Status Updates From The Taking of Jemima Boone:...

Thoughts to remember: the terms colonist, settler, and American were not interchangeable at this time. Calls Rebecca's group "mutineers" and not until much later giving the reason. Trying to fit in information without actually placing it where it makes sense (bounces from Boone in captivity to rumors of Jemima's paternal status and social maneuverings of the fort? This should have been placed elsewhere/earlier?)

This is this guy's first nonfiction foray and I'm thinking he should stick to fiction. Sir does not know how to link the information he wants to provide in a cohesive way. It feels all over the place.