Status Updates From Gone to the Forest

La historia es densa y casi desagradable. El. Wiki padre solo uso como careta al hijo para adentrar a la mujer y enredarse con ella. Al aparecer una cosa del volcán erupcionado y una orgia en mal término el viejo huyó con la mujer y dejó a cargo al hijo que se tiró a la tristeza e hizo nada. Volvieron a que le viejo casi muera y la mujer tendrá un hijo de esa orgia

Parece una historia de un viejo con visión empresarial en su terreno inmenso con dedicación al turismos de peces suyo criados y su hijo que suena apagado y a la sombra del viejo. Han sido invitados dos amigos del viejo y una misteriosa chica

A note on fragments as a "stylistic" choice": I feel like fragments should be used to emphasize certain things or scenes and shouldn't be relied on as heavily as Kitamura does. Fragments are great if you can slip a few past the reader for emphasis, but if used too much, they're distracting. If you use fragments for rhythm, it might ruin the novel's "flow". There were plenty of instances where this was the case.

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Not very impressed with this one so far, though it's fulfilling my requirement of wanting a quick read that I can finish by tomorrow. The writing is a bit strange, and I've just started noticing use of full stops where I would use commas, e.g. "He lay in bed and his dreams multiplied as he watched the hill crawl with new life. Hardly knowing if it was hallucination or not.".

De esos libros que no terminas porque amas como te cuentan las cosas.