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Almost done with this one. The story flows ok, but definitely not something I will necessarily remember as the year goes on. Good debut, but not great. And, I detest spelling/grammatical errors, which this unfortunately has.
— Feb 02, 2019 08:15PM
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Hey Doug,This one has been one of those that I see brightness in the prose in areas, but I also see areas where there definitely could be work done. This is a debut novel, so there is always time to grow, and learn her craft for a better reading experience for the reader.
I wish that the author would have fleshed the characters out more. I see them being very one dimensional in my opinion. Right now, I would rate this one a three.
