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Demon-slaying shapeshifter would truly believe that her pseudo-boyfriend would try and kidnap her? Not the biogeneticist’s crew, not the master of the Hellion, her boyfriend. My God, this goes way beyond my ability to willingly suspend disbelief. I loathe quitting on a book, but this one is pushing all of my proverbial buttons…

Okay, I rarely do this, but I’ve got to get this off my chest. I’m 205 pages in and I don’t know if Mrs. Holzner is just a poor writer or if she intentionally made her heroine pathetically stupid. There are several different plot lines at work, and VV seemingly always jumps to conclusions, fails to see obvious connections, and is just plain ignorant. Are we supposed to believe that a successful…TBD