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"We walk in ancient dreams..."

Bonkers! 😍

Page 150. A glimmer of a plot has emerged 🤣

There's a knock at the door. Two pages later, she opens the door.

134 pages in. Maybe 10 pages of actual story. This is shit.

🙄 This is why I don't like first person perspectives, and this book has four of them. Long ass drawn out overly descriptive paragraphs. You could say it all in a sentence. So much padding already. It's a ⭐ at best so far.