The writing is still.. it.. reads like the first draft of a NaNo novel. And I'm confused by Violet.. I don't believe her at all. She doesn't feel confused, angry, sad, happy, lustful, anything. She's flat.
Yet I'm kinda hooked. I can't explain it. Clearly Abigail has some raw talent. Will be interesting to see how she has grown as a writer considering how young she was when she wrote this one.
— Oct 29, 2015 03:32AM
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