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July 24, 2024
Eva’s Byte #482 – Submitted for Publication
After three rounds of editing, and another go-around for good measure, I’ve submitted my manuscript in the genre of Contemporary Fiction for publication to Erika M. Szabo of Golden Box Books Publishing. A shout-out to Erika for her courtesy, professionalism, expediency, and creative flair for formatting and cover design.
http://www.goldenboxbooks.com
Soon to be released:
Aileen’s Guesthouse by Eva Pasco
(Charlestown, Rhode Island) - Overlooking Horseshoe Point, at the end of Sea Lea Avenue in the picturesque village of Quonochontaug, you’ll find Aileen’s Guesthouse. There, a smattering of Quonnie’s locals and lodgers cross paths. Whether through cultivated connection or random encounter, these folks have more in common than first meets the eye.
My sincere appreciation to you for reading this far.
Hope you’ll consider crossing the threshold into Aileen’s Guesthouse when it’s available.
Eva’s Authors Den Page:
http://www.authorsden.com/evapasco
http://www.goldenboxbooks.com
Soon to be released:
Aileen’s Guesthouse by Eva Pasco
(Charlestown, Rhode Island) - Overlooking Horseshoe Point, at the end of Sea Lea Avenue in the picturesque village of Quonochontaug, you’ll find Aileen’s Guesthouse. There, a smattering of Quonnie’s locals and lodgers cross paths. Whether through cultivated connection or random encounter, these folks have more in common than first meets the eye.
My sincere appreciation to you for reading this far.
Hope you’ll consider crossing the threshold into Aileen’s Guesthouse when it’s available.
Eva’s Authors Den Page:
http://www.authorsden.com/evapasco
Published on July 24, 2024 03:17
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July 17, 2024
Eva’s Byte #481 – Splitting Hairs
In the capacity of a writer approaching the light at the end of the tunnel for publication, I’m at the third and final stage of reading through my manuscript. Far be it from me to notice, post-publication, a missing end punctuation mark or some other pesky oversight. Hope not!
So, I’m splitting hairs checking and rechecking dicey areas, such as:
One word or two?
For instance: backyard or back yard?
According to grammarians, backyard (one word) may be used as a noun, or used to function as an adjective.
Back yard (two words) can be used in the role of a noun when referring to “the back part of a yard”.
While both spellings are acceptable, backyard is preferable in both contexts.
Yes, back-yard (hyphenated) in the adjectival sense also exists, but it seems to be less prevalent.
So, I am proceeding accordingly as I split hairs roving my eyes from the prologue to epilogue.
On a note of farewell: goodbye or good-bye?
*May each of us writers polish and perfect our works in progress with an eye out for the reader.
My sincere appreciation to you for reading this far.
Eva’s Authors Den Page: http://www.authorsden.com/evapasco
So, I’m splitting hairs checking and rechecking dicey areas, such as:
One word or two?
For instance: backyard or back yard?
According to grammarians, backyard (one word) may be used as a noun, or used to function as an adjective.
Back yard (two words) can be used in the role of a noun when referring to “the back part of a yard”.
While both spellings are acceptable, backyard is preferable in both contexts.
Yes, back-yard (hyphenated) in the adjectival sense also exists, but it seems to be less prevalent.
So, I am proceeding accordingly as I split hairs roving my eyes from the prologue to epilogue.
On a note of farewell: goodbye or good-bye?
*May each of us writers polish and perfect our works in progress with an eye out for the reader.
My sincere appreciation to you for reading this far.
Eva’s Authors Den Page: http://www.authorsden.com/evapasco
Published on July 17, 2024 02:46
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July 10, 2024
Eva’s Byte #480 – Round Two
Not a knock-down-drag-out fight!
It’s round two for editing my finished draft in the genre of Contemporary. Nearly three years in the making right after I’d published Etta’s Fishing Ground on October 11, 1921, my latest writing endeavor is coming to fruition.
A pantser all the way from beginning to end, part of my lengthy writing process entails fine tuning every nuance along the way because it don’t mean a thing if it ain’t got that swing!
The method to my madness makes the editing process fly through the air with the greatest of ease. I’m basically trimming the fat, and tweaking here and there.
I won’t be ready to submit for publication until I’ve given the document at least one more round of editing.
One for the money, two for the show, three to get ready for this cat to go!
*Blue suede shoes notwithstanding, may each of us put our best foot forward in any creative undertaking.
My sincere appreciation to you for reading this far.
Eva’s Authors Den Page: http://www.authorsden.com/evapasco
It’s round two for editing my finished draft in the genre of Contemporary. Nearly three years in the making right after I’d published Etta’s Fishing Ground on October 11, 1921, my latest writing endeavor is coming to fruition.
