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Van is on page 123 of 485 of City of Bones (The Mortal Instruments, #1)
Proper nouns are annoying
Action scenes still messy and difficult to follow
Jace is more of a character than Clary
Things that might become plot hooks or character writing OR be annoying and go nowhere
Overall I'm pretty into it though
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Van is on page 60 of 485 of City of Bones (The Mortal Instruments, #1)
Finished Chapter 4.

Plot thickens! I'm intrigued who Jocelyn is, how did Clary's dad die. Looking forward to the next chapter and getting some answers (hopefully). Also, I'm curious how will the exposition be handled.

Language: this book doesn't have beautiful prose - it's mostly character actions and dialogues. Some similes are very awkward. Action scenes struggle with positioning characters clearly in space.
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