nate gave her a moment to explain it to Evan. I’m setting a timer. Go. Nadine didn’t waste time replying. She brought to mind the best blowjob scene she’d ever written—Jasmine and Sultan Jafar—and recreated it for Evan. Jafar lay on the king’s bed, robes hiked up, the parrot narrating the action. Jasmine took the freakishly large cock to the back of her mouth, gagging before pulling off and teasing the head with her tongue. She looked into his eyes as Iago the parrot squawked, “Suck that cock, princess. You’re Jafar’s whore now.”“Yes, Master,” she said, sucking in a fast rhythm, taking him deeper and deeper, her ample tits falling out of her sea-green harem top. Wrapping her hands around his balls, she manhandled them, making her sultan moan. She grinned and took it up a notch, running her teeth gently along his length.“Oh, you cheeky little bitch,” Jafar snarled. “You know me so well. Yes, princess. Use your teeth.”Evan groaned when Nadine’s teeth nipped at his shaft. “Oh, baby. That’s it. You are the best cocksucker. The fucking best.”Jasmine opened wide and extended her tongue, prepared to take Jafar into her throat. His hips bucked to meet her mouth as her taste buds caressed his raging erection. He laced his fingers through her hair and pushed on her head, slamming her mouth down to his groin. “Take it, bitch,” squawked Iago from his perch on Jafar’s shoulder. “Take it like the fucking whore you are.”Nate watched the timer, listening to the moaning and grunting and the smacking sound of the sloppy blowjob on the other side of the door. Nate heard Evan’s desperation to come from his position in the hallway, and just before the time ran out, there was silence.Evan’s orgasm racked his body so hard, he went rigid, frozen with his hips locked against Nadine’s face. Nadine stayed with him, enduring the assault on her throat while she waited for the rush of cum. After what felt like an eternity to Nadine, Evan’s body relaxed, a loud, rhythmic grunt escaped his throat, and blast after blast of his cum coated her tongue. The phone buzzed. Excellent job, Muffin. Tell Evan to take a picture of your face. She handed the phone to Evan. The next message was for him. Blindfold her. Use whatever you can find, but make sure she can’t see. Nate’s cock was uncomfortably hard, throbbing with insistence. Professor Thompson’s time had come.

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(NSFW) What's in Nerdy Nadine's Blog?

