Status Updates From The Last Astronaut

It started fairly well but now it's a lot of background, introducing characters who (I assume) will be the primary characters. There's also a kind of oral history to it. When a new character is introduced, he/she has italicized text to show that he/she is responding to a question from ??? someone. Not crazy about that. Mostly right now bored off my ass.

Well hopefully a typo or the narrator misspoke but a Hohmann transfer was called a “hoffman” transfer. Hope the science doesn’t go to s#%*. And if it does hope the story is good.