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Elaine
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Jan 24, 2009 10:07PM

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I'll start:
I was upstairs on the computer when I smelt the savory aroma drifting from the kitchen. I let the scent guide me downstairs, where I saw it. The light brown, fluffy chassis was illuminating the senses, tempting me to relish in its perfection. It feels velvety and smooth. As I cut it open, smoke rises from the saccharine center. As I chew, I nibble on the pulpy liquid with hints of cinnamon and apple. The feathery crust adds an earthy texture. I eat slowly, to relish in its absolute satisfaction.
Jesi wrote: "How about writing a little paragprah describing something without actually saying what it is, just showing it. (Prompt I just did in class lol)
I'll start:
I was upstairs on the computer when I s..."
I love this paragraph! It pulled me into to a word picture complete with stimulation of my scences. Thanks! Malika
I'll start:
I was upstairs on the computer when I s..."
I love this paragraph! It pulled me into to a word picture complete with stimulation of my scences. Thanks! Malika