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This book could do with serious editing.
Lots of clunky grammar, words used in the wrong context.
Characters acting out of character.
Very 2-D characters
Very juvenile
Fake drama
Caricature of English gentry
Hated when the culprit spilled his guts and started to explain everything the minute he's found out
— Mar 14, 2024 11:10AM
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Lots of clunky grammar, words used in the wrong context.
Characters acting out of character.
Very 2-D characters
Very juvenile
Fake drama
Caricature of English gentry
Hated when the culprit spilled his guts and started to explain everything the minute he's found out














