Great story idea but characters do things that just don't seem realistic - character reaction to the shooting of two bad guys was as if it were an every day occurrence. Characters have important meeting and walk away ignoring the critical item but make a decision on another that had already been made. On top of all this the audio version is done by the author who is an amateur narrator, lip smacking pauses stumbles
— Jan 10, 2016 08:11PM
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