A pantser all the way from beginning to end, part of my lengthy writing process entails fine tuning every nuance along the way because it don’t mean a thing if it ain’t got that swing!
The method to my madness makes the editing process fly through the air with the greatest of ease. I’m basically trimming the fat, and tweaking here and there.
I won’t be ready to submit for publication until I’ve given the document at least one more round of editing.
One for the money, two for the show, three to get ready for this cat to go!
*Blue suede shoes notwithstanding, may each of us put our best foot forward in any creative undertaking.
My sincere appreciation to you for reading this far.
Eva’s Authors Den Page: http://www.authorsden.com/evapasco
Published on July 10, 2024 02:56
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480, blog, contemporary, editing, eva-pasco, indie-author, pre-publication, round-two
July 3, 2024
Eva’s Byte #479 – A First Time for Everything
Although the movement to go braless gained momentum in the 1960s, this conventional child of the Sixties never did—until the other day.
There’s a first time for everything!
While out and about, a mishap occurred. I’d become unhinged. Rather than conduct the rest of my business in a half-hearted, lopsided manner, I discreetly gave the offender the slip inside my vehicle, with no one the wiser.
Spurn, baby! Spurn!
Then, getting over myself, I cruised the aisles of the supermarket in blissful anonymity.
NEWS FLASH: In the capacity of a writer, I finished drafting my Contemporary work in progress. I’m in the process of editing.
*May each of us defy conventions which no longer fit our mindset.
My sincere appreciation to you for reading this far.
Eva’s Authors Den Page: http://www.authorsden.com/evapasco
There’s a first time for everything!
While out and about, a mishap occurred. I’d become unhinged. Rather than conduct the rest of my business in a half-hearted, lopsided manner, I discreetly gave the offender the slip inside my vehicle, with no one the wiser.
Spurn, baby! Spurn!
Then, getting over myself, I cruised the aisles of the supermarket in blissful anonymity.
NEWS FLASH: In the capacity of a writer, I finished drafting my Contemporary work in progress. I’m in the process of editing.
*May each of us defy conventions which no longer fit our mindset.
My sincere appreciation to you for reading this far.
Eva’s Authors Den Page: http://www.authorsden.com/evapasco
Published on July 03, 2024 02:59
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June 26, 2024
Eva’s Byte #478 – Taking the Heat
In my native state of Rhode Island, the morning of July 18th initiated four consecutive days with temperatures reaching 90 degrees or higher—the longest heat wave in forty years!
Coinciding with this occurrence:
One – On Thursday morning, two days after the sun baked the interior of my idle vehicle, I discovered the air conditioning wasn’t working. Nevertheless, I continued fiddling with the control features while motoring. Normally, setting the temperature gauge on “low” with the fan at full blast, I’d have created a meat locker.
Two- There was construction along my route, considerably slowing progress as well as “turning up the heat” inside the cabin.
Three – Arriving home, I placed a call to the dealership, only to be informed about a nationwide cyberattack which had forced them to shut down their software systems. Up and running since then, I’ve scheduled a service appointment.
In the capacity of a writer, I’m sprinting toward the finish line of my Contemporary work in progress. The draft of chapter 59 is coming to a close in a heartbeat (1905 words thus far). Then, on to the epilogue.
*May each of us have courage to take the heat for not compromising our convictions.
My sincere appreciation to you for reading this far.
Eva’s Authors Den Page: http://www.authorsden.com/evapasco
Coinciding with this occurrence:
One – On Thursday morning, two days after the sun baked the interior of my idle vehicle, I discovered the air conditioning wasn’t working. Nevertheless, I continued fiddling with the control features while motoring. Normally, setting the temperature gauge on “low” with the fan at full blast, I’d have created a meat locker.
Two- There was construction along my route, considerably slowing progress as well as “turning up the heat” inside the cabin.
Three – Arriving home, I placed a call to the dealership, only to be informed about a nationwide cyberattack which had forced them to shut down their software systems. Up and running since then, I’ve scheduled a service appointment.
In the capacity of a writer, I’m sprinting toward the finish line of my Contemporary work in progress. The draft of chapter 59 is coming to a close in a heartbeat (1905 words thus far). Then, on to the epilogue.
*May each of us have courage to take the heat for not compromising our convictions.
My sincere appreciation to you for reading this far.
Eva’s Authors Den Page: http://www.authorsden.com/evapasco
Published on June 26, 2024 02:22
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June 19, 2024
Eva’s Byte #477 – Chowdahheads
Far from signifying “a person regarded as stupid” which is the definition of chowderhead, this hardy New Englander/native Rhode Islander is broaching a clammy subject:
Chowdaheads—folks, like myself, who step right up to the window of a clam shack to order a cup or bowl of chowdah, a rich soup containing clams, potatoes, and onions.
