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September 28, 2018
Weekend Update: September 29-30, 2018
[image error]Next week at Maine Crime Writers, there will posts by Kaitlyn Dunnett/Kathy Lynn Emerson (Monday), Sandra Neilly (Tuesday), Dick Cass (Wednesday), Lea Wait (Thursday), and Barb Ross (Friday).
In the news department, here’s what’s happening with some of us who blog regularly at Maine Crime Writers:
from Kaitlyn Dunnett: the paperback reprint of last year’s hardcover, X MARKS THE SCOT is now in stores. This is the eleventh Liss MacCrimmon mystery and involves a treasure hunt that takes Liss from Maine to the Canadian Maritimes and back again.
An invitation to readers of this blog: Do you have news relating to Maine, Crime, or Writing? We’d love to hear from you. Just comment below to share.
And a reminder: If your library, school, or organization is looking for a speaker, we are often available to talk about the writing process, research, where we get our ideas, and other mysteries of the business. Contact Kate Flora
September 27, 2018
Let’s Have a Blemish or Two
Dorothy Cannell: Many years ago I went on a fund raising house tour in my home town [image error]in Illinois because of one home in particular. I had been charmed by its creamy stone exterior and slate roof every time I passed it when in the area. The images sprang of a delightful, heartwarming life within where the past was preserved and the present embraced. On stepping into the hall my hopes were fulfilled. Behold the handsome staircase, the richly polished floor boards, a door ajar to a book lined library. I continued to be delighted throughout our prowling of the ground floor and the one above; all was proportion, harmony, and excellent taste. But as we proceeded upward and on I found it all rather monotonous; regretting that there wasn’t a single eyesore of the lumpy soap dish made by a six-year-old sort, or a garish picture gifted by a dear friend that required being put on display in case of a visit. I rethought the library with its matching leather bound books and decided a few tattered paperbacks would have suggested that someone in the house occasionally read something other than the house beautiful or yachting magazines. Suddenly the thought was there: ‘Perfection can be boring.’
I was reminded of this personal viewpoint last week when reading a mystery acquired in a secondhand bookstore that had been published a couple of decades ago. My interest in the main character waned on discovering she had no foibles or problems worth more than transient angst.
She was a successful career woman.
Age not specified, but young. My guess late twenties or early thirties.
Attractive. Policeman boyfriend refers to her gorgeous legs and how even when her hair is windblown she had never looked lovelier.
Organized and energetic.
Marvelous clothes sense.
A loyal friend. Her arrival on the scene is due to a phone call from another friend who is worried that a murder has occurred and that an ex-boyfriend may be involved.
A good sport. She camps out in derelict surrounding without complaint.
Patient listener, never putting in a – ‘Yes, but …”
Kind to an eccentric character who is ridiculed by others.
Policeman boyfriend is handsome, admired by and respected by his superiors, and revered by his subordinates.
Speaks of herself as being nosy, but it would be more appropriate to use the word ‘concerned’.
No idiosyncrasies. No foibles that make people endlessly compelling and dear in real life.
[image error]This is coming from me as a reader, not a writer. In connecting this read to that visit to the house that palled, I realized that I see a main character as the structure on which the traditional mystery, setting, and plot is built. This is the person who opens the door for us, invites us in, takes us through the rooms, and enlivens the visit. We need him or her to be someone with relatability, not someone who will make us feel we should rush back out and get a better haircut, a change of clothes, or keep our mouths shut about personal problems of which they could have no understanding.
Just a thought before I whip up a batch of homemade bread, finish up a piece of sculpture, and read the dictionary from cover to cover.
Happy reading
Dorothy
September 26, 2018
PLOTTING ON MONHEGAN ISLAND
Wanting take advantage of Maine’s glorious Septmber weather, my husband and I spent a day on Monhegan Island. This small island, only about one square mile, is one of our favorite places to get away and hike. Camera mandatory. We booked the ferry Elizabeth Ann ahead and were lucky with the weather. The twelve-mile ride from the village of Port Clyde took us past the Marshall Point Lighthouse, another favorite haunt.
