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Things are heating up! Suspense is rising!

Much better now, the beginning gives you fragments of information and details about the story and throughout the later pages starts putting that information into place like a puzzle for a clearer picture! The story is finally getting good and very enticing!

The beginning of the book is confusing and hard to track with. There’s just too many jumps into different time frames and not enough introduction into the story. You’re just thrown right in and expected to know what’s going on. But you continue to read, things start to come into focus of what’s happening in the book and what direction the story is going in.