Good, but a difficult style to get used to. (Main character is always "he". Would be clearer who was speaking/acting if it were a capped Godly "He." Seems an attempt to possibly move on from a first-person form. Some nice internal thoughts/moments. Requires some re-reading and inspires some review of the history you already knew. Annoying, but rewarding.
— Feb 15, 2013 08:34PM
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