The grammar mistakes are REALLY jarring. There are missing words, mispelled words, misused words, repeated words, comma issues, and some run on sentences that keep pulling me out of the story to make silent corrections. With that said, the story is still really well written and I'm impressed by the solid character development. Please stay good. Do not creep in pesky cliches.
— Jan 01, 2013 09:02AM
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