 My most recent publication is called Muffin Submits in the House of Flies. 
A nerdy university student keeps a blog full of sexy fairy tales and other wicked writings. When she plagiarizes her own blog for a school assignment, her English professor discovers her secrets--naughty fiction and a need for a man to Dominate her.
The professor contacts her, deceives her, and Dominates her by text until he sends her for a makeover to bring her out of her chrysalis. He arranges an invitation for her to a party at the Phi Lambda Upsilon fraternity. Dubbed the House of Flies, the house is well known on campus for wild sexual activity, and Professor Thompson knows he'll be able to watch her metamorphosis take place, from a nerdy wallflower to a sex goddess. The story was inspired by the Deftones' song Change (In the House of Flies). There are no flies in the story. Just a frat house full of horny frat boys. 
The following selection is one of Nadine's sexy fairy tales. If you like it, you can purchase the book on Amazon or on All Romance. Enjoy the tease!
The footman was a beast—muscular with a long, angular face and huge hands. He ripped her dress over her head, tearing the fabric in several spots. For a moment, Cinderella feared the fairy godmother’s reaction to having her dress returned as tattered as the one she’d replaced, but the lust she felt for the footman swept away her apprehension. Standing in the garden in just her bodice and pantaloons, self-consciousness edged in until the footman placed his hands at her bosom and ripped the garment open, exposing her perfect breasts, her rose-colored nipples taut and ready.He bit them, causing a stab of pain to shoot through her chest to her pussy. His teeth left deep marks in her skin, darker than the color of her areolae. The pain was sharp, invigorating, and it brought a rush of moisture to her pantaloons. “Please, Sir. Take them off,” she said to the footman. Why she called him “Sir” was not clear to her, but at that moment, he knew he was in charge. She was but a servant, a slave, even to this humble servant of the household. This time, the tearing sound excited her, and soon she found herself completely nude except for the one glass slipper remaining on her foot.She was aware that she and the footman were not alone, and it mattered not. Lust clouded her judgment, and even though she knew she was surrounded by her friends—mice, the dog, even the evil cat—she stood proudly in her nakedness, hoping all her friends watched her. The footman grabbed her by the wrists and bound them tightly behind her back with the pumpkin vine he found next to the coach. “Please bend at the waist, Cinderella,” he commanded politely as he pushed her halfway into the coach, with her torso draped across the velvet seat. As she did, his boot separated her dainty feet, kicking her legs apart to allow his access. “Please, Sir. Go gently,” she begged. “Oh, Cinda,” the footman replied. “You know that isn’t what you want.” He lined his cock against her dripping slit and he forced himself inside. “You see? You like it rough.” Her high-pitched, rhythmic squeaks affirmed his declaration, and he pumped into her harder and faster as she bucked back against him, meeting his sharp thrusts. “Fuck me,” she said breathlessly, wanting him harder and faster until the pain turned to pleasure. “Spank my bottom, Sir.” “That is not your decision to make, princess,” he said with a smile, but he complied, and with each crack of her ass, she cried out, raising his arousal with her own. He fought to hold out, to keep from spewing his seed inside of her until she’d reached her own climax, but her yelps were such sweet music to his ears, he knew he couldn’t last. “Come for me, Cinda,” he rasped into her ear. “Come for me, princess. Come on my cock.” With that, he thrust his middle finger into her tender, exposed asshole, surprising Cinderella coming right then. She emitted a series of sharp sounds, similar to those a Bichon Frisé makes when he sees a squirrel, as wave after wave of pleasure overtook her cunt. Each spasm brought her higher off the ground until she heard the chime of the clock tower, the one the fairy godmother had warned her about. “Oh, my god,” she gasped. “The fairy godmother. She’ll see. She’ll know!” Cinderella knew that her intended for the evening was the prince, but he spent his evening eyeing up the king’s advisor, a giant of a man with a snarl to his lip. Cinderella couldn’t blame him; the advisor looked as though he could tear her in half. Just what she craved. She needed a man who wouldn’t be afraid to tie her to the bed and shove his cock in her—“Ah-yuh,” said the footman. “It’s been a good ride, princess.”The change came at the fourth chime. The footman’s huge cock slipped from her pussy and his finger disappeared, leaving her feeling empty and cold. The coach dissolved into thin air, and Cinderella’s torso dropped to the ground, leaving her breasts to plop on either side of a pumpkin stem. The cold flesh of the pumpkin aroused her nipples even more than the cool, night air, but her knees hitting the dirt jerked her to reality. Behind her, something cold and wet brushed her left buttock, and when she turned to look, she was startled to see an enormous, lanky plough horse nosing—
And that's where Nadine gets interrupted. To read about Nadine and Professor Thompson (and to read Nadine's tale of Princess Jasmine sucking Jafar's cock while Iago the parrot coaches), please purchase the book on Amazon or on All Romance.
Thanks for reading!

What's in Nerdy Nadine's Blog?

