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Ellie
is 12% done
This just isn't reading very well. Maybe the author should have got someone from Scotland, or even just someone from the UK to read it through and check the dialogue between the characters, it has some words and phrases that simply do not fit either the location or the time.
— Sep 07, 2020 01:28PM
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Ellie
is 11% done
11% in. "The Scots were more formal than the British" - last time I checked Scotland is part of Britain, and has been since the early 1700s.
— Sep 06, 2020 02:06PM
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Ellie
is 7% done
7%in. Hmm. First impressions- is this author going to weave a believable tale? I'm pretty sure you wouldn't put your teapot on an antimacassar....
— Sep 06, 2020 07:44AM
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