[image error]I thought I might set a story on Monhegan, so as we rode the ferry away from the mainland, I started plotting. The island has a small year-round population but boasts a thriving fishing community. In summer tourists and artists fill the island’s cottages, hotels, and galleries. And maybe my fictional murderer or his victim, I told my husband. He just rolls his eyes when I suggest these worst-case scenarios.
The ferry left us at the village dock and we hiked up past the Island Inn, where we’d stayed overnight on a previous visit. The inn is quaint and cozy, and our room had a balcony overlooking the harbor. A good vantage point from which a criminal hiding out could watch the comings and goings of ferry passengers. Hmm, my plot began to cook.
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Monhegan’s trails are extensive, about twelve miles. For our few hours before the ferry returned, we chose the cliff side trails. We hiked through the village, and in the schoolhouse yard, found the Tercentenary Tablet that commemorates John Smith’s voyage to the island in 1614. We entered the cool shade of the woods, fragrant with pine and balsam, and climbed through a fairy glen, where children had built stick houses for the wee ones. We emerged from the woods onto White Head, among the highest ocean cliffs [image error]on the Maine coastline.
A man standing nearby aloud from his guidebook that the undertow there was dangerous and the waves unpredictable. On that clear day, we could see the islands of Isle au Haut and Matinicus, and beyond to the broad Atlantic. Anyone who fell in—or was pushed—would be swept away to Spain. Aha, I’d found my murder site. Steep, with giant waves crashing on the rocks below. Isolated—except for the crush of people taking pictures and looking through binoculars. Oh well, I’d set the story during another season. During a storm.
Before I ruined the scenic interlude for my husband, he dragged me away back to the trail. this next photo is of the village, taken from Lighthouse Hill. We had lunch in the village and bought pottery as a souvenir before boarding the ferry to return to Port Clyde.
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If you go to Monhegan, put my plotting out of your head and enjoy the island. If anyone has experiences on other Maine islands to share, I’d love your comments.
September 25, 2018
Seeing Like a Writer
Kate Flora: I was driving on the Maine turnpike last week and suddenly there appeared [image error]to be an explosion of squirrels trying to cross a six lane highway. It was something that I’d never seen before, and after the fourth squirrel, and a fifth that didn’t make it, I began to notice how the Maine roads were littered with dead squirrels. I’m not alone. This week the Boston Globe had an article explaining the squirrel explosion: https://www.bostonglobe.com/metro/2018/09/24/squirrel-nado-squirrel-population-midst-unprecedented-boom/FUciejVPnY2Cp7jkHf7BlM/story.html
What’s my point? That in order to render convincing, nuanced worlds, writers have to be constantly aware of the world around us. As I told a library audience this week, they may drive past a car on the side of the road with its door open and worry about the battery running down, while a crime writer wants to know who was in the car, why they suddenly exited, where they are now, and what they are doing? Why is there only one shoe beside the road? We’re the ones who photograph odd scenes, and who have interesting clippings on our refrigerators or in our files. I have two: pulmonary physician dies at home of asthma attack, and plague mice missing from lab.
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I used to tell my writing students that despite the advice they got from parents about minding their own business, it was a writer’s job to be curious. I even used to hand out a “License to be Nosy.” I used to give them writing exercises about the people or incidents they’d seen. “Collect people,” I’d tell them. “How they dress, how they walk, how they interact with the world.” I’d give out a writing assignment that involved going into a coffee shop, picking out two people with interesting accessories or outfits, and then writing the dialogue when they meet. I’d say, “when you park your car, notice the cars around you when you get out. Do they tell you something about the drivers?”
It doesn’t necessarily come naturally, this habit of paying attention to the world. We’re all


so busy, so often hurrying from one place to another, and when we’re not in motion, we tend to be plugged into devices. I have to remind myself to stop. Slow down. Look up. Look around. If I only go to my desk and work or to my kitchen to cook or to my car to do an errand, I’ll miss the delicate dance of the leaves as they head for the ground. I’ll miss the little white mushrooms on my neighbor’s lawn that look like a cluster of golf balls. I’ll miss a blue sky filled with quilted mackerel clouds and wispy cirrus clouds, or the immense piles of white whipped cream clouds. I’ll miss the swoops and cries of the terns. The gabble of the eider ducks that sounds like distant conversation.
