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Writers A-G > Ally (Aka Tick-Tock's) Writing cubi...and I'm too busy and stressed to write!!! GRR!!!

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message 1: by [deleted user] (last edited Jan 23, 2009 05:40PM) (new)

This is where I'll put links to my short stories and write little poems and stuff every once in a while. :D
Word per day: 150.


message 2: by [deleted user] (new)

Jan 23, 2009
Am going to make another chapter in Drops Of Blood...
***EDIT****
Here it is. The chapter: I growled. "What kind of sick joke is this?!" I asked angrily. The woman smirked. "Helena, you know what you are, don't deny i, it's real. This isn't a stupid joke, Helena. You're a bloodsucker, a vampire." Once again, my breath caught, but I knew this time it didn't matter. I started breathing again, and I saw a girl on the road. My feet moved as fast as impossible, and I jumped the girl. This girl seemed much older, and she seemed to be stronger, because she struggled at first. I finished my meal, then realized I was looking down on my best friend. "No." I tried to cry, but tears never came.

(The shortest chapter in the story other than the prologue.)
The Drops of Blood link: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

***EDIT!***
I am currently writing another story called, "The Last Dance." I plan on picking my poetry back up very soon.


message 3: by [deleted user] (new)

113 word count...oh, well...


message 4: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller | 4362 comments good work, Ally! Keep it up! You can do it!


message 5: by Roni, Bigfoot makes an excellent character (new)

Roni (v_a_b) | 727 comments Mod
oooh. I like the title of this topic. :D and I like the excerpt that you posted. :D :D :P :D :P :D sorry, sorry, I just went on a random smiley rant for a second or two.


message 6: by [deleted user] (new)

;P
I was at dad's on Saturday and Sunday, so it's a zero, zero...:(
I'll try harder today.


message 7: by [deleted user] (last edited Jan 26, 2009 06:03PM) (new)

Jan 26, 2009
114 word count.
New chapter in Drops of Blood.
***EDIT***Excerpt:
I stood there, wide-eyed, staring at my best friend since kindergarten, biting my lip, wanting to cry. The woman behind me laughed a beautiful, evil laugh that shook my spine in a way I would never be able to describe. I snarled. "You think this is funny, huh?" I whispered.Then I looked a the blood on my hands, and I wiped my mouth. "Idiot, bloodthirsty idiot!" I said quietly to myself. She chuckled. "Yup. No way around that." I hissed and jumped on her, then snarled. She yelped in pain. I jumped off for a minute. "So, I'm stronger than you, huh?" I asked with a smirk. I then laughed quietly. "This is great."


message 8: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller | 4362 comments you write horror, huh?


message 9: by [deleted user] (new)

Yup.
I follow in my Daddy's footsteps.
^^


message 10: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller | 4362 comments oooh...is he published/are you?


message 11: by [deleted user] (new)

Dad's published! In magazines.
I am...but it was a 4th grade project. Does tht count?


message 12: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller | 4362 comments sure thing!


message 13: by Mimi (new)

Mimi (mimibird) yay!!


message 14: by Roni, Bigfoot makes an excellent character (new)

Roni (v_a_b) | 727 comments Mod
oh, cool! I LOVE hooror stories, much more than movies.


message 15: by Riley (new)

Riley (booksarecool) Yes, they seem much more realistic on the page, at least for me.


message 16: by [deleted user] (new)

:D
But u can' read my dad's stuff...It would lead to my last name ending up on the internet...:(


message 17: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller | 4362 comments lol.... no worries.


message 18: by [deleted user] (new)

My 4th grade book is about Candyland and evil pixies...lolz


message 19: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller | 4362 comments um....wow....




message 20: by [deleted user] (new)

...lolz


message 21: by [deleted user] (new)

So lazy tht I didn't do any today...


message 22: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller | 4362 comments aww....


message 23: by [deleted user] (new)

Jan, 29.

148 word count.
Another chapter in Drops Of Blood:
Vengeance, and Maybe Murder.

She looked at me, horrified.
"Get off of me!" she said, trying to push me, but I pinned her down.
"Haha." I said evilly. "Just shut up, the pain'll be over soon, I promise!" I laughed. I then ripped her arm off, no problem. The ripping made a big metal noise, and I threw the arm over my shoulder as she screamed. I smirked. I ripped the other one off clean. She screamed and I put it in the pile. I rolled my eyes at her screaming, and pulled her foot off. But she somehow pushed me off, and I snarled. she laughed, and I jumped on her. I pulled her head off, and she screamed louder. I once again rolled my eyes, then lit a fire.
"Bye!" I said in a little-kid sing-song voice. I threw all the pieces in the fire, and smirked.


message 24: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (Taleoflostink) | 1367 comments hi!


message 25: by [deleted user] (new)

hi.


message 26: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (Taleoflostink) | 1367 comments great writing!


message 27: by [deleted user] (new)

thnx!


message 28: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (Taleoflostink) | 1367 comments teehee


message 29: by [deleted user] (new)

:D


message 30: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (Taleoflostink) | 1367 comments i like smiley faces....


message 31: by [deleted user] (new)

:D:D:D:D:D:DDID U LIKE THT?


message 32: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (Taleoflostink) | 1367 comments yer


message 33: by [deleted user] (new)

lolz


message 34: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (Taleoflostink) | 1367 comments *D


message 35: by [deleted user] (new)

Did u read my whole story or jus tht chap.?


message 36: by [deleted user] (new)

I made a new story! It's not on here, bu it's going to be soon..my word count on that story is probably pass...It's Untitled, and I need help!!


message 37: by [deleted user] (new)

kk i'll help the best i can!


message 38: by [deleted user] (new)

It's about me becoming a vampire, and somehow being able to survive off of blood once a week...


message 39: by [deleted user] (new)

So you need a title?


message 40: by [deleted user] (new)

Yup.


message 41: by [deleted user] (new)

Blood Deprived?

Is that basically what the whole story is about? Or is there something in there that could trigger a title? Because sometimes there's something that the character mentions or says, that could become the title of the book. Like "Twilight" for instance. That's said during the book, and so it's called Twilight.


message 42: by [deleted user] (new)

I haven't finished it yet.


message 43: by [deleted user] (new)

okay.


message 44: by [deleted user] (new)

...


message 45: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller | 4362 comments *****


message 46: by [deleted user] (new)

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message 47: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller | 4362 comments okay?


message 48: by [deleted user] (new)

IDK.


message 49: by [deleted user] (new)

PARTAY!


message 50: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller | 4362 comments COOL!


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