Yvonne (It's All About Books) > Recent Status Updates

Four letters: WTAF?!?! I mean, what on earth did I sign up for with this story? If things don't improve, this might just be my second DNF of the month... Sigh.

I feel like I'm reading a completely different book... I'm REALLY disliking this so far. There is something about the writing style and tone that is just off, and the often short and stunted sentences don't help. The emotions come over as bad acting, and the plot jumps all over the place. To make things worse, the plot is just not credible. The question is: DNF, or not DNF and keep torturing myself??

Absolutely hated the writing style in the prologue with the 'a woman, they and he' POV... I do hope this isn't a sign of how the rest of the story is written.