 My most recent publication is called Muffin Submits in the House of Flies. A nerdy university student keeps a blog full of sexy fairy tales and other wicked writings. When she plagiarizes her own blog for a school assignment, her English professor discovers her secrets--naughty fiction and a need for a man to Dominate her.
The professor contacts her, deceives her, and Dominates her by text until he sends her for a makeover to bring her out of her chrysalis. He arranges an invitation for her to a party at the Phi Lambda Upsilon fraternity. Dubbed the House of Flies, the house is well known on campus for wild sexual activity, and Professor Thompson knows he'll be able to watch her metamorphosis take place, from a nerdy wallflower to a sex goddess. 
The story was inspired by the Deftones' song Change (In the House of Flies). There are no flies in the story. Just a frat house full of horny frat boys. 
The following selection is one of Nadine's sexy fairy tales. If you like it, you can purchase the book on Amazon or on All Romance. Enjoy the tease!
The footman was a beast—muscular with a long, angular face and huge hands. He ripped her dress over her head, tearing the fabric in several spots. For a moment, Cinderella feared the fairy godmother’s reaction to having her dress returned as tattered as the one she’d replaced, but the lust she felt for the footman swept away her apprehension. Standing in the garden in just her bodice and pantaloons, self-consciousness edged in until the footman placed his hands at her bosom and ripped the garment open, exposing her perfect breasts, her rose-colored nipples taut and ready.He bit them, causing a stab of pain to shoot through her chest to her pussy. His teeth left deep marks in her skin, darker than the color of her areolae. The pain was sharp, invigorating, and it brought a rush of moisture to her pantaloons. “Please, Sir. Take them off,” she said to the footman. Why she called him “Sir” was not clear to her, but at that moment, he knew he was in charge. She was but a servant, a slave, even to this humble servant of the household. This time, the tearing sound excited her, and soon she found herself completely nude except for the one glass slipper remaining on her foot.She was aware that she and the footman were not alone, and it mattered not. Lust clouded her judgment, and even though she knew she was surrounded by her friends—mice, the dog, even the evil cat—she stood proudly in her nakedness, hoping all her friends watched her. The footman grabbed her by the wrists and bound them tightly behind her back with the pumpkin vine he found next to the coach. “Please bend at the waist, Cinderella,” he commanded politely as he pushed her halfway into the coach, with her torso draped across the velvet seat. As she did, his boot separated her dainty feet, kicking her legs apart to allow his access. “Please, Sir. Go gently,” she begged. “Oh, Cinda,” the footman replied. “You know that isn’t what you want.” He lined his cock against her dripping slit and he forced himself inside. “You see? You like it rough.” Her high-pitched, rhythmic squeaks affirmed his declaration, and he pumped into her harder and faster as she bucked back against him, meeting his sharp thrusts. “Fuck me,” she said breathlessly, wanting him harder and faster until the pain turned to pleasure. “Spank my bottom, Sir.” “That is not your decision to make, princess,” he said with a smile, but he complied, and with each crack of her ass, she cried out, raising his arousal with her own. He fought to hold out, to keep from spewing his seed inside of her until she’d reached her own climax, but her yelps were such sweet music to his ears, he knew he couldn’t last. “Come for me, Cinda,” he rasped into her ear. “Come for me, princess. Come on my cock.” With that, he thrust his middle finger into her tender, exposed asshole, surprising Cinderella coming right then. She emitted a series of sharp sounds, similar to those a Bichon Frisé makes when he sees a squirrel, as wave after wave of pleasure overtook her cunt. Each spasm brought her higher off the ground until she heard the chime of the clock tower, the one the fairy godmother had warned her about. “Oh, my god,” she gasped. “The fairy godmother. She’ll see. She’ll know!” Cinderella knew that her intended for the evening was the prince, but he spent his evening eyeing up the king’s advisor, a giant of a man with a snarl to his lip. Cinderella couldn’t blame him; the advisor looked as though he could tear her in half. Just what she craved. She needed a man who wouldn’t be afraid to tie her to the bed and shove his cock in her—“Ah-yuh,” said the footman. “It’s been a good ride, princess.”The change came at the fourth chime. The footman’s huge cock slipped from her pussy and his finger disappeared, leaving her feeling empty and cold. The coach dissolved into thin air, and Cinderella’s torso dropped to the ground, leaving her breasts to plop on either side of a pumpkin stem. The cold flesh of the pumpkin aroused her nipples even more than the cool, night air, but her knees hitting the dirt jerked her to reality. Behind her, something cold and wet brushed her left buttock, and when she turned to look, she was startled to see an enormous, lanky plough horse nosing—
And that's where Nadine gets interrupted. To read about Nadine and Professor Thompson (and to read Nadine's tale of Princess Jasmine sucking Jafar's cock while Iago the parrot coaches), please purchase the book on Amazon or on All Romance.
Thanks for reading!