Another layer of this challenge of seeing the world is coming to see it through our character’s eyes. While our characters may have some of our attributes, they are also distinct individuals. I know that Joe Burgess was taught to be a close observer by his mother, and he has a very visual take on the world. If I didn’t observe on his behalf, I wouldn’t be able to have him see this:
He leaned back, staring at the windshield. At the top, the sun peeping over the Old Port’s brick buildings illuminated icy etchings, elaborately and intricately beautiful. At the bottom, heat turned the beautiful detailing to opaque mush. Soon the slap of wiper blades would flick it all away, giving him back a clear view of the lot full of salt-rimed cars and dirty snow. Sic transit gloria mundi.






As I travel through the world, I am constantly seeing, and photographing, visuals that I may use some day. Posters, signs on the sidewalk, reflections in the windows. Someday, I may have a use for them.
Every character will see their world differently, and it is our job, as writers, to see through their eyes. My architect may enter rooms and immediately start moving walls and windows. Ross McIntyre, my high school biology teacher, is attuned to the natural world, to the foibles of adolescence, and to the details of small town life. Burgess is visual and a close observer of people. Thea, too, is an observer of people, and a sympathetic champion of the underdog.
What do you do to “tune up” your observations? At the beginning of a class session, I like to hand out notebooks, small enough to fit in a pocket or purse, and encourage my students to write down things they see and hear. That notebook serves as a reminder to be observant. Do you carry a notebook? Capture images with your phone? Have you ever gone out for an hour, or a few hours, trying to see the world through your character’s eyes?
September 24, 2018
Salvador Dali and Me, a Body and a Mystery
by Barb, on a deadline again, (actually two) Portland, Maine
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A couple of weeks ago, I was in St. Petersburg, Florida for Bouchercon, the worldwide mystery conference. It was an excellent conference at an historic hotel, and of course, it’s always great to see my mystery tribe.
I was busy at the conference, with a Sisters in Crime board meeting, a panel, and a terrific Kensington Publishing sponsored book signing, but I wasn’t so busy that I couldn’t play a little hooky. Bill and I asked local author Cheryl Hollon where we should go and she responded without hesitation, the Dali Museum.
So visit we did. We had a really great docent, and I don’t think I’d really understood or appreciated Salvador Dali until I took the tour there. My friend, Julie Hennrikus, aka, J.A. Hennrikus, aka Julia Henry wrote a post about our visit to the museum here.
And, visiting the Dali Museum gave me a chance to pull out a memory I haven’t thought about in years.
My grandparents had a house in Water Mill on Long Island. There was a rental house, kitty-corner across our sandy lane and the tenants changed over fairly often during my childhood. I spent the entire summer of my sixteenth year with my grandparents and I think the story I’m about to tell happened then, which would have been 1969.
[image error]The house across the way had by that point been rented for a number of years by a man called Carlos Alemany, who was described to me as, “Salvador Dali’s gem cutter.” There was some curiosity about him among the neighbors, but not as much as you might think. He was a bachelor in his sixties who occasionally had model-ly looking women about a third his age staying for the weekend, which caused some speculation. Eventually, he bought the lot across the lane from his rental house, adjacent to my grandparents’. He never built anything on it, but on Saturdays and Sundays, he would sit out on this lot full of brush and scrub pines, goldenrod and queen anne’s lace, in one of those old-fashioned canvas, sling-type folding chairs. People thought that was curious.
One weeknight, at the cocktail hour, when friends were visiting, my grandmother picked up the ringing telephone. It was a reporter from the ABC affiliate in New York who wanted to ask questions about a “murder in our compound.” My grandmother assumed it was a prank call and hung up. She told the guests about it, and we all thought it was hilarious, especially the part about “the compound.” My grandparents lived in a classic, three-bedroom, mid-century ranch house, which had been built, along with three other houses, on the edge of an enormous estate. (The fifth house was the children’s playhouse that went with the estate, which had been modified to turn it into a modest cottage. Close readers of the Maine Clambake Mysteries may recognize something familiar about this.) Anyway, this grouping of houses was in no way, shape, or form “a compound” in the manner of the Kennedys’ at Hyannisport.
