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Kersten Mason
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A note on fragments as a "stylistic" choice": I feel like fragments should be used to emphasize certain things or scenes and shouldn't be relied on as heavily as Kitamura does. Fragments are great if you can slip a few past the reader for emphasis, but if used too much, they're distracting. If you use fragments for rhythm, it might ruin the novel's "flow". There were plenty of instances where this was the case.
— Sep 08, 2017 11:15AM
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