The second of the short stories, 'Vanishing Point', is complete. Much like the first story this one had all the twists and turns of a very untwisty turnless thing doing its best impression of a straight line, the plot was full of cliches, and the plot so staged that , was fairly obvious who was to blame, and what had happened before the story was half way thru.
— Oct 18, 2011 07:10PM
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