Then my grandfather, who was endlessly curious and could never leave well enough alone, called the station back and went through the switchboard, asking for the reporter by name to see if he really worked there. Once connected, the reporter told my grandfather that our neighbor, Carlos Alemany, had been “dining out all over New York all week,” telling the story of finding a murdered body in our house. My grandfather assured the reporter there had been no murder in our house and that was the end of the call.
We did spend a little time trying to figure out what had provoked this. Had we been absent from the house for more than a few hours at a time? No. Could he have seen my grandmother, who was a champion napper, sleeping on the couch in the living room? Seemed unlikely. I’m sure my grandfather must have asked Alemany about it, but no satisfactory explanation was forthcoming. The whole incident remains a mystery.
Being at the Dali Museum brought this strange story back to me. I wondered if the parts I believed to be true were even true. Was Carlos Alemany really even Salvador Dali’s “gem cutter?”
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Carlos Alemany and Salvador Dali
Some googling found the answer easily. An obituary from 1993 in the New York Times titled, “Carlos Alemany, 88, Surrealistic Jeweler,” tells the story of a former conductor of a touring tango orchestra, who settled in New York in 1947 and learned the jewelers’ trade. Far from being a “gem cutter,” he was the artist who translated Dali’s drawings and visions into intricate pieces of jewelry. Their collaboration lasted for decades, though Alemany twice almost went bankrupt because of the money he’d laid out for the jewels for the pieces. The best story I read about the working relationship between the two men was in a 1970 article, “The jeweler behind Dali’s ‘Art in Jewels,'” by Mitchell Gilbert from Jeweler’s Circular-Keystone.
With the arrogance of youth, I saw Alemany, the same age then as I am now, as a funny little man who sat in a canvas chair on an overgrown vacant lot. But the stories he could have told me if only I’d thought to ask.
Jen’s Work in Progress: The Lost Dog Diaries
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Hi all, This month, I thought I would do things a little bit differently and post my current work in progress – a writing exercise that has taken on a life of its own over the past month. I’ve always had an aversion to stories written from the animal’s point of view, but wanted to stretch myself and see what happened. This started as a simple attempt to create a cohesive backstory in my own mind for the dog characters in my Flint K-9 series…and then just sort of kept going. The story follows the early days of Casper, a pit bull who’s being used as a “bait dog” in a fighting ring in Northern California. When I worked in animal rescue out in Oregon, I worked with a few bullies with similar histories, and those wagging tails, soft eyes, and scarred bodies still haunt me. I wanted to try and capture that here. In the excerpt that follows, Casper has just been started as a bait dog after a particularly rough first few months of life.
The days and weeks that followed are a blur that I don’t like to think about now, filled with pain and blood and bared teeth. Graham started Banjo, Dragon, and me as bait dogs that spring, just as the weather was warming. A stake was set in the middle of the ring and we were chained there. We had each gotten collars with sharp teeth that bit into our necks if we tried to get away, so that I always felt something tearing into me, even when I slept.
It was worst in the ring, though. At the start of training, we weren’t taught anything but how to take pain, how to deal it out, and how to hate. Chained at the center of the ring, the bigger dogs – all of them experienced fighters – were set loose on us. I don’t remember any of their names, if I ever knew them. I don’t even really remember their faces. I just remember their gleaming teeth, the ferocity of their snarls, and the pain I felt when those gleaming teeth inevitably bit into my flesh.
I was supposed to fight back, I knew. Dragon did, and right away they stopped putting him on the chain. Even Banjo caught on. He had a lopsided look without his ears because Black Hat had cut them crooked, and he tended to tilt his head a little to one side. The shorter ear hurt him, he said, and that pain made him meaner than he’d been when we were young.
Anyway, my sweet, lopsided brother Banjo learned to fight.
