Phew, I'm not sure this is for me. Very simplified and in its simplification it makes a lot of mistakes in the political/economic areas. I think if you include this into a story targeted at a younger audience, you should at least make sure to not be entirely wrong about those issues.
And it's not really helping that I read Robin Hobb and Sherwood Smith at the same time, cause their prose is way more defined.
— Jan 21, 2015 10:42AM
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