I love the concept, it is powerful, and like nothing I have read before.
I am struggling with the execution of the story, which breaks my heart. It felt very, very messy in the beginning; I found myself rereading the same sentences over and over again in order to understand what was going on/trying to be said. It appears as I got closer to page 47 that the story and execution starts to 'come together'.
— Jan 12, 2018 07:09PM
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