“All you need to do is growl,” Banjo told me one night after dinner. “Just show some spunk.”
Spunk. That was Graham’s word. I knew he was getting frustrated with me.
“Forget just growling,” Dragon said. He was growing fast, muscle showing through his short coat. Already, scars marked his chest and flank from fights. “Go for blood. Get in there. That’s what they want. You give it to them, and life is a lot easier.”
“I know you’re afraid,” Banjo said, “but there’s just as much to be scared of if you don’t fight. Maybe more. Besides,” and here his chest puffed a bit. He held himself straighter. “It feels kind of good. Just let yourself go.”
More than the pain, that was exactly what I was afraid of. I’d been getting hurt since I was a baby – I was used to that by now. But I hadn’t forgotten the rage that had overtaken me when Black Hat killed Ammy. I had vowed then that I would never give in to that feeling again. No matter how hard it might be, I was determined to stand by that vow.
The more I saw around me, the more I believed I was right to stand by my belief. I saw what anger did to Dragon – how short his temper was with the rest of us in the litter now. How poorly he slept. How tight and hard he became.
More than the pain, that was what I wanted to avoid. That, and the nod of approval I saw from Black Hat whenever one of us tore into another.
And so, day after day, Graham dragged me into the ring. He chained me to the center. Set the other dogs loose on me. Shouted at me from the sidelines, as dog after dog after dog came at me.
I curled into a ball to make myself as small as I could. Remembered those early days with my mother, and the warmth and sweetness of that time.
I lay there, and waited for it to be over.
Thankfully, those painful early days are a dim memory now, and didn’t last nearly as long as they felt at the time. One night, while Black Hat and his men shouted and traded bills and watched my fellow dogs tear one another to pieces, I lay in my bed of muck and straw beside Sadie.
We were nearly a year old, and Sadie’s belly had grown bigger in the past weeks. She licked anxiously at my wounds that night. I had been the dog Black Hat used to get the others “stirred up” for the night’s fights, and the deep gashes on my legs, paw, head, and belly leaked blood despite Graham patching my wounds when I was no longer useful to the fighters.
“We can’t do this much longer,” Sadie whispered to me, her brown eyes on mine. “They’ll kill you soon, unless you start fighting back.”
“They’ll just put me in more fights if I do that,” I said. “Look at Banjo. Look at Dragon. They’re monsters now. I don’t want that.”
Sadie lay her head on my side with a soft sigh. “You’ll never be a monster. But you can’t take this if you keep just letting them attack you.”
“You don’t need to worry about me.” I nudged her, glancing at her growing belly. “You just worry about yourself – and those pups who’ll soon be with us.”
Instead of looking pleased, she frowned at me. “I can’t have them here. You see what happens. We lost Ammy. Flo. And we might as well have lost Banjo and Dragon – we’re all that’s left. I don’t want that for my pups.”
“So what do we do?” I asked. I could hear dogs snarling and men cheering in the fighting barn across the property. Across the aisle from us, other dogs were caged, pacing, their eyes wild at the smell of blood in the air. Sadie and I were the only dogs who weren’t confined – thanks to Graham, who had taken an almost unheard-of stand against his father to keep the two of us together.
Sadie looked around, lowering her voice even further to avoid being overheard. I leaned in, and flinched at even that simple movement.
“I think we should leave,” she said. Her eyes widened, and I heard her breath quicken. She was excited. How long had she been thinking about this?
“We can’t,” I said immediately. “We’d never get out. And if we got caught, Black Hat would kill us both.”
“Not if we do it right,” she countered.
I felt my own breath come faster, catching Sadie’s excitement. The idea hadn’t even occurred to me. We couldn’t just…leave.
Could we?
“And how do we do that, exactly?” I finally asked.
And so she told me.
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Jen Blood is the USA Today-bestselling author of the Erin Solomon Mysteries and the Flint K-9 Search and Rescue Mysteries. To learn more, visit www.jenblood.com.
