Although the premise was good, it is feeling like the outline of a story rather than a story itself. It should have been a short story rather than a text that feels written with power points. It’s lacking 3 dimensional views. It feels as if we’re told rather than shown. There is a true lack of description and context. Feels like jumping from a scene to another too fast …
— Jan 10, 2025 05:44AM
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