I am not a nitpicky reader, but I find some prose here problematic and just a bit disgusting.
Examples include: "if you believe the Dutch, but who does."
"Your vote counts double because you are a Caucasian with great hair."
I get it.Maybe the author is being funny and just showing characterization, but I find this problematic none the less. It could easily be avoided. It throws me out of the story. Very unnecessary.
— Jul 04, 2018 01:29PM
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