September 21, 2018
Weekend Update: September 22-23, 2018
[image error]Next week at Maine Crime Writers, there will posts by Jen Blood (Monday), Barb Ross (Tuesday), Kate Flora (Wednesday), Susan Vaughan (Thursday), and Dorothy Cannell (Friday).
In the news department, here’s what’s happening with some of us who blog regularly at Maine Crime Writers:
from Kaitlyn Dunnett: The winners of ARCs of Overkilt, the 12th Liss MacCrimmon mystery are Elizabeth Ann from TX, Candace from TN, Lily from MI, Karlene from GA, Linda from TX, Susan from CO, and three more who haven’t yet responded to my email. If you entered and your name is Amy A., Cara, or Nicole, please check your email, including your spam filter. If I don’t hear from you by Monday, I’ll have to draw another name(s). Thanks to all who entered. Look for more giveaways to be announced here and on Facebook in the future. For those wondering, I no longer use Goodreads for giveaways because Goodreads (and their parent company, Amazon) now charges a hefty fee for listings that used to be free.
Lea Wait: Lea is excited to be making her first school visit of the 2018-2019 school year at the Warsaw Middle School in Pittsfield, Maine, on Thursday, September 27. What does [image error]a school visit entail? They’re all different, but at this one she’ll speak to all 325 fifth through seventh grade students at a school assembly, and then talk with four separate groups of sixth and seventh graders who’ve read her FINEST KIND, and finally, meet with seventh grade teachers to discuss incorporating writing and history into their classrooms.
As the month is coming to an end, we remind you that our September prizes are a signed first edition of Richard Russo’s Empire Falls and the audio CD of a Louise Penny book. All you have to do to be eligible to win is post a comment on one of our blogs.
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MCW writers Kate Flora and Bruce Coffin with Kate’s co-writer Joseph K. Loughlin at the South Portland Library
An invitation to readers of this blog: Do you have news relating to Maine, Crime, or Writing? We’d love to hear from you. Just comment below to share.
And a reminder: If your library, school, or organization is looking for a speaker, we are often available to talk about the writing process, research, where we get our ideas, and other mysteries of the business. Contact Kate Flora
September 20, 2018
Library Love
A discussion on Twitter this past weekend asked people to tweet about the libraries they love the most. I follow a lot of writers, so was not one bit surprised by the number of shout-outs for people’s hometown libraries. For those of us who live to read and write, there’s nothing like your first library.
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The Fitchburg Public Library has long incorporated this image of an owl into its logo.
Because I couldn’t possibly cover my feelings for the Fitchburg Public Library in the word limit for tweets, I thought I would expound on the subject here.
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I have never read this book, but will have to track it down.
My hometown is not a fancy place now, and it wasn’t when I was growing up, either. A small city in central Massachusetts, it’s the home of a state college we called “TC” for Teachers’ College, now known as Fitchburg State University.
But the college wasn’t Fitchburg’s dominant institution when I was a kid, its paper mills were.
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A paper mill in my hometown
The smoke-belching behemoths strung along the banks of the Nashua River made a lot of money for their owners, and in the best tradition of local corporate ownership, their owners invested some of their profits in the community.
The city’s gem was the Fitchburg Public Library, a handsome building on Main Street built by the Wallace family in 1885, which had a separate children’s room as early as 1899.
A lot of towns have libraries built by wealthy benefactors (famously, the Carnegie family) but few boast an entire separate building (connected to the mothership by an indoor walkway) dedicated to the library needs of children. Built in 1950, the Fitchburg Youth Library was paid for with contributions from the city’s youth and another substantial gift from the Wallace family.
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Home away from home in my formative years.
Spacious and well-stocked, the Fitchburg Youth Library boasted comfortable, kid-sized chairs in front of a kid-sized fireplace and lots of kid-sized tables where you could spread out and do homework or art projects. The librarians were helpful and knew all of us regulars by name. My mother used to drop me and my sisters at the library when she had a lot of errands to run, knowing we’d be safe and absorbed until she returned.
But the FPL’s dedication to encouraging literacy and library skills among the city’s youth didn’t stop with the stand-alone library—we also had the bookmobile, a retrofitted bus that lumbered up and down the hills of the ‘burg, bringing books to kids and adults who couldn’t get to the main library.
