Status Updates From Back to the Start

This close to DNFing every time I hear "the brunette" or "the blonde" as descriptions for the leads. We know their names!! Just use those.

I'm about halfway done. I am enjoying the story, but I could tell it was self-published because there is only one way to describe Fallon, "the blonde," and one way to describe Remy, "the brunette." If the book has 330 pages, each descriptor is used 660 times. I might bail just because of this.