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Ally (Aka Tick-Tock's) Writing cubi...and I'm too busy and stressed to write!!! GRR!!!
Jan 23, 2009
Am going to make another chapter in Drops Of Blood...
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Here it is. The chapter: I growled. "What kind of sick joke is this?!" I asked angrily. The woman smirked. "Helena, you know what you are, don't deny i, it's real. This isn't a stupid joke, Helena. You're a bloodsucker, a vampire." Once again, my breath caught, but I knew this time it didn't matter. I started breathing again, and I saw a girl on the road. My feet moved as fast as impossible, and I jumped the girl. This girl seemed much older, and she seemed to be stronger, because she struggled at first. I finished my meal, then realized I was looking down on my best friend. "No." I tried to cry, but tears never came.
(The shortest chapter in the story other than the prologue.)
The Drops of Blood link: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...
***EDIT!***
I am currently writing another story called, "The Last Dance." I plan on picking my poetry back up very soon.
Am going to make another chapter in Drops Of Blood...
***EDIT****
Here it is. The chapter: I growled. "What kind of sick joke is this?!" I asked angrily. The woman smirked. "Helena, you know what you are, don't deny i, it's real. This isn't a stupid joke, Helena. You're a bloodsucker, a vampire." Once again, my breath caught, but I knew this time it didn't matter. I started breathing again, and I saw a girl on the road. My feet moved as fast as impossible, and I jumped the girl. This girl seemed much older, and she seemed to be stronger, because she struggled at first. I finished my meal, then realized I was looking down on my best friend. "No." I tried to cry, but tears never came.
(The shortest chapter in the story other than the prologue.)
The Drops of Blood link: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...
***EDIT!***
I am currently writing another story called, "The Last Dance." I plan on picking my poetry back up very soon.
good work, Ally! Keep it up! You can do it!
Mod
;P
I was at dad's on Saturday and Sunday, so it's a zero, zero...:(
I'll try harder today.
I was at dad's on Saturday and Sunday, so it's a zero, zero...:(
I'll try harder today.
Jan 26, 2009
114 word count.
New chapter in Drops of Blood.
***EDIT***Excerpt:
I stood there, wide-eyed, staring at my best friend since kindergarten, biting my lip, wanting to cry. The woman behind me laughed a beautiful, evil laugh that shook my spine in a way I would never be able to describe. I snarled. "You think this is funny, huh?" I whispered.Then I looked a the blood on my hands, and I wiped my mouth. "Idiot, bloodthirsty idiot!" I said quietly to myself. She chuckled. "Yup. No way around that." I hissed and jumped on her, then snarled. She yelped in pain. I jumped off for a minute. "So, I'm stronger than you, huh?" I asked with a smirk. I then laughed quietly. "This is great."
114 word count.
New chapter in Drops of Blood.
***EDIT***Excerpt:
I stood there, wide-eyed, staring at my best friend since kindergarten, biting my lip, wanting to cry. The woman behind me laughed a beautiful, evil laugh that shook my spine in a way I would never be able to describe. I snarled. "You think this is funny, huh?" I whispered.Then I looked a the blood on my hands, and I wiped my mouth. "Idiot, bloodthirsty idiot!" I said quietly to myself. She chuckled. "Yup. No way around that." I hissed and jumped on her, then snarled. She yelped in pain. I jumped off for a minute. "So, I'm stronger than you, huh?" I asked with a smirk. I then laughed quietly. "This is great."
Yup.
I follow in my Daddy's footsteps.
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I follow in my Daddy's footsteps.
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Dad's published! In magazines.
I am...but it was a 4th grade project. Does tht count?
I am...but it was a 4th grade project. Does tht count?
Mod
Yes, they seem much more realistic on the page, at least for me.
:D
But u can' read my dad's stuff...It would lead to my last name ending up on the internet...:(
But u can' read my dad's stuff...It would lead to my last name ending up on the internet...:(
My 4th grade book is about Candyland and evil pixies...lolz
So lazy tht I didn't do any today...
Jan, 29.
148 word count.
Another chapter in Drops Of Blood:
Vengeance, and Maybe Murder.
She looked at me, horrified.
"Get off of me!" she said, trying to push me, but I pinned her down.
"Haha." I said evilly. "Just shut up, the pain'll be over soon, I promise!" I laughed. I then ripped her arm off, no problem. The ripping made a big metal noise, and I threw the arm over my shoulder as she screamed. I smirked. I ripped the other one off clean. She screamed and I put it in the pile. I rolled my eyes at her screaming, and pulled her foot off. But she somehow pushed me off, and I snarled. she laughed, and I jumped on her. I pulled her head off, and she screamed louder. I once again rolled my eyes, then lit a fire.
"Bye!" I said in a little-kid sing-song voice. I threw all the pieces in the fire, and smirked.
148 word count.
Another chapter in Drops Of Blood:
Vengeance, and Maybe Murder.
She looked at me, horrified.
"Get off of me!" she said, trying to push me, but I pinned her down.
"Haha." I said evilly. "Just shut up, the pain'll be over soon, I promise!" I laughed. I then ripped her arm off, no problem. The ripping made a big metal noise, and I threw the arm over my shoulder as she screamed. I smirked. I ripped the other one off clean. She screamed and I put it in the pile. I rolled my eyes at her screaming, and pulled her foot off. But she somehow pushed me off, and I snarled. she laughed, and I jumped on her. I pulled her head off, and she screamed louder. I once again rolled my eyes, then lit a fire.
"Bye!" I said in a little-kid sing-song voice. I threw all the pieces in the fire, and smirked.
Did u read my whole story or jus tht chap.?
I made a new story! It's not on here, bu it's going to be soon..my word count on that story is probably pass...It's Untitled, and I need help!!
It's about me becoming a vampire, and somehow being able to survive off of blood once a week...
Blood Deprived?
Is that basically what the whole story is about? Or is there something in there that could trigger a title? Because sometimes there's something that the character mentions or says, that could become the title of the book. Like "Twilight" for instance. That's said during the book, and so it's called Twilight.
Is that basically what the whole story is about? Or is there something in there that could trigger a title? Because sometimes there's something that the character mentions or says, that could become the title of the book. Like "Twilight" for instance. That's said during the book, and so it's called Twilight.
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