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The bookmobile driver was a fellow named Mr. Scott. He and another mobile librarian answered questions and helped us make selections.
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Here’s an interior view.
When we took out books to the checkout they’d touch the little inky metal part of the card to the tips of our noses, a signal to the entire neighborhood that we’d been to the bookmobile.
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Old school.
In adulthood I’ve held cards at enormous libraries (the Boston Public) and tiny libraries (Friend Memorial in Brooklin, Maine). I spend lots of time at the library in my current community (the wonderful Walker Memorial in Westbrook) and have a special place in my heart for the Peaks Island branch of the Portland Public Library.
I’ve been honored to give readings at dozens of libraries across the state, and I’m continually impressed by the creativity and resourcefulness of local librarians and local library boards as they rise to the challenge of the internet and develop new ways remain engaged with their communities.
I love them all, but if I had to choose the library I hold most dear it would have to be the marvelous little jewel tucked behind the big library in Fitchburg, with an entrance of its own on Newton Place, the place I first found my home among the books.
Commenters: What is your favorite library, and why?
Brenda Buchanan is the author of the Joe Gale Mystery Series, featuring a diehard Maine newspaper reporter who covers the crime and courts beat. Three books— QUICK PIVOT, COVER STORY and TRUTH BEAT—are available everywhere e-books are sold. She is writing a new series that has as its protagonist a Portland criminal defense lawyer willing to take on cases others won’t touch in a town to which she swore she would never return.
September 19, 2018
Sometimes I wonder If I’ll Ever Learn…
Vaughn Hardacker here: You may recall that in an earlier blog I wrote about having to put down Maggie, our Maltese, and obtaining a Yorkie puppy. My significant other, Jane, convinced me to get another dog, although our age (I turned 71 this summer) made me reluctant. I’m a glass half empty type of guy and I used the excuse that there is no guarantee that we’ll live the fifteen years that Yorkshires live on average. What will happen to the dog then?
[image error]To get to the point, as the time came for us to take Maggie (Jane’s companion for seventeen years) to the vet Jane became more and more despondent. It quickly became evident that she was devastated by the prospect of losing her best and most loyal friend (until I came around–isn’t that a scary thought!) and I relented. So no sooner did I tell her okay let’s get another dog. She immediately showed me a post on facebook. A woman in Pittsfield had a male Yorkshire Terrier for sale. It was then Jane confessed that she’d already been in contact with her. That was on Saturday. Monday came and we took Maggie to the vet (an experience that I never want to go through again). On the way home I was informed that we could pick up the Yorkie in Pittsfield the next day… Enter Skipper.
Now, lets jump forward ten months. Jane had a dog stroller (I had no idea they made such a thing!)
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Skipper before visiting the Groomer
that had been Maggie’s and she posted it on facebook (there is an Aroostook County sell and swap page) and was called by a woman in Madawaska who was looking for one. Oh, by the way, she had four Yorkie puppies, three males and a female, she was looking to sell to someone who would give them a good home. Hello, Ginger. Yup, Jane bought the little female.
Now, lets morph back to Skipper. Ginger was two pounds, twelve ounces and Skipper, who is now almost eleven months, old weighs in at nine or ten pounds. Ginger’s parents were both small so the chances are very good that when she is full grown Ginger will not weigh more than five or six pounds. My concern was how was Skipper going to act?
We brought Ginger home and put her in her playpen (yuh, we not only have a puppy stroller, we have a playpen). Skipper’s first reaction was to stare at her and growl. He stuck his nose
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Ginger Nine Weeks Old
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Skipper watching over Ginger
against the side of the playpen and surprisingly Ginger went over and pressed her nose against his. Before we knew it, Skipper was on the love seat guarding the puppy!
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Who’s The Boss?
Despite all my reservations and the size differential Ginger stood her ground and gave Skipper as much as he gave her. In fact, we’re constantly amazed at how well they get along to the extent that Skipper seems to cater to her (even when she stands on him). The biggest surprise came the first time they played together. Apparently Skipper thought he was going to overwhelm her. He quickly learned that he might be bigger, but she was nastier and more aggressive. In fact, I’m amazed that they don’t hurt one another when they rough-house.
