I’ve enjoyed reading this story and seeing what happens with Sebastian and how he deals with Mister R. The story is engaging and interesting, the characters are real, the plot is believable, and the pace is quick. Your book also has an incredibly important message that you tell well.
The character of Sebastian is lifelike. I genuinely like him. The character of Mister R is also intriguing and mysterious. As a reader, I look forward to reading more about them as the story unfolds. The friendship between Sebastian and Cliff is genuine; good job with the banter. The pages with them flow smoothly.
I’ve enjoyed reading this story and seeing what happens with Sebastian and how he deals with Mister R. The story is engaging and interesting, the characters are real, the plot is believable, and the pace is quick. Your book also has an incredibly important message that you tell well.
The character of Sebastian is lifelike. I genuinely like him. The character of Mister R is also intriguing and mysterious. As a reader, I look forward to reading more about them as the story unfolds. The friendship between Sebastian and Cliff is genuine; good job with the banter. The pages with them flow smoothly.
Chad, editor