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rated it 4 stars
Sep 29, 2020 03:01AM
It’s a little weird, right?!
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Hey Greg!So, for me it’s not necessarily weird, at least I have not gotten to that point...I think I might be about 20 pages from that (ish), but it is overwritten. I think the gay aspect is way too overwritten, without any real pay off. I think it’s just there to be there. This could have been written in 300 pages easy, if not less. Too many characters, where it just goes nowhere. It has a very YA feel, and not in a good way.
