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"Death and the awful abode of lost souls, whither my weakness long ago had sent him, had changed him for every other eye but mine."

Three stories down. Great stuff so far, and very chilling prose.

A rare DNF for me.

Hmm, cool worldbuilding but not loving it.

"Nomad may roam with Nabuch but let namaan laugh at Jordan! For we, we have taken our sheet upon her stones where we have hanged our hearts in her trees; and we list, as she bibs us, by the waters of babalong." O men.

"Words weigh no more to him than raindrips to Rethfernhim. Which we all like. Rain. When we sleep. Drops. But wait until our sleeping. Drain. Sdops."

The best parts are DQ's lengthy rants and verbal takedowns of Sancho.

I am not impressed so far. These have just been mediocre stories about cartoonishly evil white people. 😑

This is a banger.