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The Good, The Bad, The Ugly: My WIP Renovation
An edited excerpt of my post originally published on Focus on Fiction.
Revising a piece of writing is like renovating a home. First you figure out what isn’t working: what needs fixed, replaced, or removed entirely. Next comes the actual labor: a series of hard, backbreaking (or confidence-destroying) tasks to make it ready for the improvements. Finally, comes the “making it better” part: you add new stuff that is better than the old, you move stuff to make the space better than it was, and if you’re lucky, you end up with a “better than” home—or manuscript.
So here is my take on the good, the bad and the ugly of that process—at least as it pertains to my current WIP.
THE GOOD
Strange as it sounds, I actually found working with developmental editor Dawn Reno Langley a good thing. This, despite the number of times that she flagged every mistake I made. While I do have to admit that there were times when my self-confidence level slid into negative digits, the fact that she took the time to explain why certain parts needed to be revised or eliminated proved very instructive. Having Dawn point them out was like taking a crash course in novel composition. Now onto the bad and ugly, which pretty much are the same thing. I pulled up the version of the manuscript that Dawn returned to me, and will (with much shame and chagrin) share her comments.THE BAD AND UGLY
Dialogue tag issues. I tend to make two errors when it comes to these little guys. I either put them too early in the dialogue or I add adverbs or explanations when the emotion should have been perfectly clear by what the character said.Tension deflation tendency. I am guilty of sidetracking the reader by including flashbacks or segues that short-circuit the tension. For example, in an early scene, Rita is baking muffins when she gets a call from her son. Right in the middle of the conversation, I bring in those darned baked goods repeatedly. While they are relevant to the story, they didn’t need to be part of that specific scene.
Lack of character description. I have a habit of not giving the reader good visual images for my characters, especially when I first introduce them. It's not that I don’t know what the characters looked like. I just don’t bother to share it with the readers!
Want to know more about what I learned through this editing process? Read my whole post
on Focus on Fiction!
The Writing Version of the Missing Sock Mystery
The following is an edited excerpt from my post on Focus on Fiction. You can read the full post here.
I’m sure you’ve all heard about the missing stock mystery: how you can put two of each kind in the washer, but by the time you take them out of the dryer, you’re short one or two—or sometimes even more—even though you swear they were all there just a short time ago.
Well, I’m here to tell you that there’s a writing version of the missing sock mystery. I should know because, for the past several months, I’ve been dealing with it as I worked on edits to Reinventing Rita, my debut novel and the first in my Midlife Moxie novel series.
Words, letters, and punctuation marks that I was certain were there when I wrote the copy have since disappeared. And this led to the long, laborious task of re-checking the entire document—sometimes more than once!
Now that I’m done with the proofreading process, I wanted to share some of my tips and tricks I used to make REINVENTING RITA as perfect as possible. (Not to be confused with “perfect” because I am sure all the other authors out there have found minor errors in their books—after they were printed!) Try them the next time you have to review your manuscript!
Word Doc Review
Read the entire manuscript out loud. Every bit of it, including the frontmatter and backmatter. Listen for places where the rhythm is flat, the cadence is off, or something just doesn’t sound right. Sometimes all you need to do is replace a word with one that has the accent on a different syllable or has more or fewer syllables.
Remember: although reading is done with the eyes, there should still be a musicality to the words, phrases, and sentences.
While you’re reading, listen for words, phrases and clichés that tend to show up more than once. I have learned that there are some that I am extremely fond of, and so they work their way into every chapter. I have learned to open a Word doc, and each time I run into one of these, I add it to the list. And then I replace it with a better word.
Now do a search for certain types of punctuation that you might overuse. I knew that I was overly fond of em-dashes, but apparently, I also have a passion for exclamation points, as one of my readers pointed out. A search of both turned up far too many instances that required revision.
Then check spacing and quotation marks. Remember, one space after a period, and no space between em-dashes and the preceding and following word. As for quotation marks, make sure that if it’s supposed to be a single quotation mark, it didn’t turn into a double, and vice versa.
Finally (and I can’t believe I am saying this except it happened to me!), double-check all the characters’ names. Because I am always working on two books at a time—revising one while writing another—sometimes I get a wee bit mixed up. Which is how in one place I changed the name of a character from what it should be to one from the other book. Sheesh.
Also make sure that the spelling of the names is consistent, not “Bobbie” in one place and “Bobbi” in another.
Last but not least, because you are reading it out loud, take your time and say every word. That is the only way you’ll know for a fact that you are reading what is there, not what you think is there.
In the PDF Proof
Start with the easy stuff. Check the running headers and footers to make sure they say what they are supposed to say. If you requested one header on the right page and a different one on the left, check that, too.
