Not until chapter 6 does this fic gain some semblance of plot, and it comes in an interlude, with the protagonists all off-screen. Until then, it's pretty much all extremely ratty Socratic dialog between a trio of 12-year-olds. Kinda ironic, considering this is the same author who rewrote the first four chapters of HPMoR to address its similar problems. Think I'll keep reading, but deprioritize.
— Nov 03, 2020 05:59PM
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