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Missy Kavanaugh
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Reading this one concurrently with Francine Prose's Reading like a Writer Book. And like that book, this one also inspires.
— Jul 07, 2020 07:11AM
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Nice excerpt from All The Pretty Horses illustrating the rhythm of sentences:
They rode out along the fenceline and across the open pastureland. The leather creaked in the morning cold. They pushed the horses into a lope. The lights fell away behind them. They rode out on the high prairie where they slowed the horses to a walk and the stars swarmed around them out of the blackness...(cont'd below)
— Jun 11, 2020 07:27PM
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They rode out along the fenceline and across the open pastureland. The leather creaked in the morning cold. They pushed the horses into a lope. The lights fell away behind them. They rode out on the high prairie where they slowed the horses to a walk and the stars swarmed around them out of the blackness...(cont'd below)
