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Nathan is on page 19 of 368 of An Untamed State
I like it so far, but lots of little grammatical annoyances. In the space of just a couple pages, two characters "stood, quietly" in a room when they should have "stood quietly" in a room. A character's "fathers' parents" died, even though she has only one father.
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