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i do not like that the characters are unnamed. very confusing. the writing is lovely, but the storytelling feels poor to me.

i wish so much that the characters had names. i kinda feel slow not knowing which "her" is being referred to. i get the concept, but it kinda makes my head hurt lol. it took a rly long time to get into the flow of what is even going on besides random thoughts. again, i get the concept, but omg it happens for a whiiiile.