I already know this will be a good story, but I am already seeing something that annoys me 35 pages in...the author keeps repeating herself (same sentence/thought with slightly different wording) while characters are speaking, and even just in a paragraph. I always get agitated when I see an author try to make a character make her point two or three times in the span of maybe five sentences.
— Aug 01, 2014 08:41AM
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