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The book is driving me crazy. So far it has several language issues, where it is clear the author was thinking in Spanish and just replaced the words in English. The dynamic between the characters is quite toxic, with poorly handled codependency with feable motivations at best. There's no believable argument and it severely lacks originality. So far the book reads like Prince of Persia, Johnny Wick and Mad Max.

Terribly hard to read.

Not getting any better. I'm having to fight my way through it, and I'm not even 10% into it. But it's a novel author. Hopefully it improves further on.

It doesn't start well. The style of the author hast't formed yet, and it makes the work quite hard to read. Not to mention that so far it seems like some poorly described online game. So far neither character is appealing nor they generate empathy.

So far I'm really liking it.