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September 4, 2010
Going old school for a week
I do enjoy my online social media, but a couple of times a year, I just have to unplug. From email, Twitter, blog, everything. I even go back to writing in longhand--or give myself permission not to write at all. This coming week is such a week. When I come back, I won't be able to catch up on all the blog posts that I will miss, so if you have any big news this week, please share it in the comments below.
I won't leave you without some recommended reading (aside from the blogs already linked...
I won't leave you without some recommended reading (aside from the blogs already linked...
Published on September 04, 2010 22:31
Fast and slow passes
Part of my revision process involves different kinds of passes through the manuscript. One way to divide these is by "fast" and slow."
Fast pass: A read through the manuscript that's as fast as my regular reading speed, maybe a little faster. On this kind of pass, I'm looking for issues such as:
Does the whole book hang together?
How's the pacing?
Are there inconsistencies, transition failures, contradictions?
How's the rhythm? Am I hitting any snags, or does it flow smoothly?
Slow pass: A read thr...
Fast pass: A read through the manuscript that's as fast as my regular reading speed, maybe a little faster. On this kind of pass, I'm looking for issues such as:
Does the whole book hang together?
How's the pacing?
Are there inconsistencies, transition failures, contradictions?
How's the rhythm? Am I hitting any snags, or does it flow smoothly?
Slow pass: A read thr...
Published on September 04, 2010 02:08
September 3, 2010
Connecting with the inner YA
Special announcement: For the writers out there: agent Michelle Humphrey of ICM has put a 10-page critique up for grabs in a contest that celebrates the release of Denise Jaden's YA novel Losing Faith! All you have to do is enter your logline (a one- or two-sentence "hooky" description of your book) on the
Class of 2k10 blog post here
by September 14.
This week, a local radio station is playing the top songs of several bygone decades, including the two decades of my childhood and young adultho...
This week, a local radio station is playing the top songs of several bygone decades, including the two decades of my childhood and young adultho...
Published on September 03, 2010 00:13
September 2, 2010
The Writing Space
I've seen many pictures of authors' "writing caves" on the internet, and my main reaction is: Holy cow, either everyone else writes in a much neater space than mine, or they clean up big time before taking the picture.
And I understand the impulse to clean up; I really do. But I've often thought that if I ever take a picture of my own writing space, I will leave it just as cluttered as it normally is, because this is the reality. This is how I work: surrounded by debris. However, I hesitate t...
Published on September 02, 2010 03:15
August 31, 2010
Passion
If you're a writer, I recommend this post by R.L. LaFevers on
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It's an interesting post coming...
Published on August 31, 2010 03:02
August 30, 2010
Sunday stew
More brilliance showered upon the blogosphere this week. I fell in love with this blog post by Jeannine Atkins on revising: "As I trim, I watch to make sure that not too much meaning disappears, but leave just enough to hint or provoke. I’m trying to be as careful as a jeweler chipping a precious stone, knowing the right angle can let in more light, but a wrong stroke will just make it a smaller rock. Or dust." She's talking about poetry, but this applies to every form of writing, I think.
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Published on August 30, 2010 01:00
August 28, 2010
August Debuts
Here is August's crop of debut novels:
The Life and Opinions of Amy Finawitz, by Laura Toffler-Corrie. Middle grade. Amy Finawitz deals with a best friend who has just moved away, a mysterious old diary, and a set of unlikely friendships.
The Freak Observer, by Blythe Woolston. Young adult. Loa has just suffered several traumatic losses, and the arrival of mysterious postcards tests her already-shaky sense of reality as she searches for a reliable way to connect with the world.
Livvie Owen...

The Life and Opinions of Amy Finawitz, by Laura Toffler-Corrie. Middle grade. Amy Finawitz deals with a best friend who has just moved away, a mysterious old diary, and a set of unlikely friendships.

The Freak Observer, by Blythe Woolston. Young adult. Loa has just suffered several traumatic losses, and the arrival of mysterious postcards tests her already-shaky sense of reality as she searches for a reliable way to connect with the world.

Livvie Owen...
Published on August 28, 2010 02:03
August 27, 2010
Foreshadowing
I'm rereading Sense and Sensibility, and I think Jane Austen nicely illustrates a certain lesson about deus ex machina vs. foreshadowing in this book. (Therefore, today's post contains spoilers, but I think that's permitted for a 200-year-old book. It's not like I'm revealing the ending of Mockingjay here.)
In S&S, Elinor loves Edward Ferrars, but he is already secretly engaged to a young lady named Lucy--an engagement made, we are told, when both were too immature and impulsive to understand ...
In S&S, Elinor loves Edward Ferrars, but he is already secretly engaged to a young lady named Lucy--an engagement made, we are told, when both were too immature and impulsive to understand ...
Published on August 27, 2010 00:55
August 25, 2010
What the people want
With election season underway,* I was thinking how politicians often succeed by telling people what they want to hear.
And that kind of audience-pleasing can be tempting for a writer, especially once one has an audience. (A very nice upside to the pre-pub days is that you can write whatever the heck you want, because there are no expectations on you.)
But one thing to remember about audience-pleasing is that it's really just guesswork. "People will want more romance here." "The readers will e...
And that kind of audience-pleasing can be tempting for a writer, especially once one has an audience. (A very nice upside to the pre-pub days is that you can write whatever the heck you want, because there are no expectations on you.)
But one thing to remember about audience-pleasing is that it's really just guesswork. "People will want more romance here." "The readers will e...
Published on August 25, 2010 00:45
August 24, 2010
Smorgasbord
Some links for your perusal:
One of the first blogs I ever read was Cynsations, Cynthia Leitich Smith's must-read combo of interviews, publishing news, and book talk. The interviews go in depth, and as an aspiring novelist I read them all with interest, learning a great deal. So it's rather special to me to have my own interview appearing there now. I talked about why I like realistic contemporary fiction, tools I use in writing and revision, and some backstage details about The Secret Year. E...
One of the first blogs I ever read was Cynsations, Cynthia Leitich Smith's must-read combo of interviews, publishing news, and book talk. The interviews go in depth, and as an aspiring novelist I read them all with interest, learning a great deal. So it's rather special to me to have my own interview appearing there now. I talked about why I like realistic contemporary fiction, tools I use in writing and revision, and some backstage details about The Secret Year. E...
Published on August 24, 2010 01:06