And, I ask: what’s a serving of chowdah without a side of clamcakes?
In the Ocean State, there are three kinds of chowdah:
Rhode Island - our traditional clear-based broth, served mostly along the south coast.
Manhattan - tomato-based broth
New England - milk or cream-based broth (my favorite)
In the capacity of a writer, I’m rounding the bend to the finish line for drafting chapter 59 (1400 words thus far) and closing, along my Contemporary work in progress.
*As summer approaches, may each of us step right up to indulge our every whim.
My sincere appreciation to you for reading this far.
Eva’s Authors Den Page: http://www.authorsden.com/evapasco
Chowdaheads—folks, like myself, who step right up to the window of a clam shack to order a cup or bowl of chowdah, a rich soup containing clams, potatoes, and onions.
And, I ask: what’s a serving of chowdah without a side of clamcakes?
In the Ocean State, there are three kinds of chowdah:
Rhode Island - our traditional clear-based broth, served mostly along the south coast.
Manhattan - tomato-based broth
New England - milk or cream-based broth (my favorite)
In the capacity of a writer, I’m rounding the bend to the finish line for drafting chapter 59 (1400 words thus far) and closing, along my Contemporary work in progress.
*As summer approaches, may each of us step right up to indulge our every whim.
My sincere appreciation to you for reading this far.
Eva’s Authors Den Page: http://www.authorsden.com/evapasco
Published on June 19, 2024 02:56
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June 12, 2024
Eva’s Byte #476 – The Stories We Tell
“…A story must have some points of contact with the reader to make him feel at home in it. Only then can he accept wonders.” John Steinbeck, The Winter of Our Discontent
An excerpt from my Contemporary work in progress which takes place in my native state of Rhode Island along the south coast in Charlestown:
The Stantons showed up at The Breach Café on Friday evening. Aileen and Gert acknowledged the presence of friends and neighbors inside the popular spot. In anticipation of Saturday’s summery weather forecast, the adults volleyed back and forth.
“Plannin’ on skipperin’ the sloop over to Block Island tomorrow.”
“Now, that’s gettin’ away from the missus!”
“I’m goin’ with him!”
In his own egocentric world, sitting opposite his mother and sister at the table, Reid felt proud of himself for behaving like a big boy. He pecked at a clamcake and slurped clear-broth chowder from a spoon to his heart’s content. Without being told, he swallowed his food and used a napkin to wipe his mouth before speaking. “Yummy!”
What the patrons didn’t know wouldn’t compromise their false lull of complacency in the guise of Indian summer weather.
Approaching the light at the end of the tunnel for publication, I’ve completed the draft of chapter 58 (1888 words). I’ve begun drafting chapter 59 (400 words thus far).
*May each of the stories we tell make the reader feel right at home along its heartfelt journey.
My sincere appreciation to you for reading this far.
Eva’s Authors Den Page: http://www.authorsden.com/evapasco
An excerpt from my Contemporary work in progress which takes place in my native state of Rhode Island along the south coast in Charlestown:
The Stantons showed up at The Breach Café on Friday evening. Aileen and Gert acknowledged the presence of friends and neighbors inside the popular spot. In anticipation of Saturday’s summery weather forecast, the adults volleyed back and forth.
“Plannin’ on skipperin’ the sloop over to Block Island tomorrow.”
“Now, that’s gettin’ away from the missus!”
“I’m goin’ with him!”
In his own egocentric world, sitting opposite his mother and sister at the table, Reid felt proud of himself for behaving like a big boy. He pecked at a clamcake and slurped clear-broth chowder from a spoon to his heart’s content. Without being told, he swallowed his food and used a napkin to wipe his mouth before speaking. “Yummy!”
What the patrons didn’t know wouldn’t compromise their false lull of complacency in the guise of Indian summer weather.
Approaching the light at the end of the tunnel for publication, I’ve completed the draft of chapter 58 (1888 words). I’ve begun drafting chapter 59 (400 words thus far).
*May each of the stories we tell make the reader feel right at home along its heartfelt journey.
My sincere appreciation to you for reading this far.
Eva’s Authors Den Page: http://www.authorsden.com/evapasco
Published on June 12, 2024 03:00
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June 5, 2024
Eva’s Byte #475 – Chalking It Up
Whether chalking up an outline at a crime scene, or chalking a pool cue, the writer goes the extra mile to authenticate fiction. There are no boundaries when it comes to conducting “nefarious” research. What we can’t chalk up to experience must be investigated.
Along the execution of my current work in progress I’ve covered the gamut of: forensics, aspects of the Seventies, laws, local shorebirds, drug overdosing, maritime occurrences, mental instability, and suicide.