Check that each chapter and section starts on the right-hand page. Verify page numbers against the table of contents and know which pages or sections should use Arabic numbers (1, 2, 3), and which should use Roman numerals (i, ii, iii).
Look for any formatting glitches. For example, in my PDF proof, some words were underlined that shouldn’t have been, and in one place, a foreign word that should have been all in italics had some letters italicized and some not.
Then, read the whole thing out loud. Yep. One more time. Just in case there is anything you missed before you sent it off, or in case the techno gremlins stole one of your “socks”—i.e, one of the words that you swear was there but is now gone.
One Final Tip
Don’t go nuts if, when the book comes out, you find a few minor errors that slipped past you. Every book has them, and unless they are significant, most readers won’t even notice them.
Make a note of them, and then, if you feel that you just can’t bear to have them appear on the page, ask your editor about making corrections, or if you’ve self-published, pay for the fixes.
So where I am now on my review process for REINVENTING RITA? Well, I just got an email notifying me that my e-book proofs are ready to review so here we go again…
I’m sure you’ve all heard about the missing stock mystery: how you can put two of each kind in the washer, but by the time you take them out of the dryer, you’re short one or two—or sometimes even more—even though you swear they were all there just a short time ago.
Well, I’m here to tell you that there’s a writing version of the missing sock mystery. I should know because, for the past several months, I’ve been dealing with it as I worked on edits to Reinventing Rita, my debut novel and the first in my Midlife Moxie novel series.
Words, letters, and punctuation marks that I was certain were there when I wrote the copy have since disappeared. And this led to the long, laborious task of re-checking the entire document—sometimes more than once!
Now that I’m done with the proofreading process, I wanted to share some of my tips and tricks I used to make REINVENTING RITA as perfect as possible. (Not to be confused with “perfect” because I am sure all the other authors out there have found minor errors in their books—after they were printed!) Try them the next time you have to review your manuscript!
Word Doc Review
Read the entire manuscript out loud. Every bit of it, including the frontmatter and backmatter. Listen for places where the rhythm is flat, the cadence is off, or something just doesn’t sound right. Sometimes all you need to do is replace a word with one that has the accent on a different syllable or has more or fewer syllables.
Remember: although reading is done with the eyes, there should still be a musicality to the words, phrases, and sentences.
While you’re reading, listen for words, phrases and clichés that tend to show up more than once. I have learned that there are some that I am extremely fond of, and so they work their way into every chapter. I have learned to open a Word doc, and each time I run into one of these, I add it to the list. And then I replace it with a better word.
Now do a search for certain types of punctuation that you might overuse. I knew that I was overly fond of em-dashes, but apparently, I also have a passion for exclamation points, as one of my readers pointed out. A search of both turned up far too many instances that required revision.
Then check spacing and quotation marks. Remember, one space after a period, and no space between em-dashes and the preceding and following word. As for quotation marks, make sure that if it’s supposed to be a single quotation mark, it didn’t turn into a double, and vice versa.
Finally (and I can’t believe I am saying this except it happened to me!), double-check all the characters’ names. Because I am always working on two books at a time—revising one while writing another—sometimes I get a wee bit mixed up. Which is how in one place I changed the name of a character from what it should be to one from the other book. Sheesh.
Also make sure that the spelling of the names is consistent, not “Bobbie” in one place and “Bobbi” in another.
Last but not least, because you are reading it out loud, take your time and say every word. That is the only way you’ll know for a fact that you are reading what is there, not what you think is there.
In the PDF Proof
Start with the easy stuff. Check the running headers and footers to make sure they say what they are supposed to say. If you requested one header on the right page and a different one on the left, check that, too.
Check that each chapter and section starts on the right-hand page. Verify page numbers against the table of contents and know which pages or sections should use Arabic numbers (1, 2, 3), and which should use Roman numerals (i, ii, iii).
Look for any formatting glitches. For example, in my PDF proof, some words were underlined that shouldn’t have been, and in one place, a foreign word that should have been all in italics had some letters italicized and some not.
Then, read the whole thing out loud. Yep. One more time. Just in case there is anything you missed before you sent it off, or in case the techno gremlins stole one of your “socks”—i.e, one of the words that you swear was there but is now gone.
One Final Tip
Don’t go nuts if, when the book comes out, you find a few minor errors that slipped past you. Every book has them, and unless they are significant, most readers won’t even notice them.
Make a note of them, and then, if you feel that you just can’t bear to have them appear on the page, ask your editor about making corrections, or if you’ve self-published, pay for the fixes.
So where I am now on my review process for REINVENTING RITA? Well, I just got an email notifying me that my e-book proofs are ready to review so here we go again…
Cover Reveal for REINVENTING RITA Happening on February 6!
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