Review: Unbowed

Unbowed: An Erotic Romance by Isabella Belucci
My rating: 5 of 5 stars

Unbowed was my first Isabella Belucci story. This one is a roller coaster of emotions as the reader follows Nora, a transgender woman, from the high point of believing that her boyfriend is planning to propose to the gutter, giving head to a stranger in a public bathroom. As she wallows in her misery, she finds that love was right in front of her the whole time. Belucci packs a lot of action and emotion into a short tale, and her writing is good. No distracting errors or overly wordy phrases. A satisfying read for those who enjoy transwoman lesbian sex.

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Review: Landscaper in Love

Landscaper in Love by Robin Stone
My rating: 5 of 5 stars

I’m a big fan of M/M stories—both writing them and reading them. In this series, there is a lot of M/F action (which is excellent), but what keeps me coming back for more is the M/M romance. This one is special. It’s uncertain at times. At others, they both know exactly what they need. The other thing I enjoy is the power struggle between the two men. Kyle is happy to let Eric dictate the action with his wife, be each tries to be the alpha at one time or another. It makes for some panty-dripping hot scenes.

My criticism about this series is that it has the feel of one cohesive novel to me. Not a series of shorter works. That’s just my opinion though, and it doesn’t affect the heat these books generate.

I love the characters. The writing is super-slick. The sex is hot, hot, hot. I highly recommend this series, and I can’t wait for the conclusion.


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Review: She Sees in Her Sleep

She Sees in Her Sleep: Three November Snow Shorts by A.M. Manay
My rating: 5 of 5 stars

I continue to love A.M. Manay’s November Snow series. This book of three shorts gives readers a glimpse into the kinds of visions November the human psychic/demon/vampire has when she is sleeping. They are more than entertainment, however. These stories provide us with information not included in the first or second books. We learn how Lijle, Gul, Ilyn, and Marisha brought together the fairies and vampires in alliance against the werewolves. We learn just how powerful fairy magic is while we get to know Pine’s husband and learn how they met.

Probably the most interesting revelation is about Luka. Is he inherently evil or does he have good reason for his negative feelings for Ilyn? And why does he hate werewolves so much? All of this plus six-year-old Zinnea’s reaction to meeting Tinkerbell at Disneyland will make any November Snow fa.n smile.

A.M. Manay could have TOLD her readers all of this in the other books. Instead she wed her storytelling ability to SHOW her readers. She is one of my favorite authors for good reason.

I have to say, I wish this series was all one novel. I can’t stand waiting for the next one.


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Review: Bending Over for Jeff

Bending Over For Jeff by July Cumming
My rating: 5 of 5 stars

I wish I had chosen a different July Cumming as my first, simply because it's hard to judge a smut writer by her satire. Cumming's protagonist is as frustrated as the rest of the indie writing world, and the author wraps this frustration into a fun, smutty story. We are all being held over a barrel by the high and mighty online ebook sellers, and the story's Ms. Cumming takes it. Just like "the others," indie authors' colleagues/competition.

The story hit home on many points (and it's the kind of story in which subsequent readings will reveal details missed on the first reading)--the "all knowingness" of the retailer, the instant delivery of any item imaginable, the "others." It made for awesome satire.

It's difficult to judge the "steaminess" of this story though. I was kind of ticked off the whole time because I understood the author's point so clearly, so I didn't enjoy the sexy parts the way they were meant to be enjoyed. For me, they were the sharpness of the satire. I'll have to read another July Cumming for the full effect. Which sends me right back to the "one-click" button. The circle of smut...

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