Ginger has been with us for two weeks now and the two of them are attached at the hip. When Ginger is in her playpen and the door is closed, Skipper runs all over the house looking for her. Though I think there are times when he enjoys being able to chew on a Bully Stick without being assaulted.
The only downside is that every day they act more and more like human kids–whatever one has the other one wants. Never in my wildest nightmares did I think that at 71 I’d be raising kids again! I do have to admit though that it’s nice having someone else run the house for a change (it sure isn’t Jane or me!).
So You Wanna Write A Crime Short Story? Well Do Ya, Punk? Then Just Do It!
In the spring, I challenged my friend, Tim Queeney, to write a short story for the upcoming crime anthology, Landfall. In response, he challenged me to do the same thing. So we set about coming up with compelling ideas and writing our stories. We knew the odds of being included in this anthology were long, but what the hell. Nothing gained, nothing lost. And I had some spare time on my hands.
Writing a short story is difficult. Compression and limitation are the keys. A writer must restrain his or her ambition and examine life in microscopic detail. I’m not sure which writer said it, but the goal is to start your story near the end.
It had been a long time since I had written a short story, but the reality of my career as a writer is that I started out as a short story writer. In 2004 I won the Andres Dubus Award for one of my stories. In 2009 my short story was selected and published in Quarry: Best New England Crime Stories. The next year my story was a finalist for the Al Blanchard Award. Then I abruptly stopped writing short stories and began publishing novels.
After our challenge, I started writing my story. A title had not yet been decided upon. I believed I had a fresh, original idea with a relevant topic, now I just had to execute. The goal was to play small ball. Focus on minor details. Provide character development leading up to the surprise ending (thank you Stephen King for your influence). Tim and I switched stories. We critiqued each other and gave pertinent advice. I loved Tim’s story, “Clearing the Deck” but thought the ending could have been stronger. So he made it stronger.
With the deadline quickly approaching, we were like two Iron Chefs facing against the clock to finish cooking our meals. Finally, feeling like we’d done all we could with our stories, we submitted them electronically and waited. And waited. Would our works be selected for the anthology, LANDFALL? Although I felt I wrote a killer story, one just never knows, I hoped for the best but prepared for the worst. After all, this business of getting published is competitive, brutal and especially cutthroat. Thick skin is a requirement to being a Romeo and a writer
I like writing novels. I like the expansiveness of plotting and developing detailed characters. When writing a novel, you can take your time. Breathe. Create beautiful sentences. Killer plots. Develop wonderful characters. A writer does not have the luxury of these benefits when writing a shorty story under five thousand words. And truth be told, as crass as this may sound, short stories don’t pay much.
After submitting it, I forgot about the story and moved onto other things, like promoting my newest novel, THE NEIGHBOR, and editing my new novel, PRAY FOR THE GIRL, which is scheduled to publish in the spring of 2019. The summer flew by. I took my son down to the University of Miami for his first year of college. My daughter returned to college. The house was now a bit quieter for the wife and I. Life stuff happened and I forgot about my story—until Tim reminded me of it one day. No news in publishing is usually bad news. Maybe they hadn’t got back to us because we didn’t make the cut. Oh well. Rejection is a part of the writer’s life. Deal with it.
Then an email came in September, informing me that my short story “School Daze” had been chosen. I felt elated, almost like I did the first time I was notified. But what about Tim? Would I be getting off the island without him? Tim soon emailed me and told me his story was chosen as well. Hooray! We’d killed it like tag team wrestlers: like Fuji and Tanaka. Out of 215 stories Level Best Books had received, only 31 had been chosen, and ours had made the cut.
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So look for LANDFALL: Best New England Crime Stories in October. My short is about an unusual school shooter and I guarantee you that the ending will be a stunner. Will I write another short story? Probably. But my heart is still with the novel, and that’s where my focus will soon return. I’m back to being a double threat as a writer.
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