Why does the writing seem so ChatGPT like one moment she’s on beneath him but then it’s like he’s beneath her when did that happen!?
The switch between povs/chapters are like dreams where one moment you’re here the next it’s different (he says on thing in one chapter then the same scene from diff pov he says diff thing??!) the writing isn’t flowy 😭
— Jun 25, 2025 05:47PM
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