Hoo boy. Twenty pages in and I can tell you already, this is gonna be rough.
The formatting, dialogue, action, characterization - all of it is... woof.
Just by way of an example, any conversation that is more than a single line of dialogue drops all quotation marks and character attributions and is presented as a bulleted list of statements and you just have to guess who is saying what.
I could go on. And on.
— Sep 29, 2025 10:00PM
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