Enjoyed the overall plot of the story; the plot twist caught me by surprise. In general, it was a good short story. The pacing felt balanced, giving descriptive details to give you an idea of what was taking place.
The only negative review I have is the dialogue. I was not a fan; it felt rough around the edges, intertwined with unrelatable characters. Yet I still enjoyed the payoff!
— Oct 20, 2025 04:24AM
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