Status Updates From The Truth According to Ember

This is the most robotic sex scene I’ve ever read

If I weren’t already more than a third of the way through this I would dnf it

This is irritating me so much……. Not loving the last section of this book at all. it better be a happy ending

The story itself is decent but the writing is so juvenile. Why is the author writing like “She locked the door and left the house. She started to walk down the street. She loved to walk down this street.” ????

Can’t tell if the narrator is talking weird or if the writing is shit