Included, but not limited to!
Approaching the light at the end of the tunnel of my near-future publication in the genre of Contemporary, I’m currently chalking it up in a game of pool along the draft of chapter 58 (1706 words thus far).
*May each of us chalk up creative output to our imagination.
My sincere appreciation to you for reading this far.
Eva’s Authors Den Page: http://www.authorsden.com/evapasco
Along the execution of my current work in progress I’ve covered the gamut of: forensics, aspects of the Seventies, laws, local shorebirds, drug overdosing, maritime occurrences, mental instability, and suicide.
Included, but not limited to!
Approaching the light at the end of the tunnel of my near-future publication in the genre of Contemporary, I’m currently chalking it up in a game of pool along the draft of chapter 58 (1706 words thus far).
*May each of us chalk up creative output to our imagination.
My sincere appreciation to you for reading this far.
Eva’s Authors Den Page: http://www.authorsden.com/evapasco
Published on June 05, 2024 02:56
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May 29, 2024
Eva’s Byte #474 – What’s the Big Idea?
When it comes down to storytelling, the spark from a big idea fuels the writer’s imagination to create fiction with conviction.
Fuel for thought:
It’s no guarded secret, the big idea behind Etta’s Fishing Ground, my novel in the genre of Contemporary, took hold when I happened to scroll by a controversial post on social media pertaining to the topic of marital infidelity. Essentially, the question was, "If you discovered your best friend's husband with another woman, would you tell your bestie?"
The big idea fueling my current Contemporary work in progress sparked from a local news item pertaining to parents who jeopardized the safety of their child by exercising poor judgement. Of course, I’ve taken the big idea to go off on my own tangent in an entirely different direction.
I’m at the last stretch in drafting chapter 58 (1090 words thus far). One or two more chapters left to go.
*May the spark from a big idea fuel our creativity.
My sincere appreciation to you for reading this far.
Eva’s Authors Den Page:http://www.authorsden.com/evapasco
Fuel for thought:
It’s no guarded secret, the big idea behind Etta’s Fishing Ground, my novel in the genre of Contemporary, took hold when I happened to scroll by a controversial post on social media pertaining to the topic of marital infidelity. Essentially, the question was, "If you discovered your best friend's husband with another woman, would you tell your bestie?"
The big idea fueling my current Contemporary work in progress sparked from a local news item pertaining to parents who jeopardized the safety of their child by exercising poor judgement. Of course, I’ve taken the big idea to go off on my own tangent in an entirely different direction.
I’m at the last stretch in drafting chapter 58 (1090 words thus far). One or two more chapters left to go.
*May the spark from a big idea fuel our creativity.
My sincere appreciation to you for reading this far.
Eva’s Authors Den Page:http://www.authorsden.com/evapasco
Published on May 29, 2024 03:00
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May 22, 2024
Eva’s Byte #473 – Late Bloomers
Just as there are late-summer blooming flowers such as the black-eyed Susan, cone flower, daylily, sunflower, and aster—to mention some-there are late-blooming writers.
Annie Proulx, whose first novel, Postcards, won the Faulkner award, started writing at the age of 57.
Laura Ingalls Wilder, whose most notable work is the children’s book series, The Little House on the Prairie, got started at the age of 65.
Raymond Chandler published The Big Sleep, his hardboiled detective fiction, at the age of 50.
Frank McCourt wrote Angela’s Ashes, his Pulitzer Prize-winning novel, in his early 60s.
In the capacity of a writer, I wrote and published my first novel in the genre of Contemporary Women’s Fiction, at the age of 57, five years after retiring from a teaching career.
At this point in time I’m at the tail end of drafting chapter 58 (499 words thus far) in my current Contemporary work in progress.
*It’s never too late to come into bloom.
My sincere appreciation to you for reading this far.
Eva’s Authors Den Page: http://www.authorsden.com/evapasco
Annie Proulx, whose first novel, Postcards, won the Faulkner award, started writing at the age of 57.
Laura Ingalls Wilder, whose most notable work is the children’s book series, The Little House on the Prairie, got started at the age of 65.
Raymond Chandler published The Big Sleep, his hardboiled detective fiction, at the age of 50.
Frank McCourt wrote Angela’s Ashes, his Pulitzer Prize-winning novel, in his early 60s.
In the capacity of a writer, I wrote and published my first novel in the genre of Contemporary Women’s Fiction, at the age of 57, five years after retiring from a teaching career.
At this point in time I’m at the tail end of drafting chapter 58 (499 words thus far) in my current Contemporary work in progress.
*It’s never too late to come into bloom.
My sincere appreciation to you for reading this far.
Eva’s Authors Den Page: http://www.authorsden.com/evapasco
Published on May 22, 2024 03:10
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